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Hee hee, of course I got full marks in my own evaluation.

Are you sure Treasure Book is not popular? I'm afraid that the poster wrote and then stopped writing. If this is written down, the idea of ​​​​really making a big deal is very good.

The heroine is based on Ochiai Fan Yan, the hero is changed from the teacher in the manga to a classmate, and the background is changed from Japanese comics to the city, which is innovative, but the rhythm of the dialogue between the two people in the front is a bit slow. The scene is fixed, the time is slow, and there are only two characters on the stage, so dialogue becomes the main part. If you can't have interesting dialogue similar to the "Monogatari Series", then you should clarify the main line of the story (build a consensus with readers), otherwise the story will be unattractive from an original point of view, and readers who can't match the frequency will often leave here.

Come on, let me comment on this book. The main plot is the redemption story of the protagonist group, who constantly explores their true side, and learns to see and accept it. The story style is on par with Su Qing's. You can read it slowly. There are counter-routines, laughs, but there are also uncomfortable points (some settings). I haven't seen any tears yet. The truths told in the novel are indeed somewhat profound. (But what I said is just that. Very revealing) For example, it talks about what love is, the various forms of love... In the later stage, I don't know how the male protagonist plans to deal with the female protagonists. It seems that they can only pester the male protagonist. In fact, it is good to have a harem with just a few female protagonists. It depends on how the ending is handled. Just don't make it a pseudo-ending (only redemption, the ending is open-ended). It is very annoying. In short, the author's writing is good and worth pursuing, come on!

A gal-like rooftop unfolds (vision noe), a deskmate with a dark heart, the unknown past of the male protagonist, a childhood sweetheart and a tsundere young lady (the elements are full, the author must have played with many gals), it still has a flavor, I hope to be on the airwaves

This book is the most beautiful one I have found in a while. It is a treasure. Ahhhhhhh, not enough, not enough at all, it's so beautiful

Life is hard and difficult. This book is a bit too tragic for me. There is a feeling of resonance in many places. Because I have some common experiences with the male protagonist, it is easy to relate to it. The more you relate to it, the more you can feel the heavy feeling. Until I read the latest chapter, most of the feelings this book gave me was extremely depressing. The writing is still very good, although some places are a bit abstract. I hope it will be a little better later. This is one of the few books that did not make me feel sad but regretted that it was depressing [face covering]

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I sincerely hope that the author can persevere and give this work, no, it is an epic to me, a perfect ending. This is the only work besides "My 26-year-old Female Tenant" that has touched my heart and written many stories that I yearn for. Some people say psychological dialogue There are too many, but for me, we are not the protagonist, and we do not have unwavering determination. When faced with a decision, we will have uncontrollable and irregular thoughts in our hearts. For the younger style, it is this story that is better than reality, and more realistic than fairy tales, that can make us feel more regretful. You've already said it, this is a work that commemorates your youth, so there's no need to care about other people's opinions. Finally, no matter how this work ends, I support you. It is no longer just a work in my heart.

Cool! So cool! The writing style is at the pinnacle among Guoqing!

Yes, it's a treasure. I hope it won't be like Su Cheng's book, which has more than 2 million words and is still being read (face covering), just like stock trading. Finally, let's change the cover Congratulations to the author fire

From the perspective of a novel, this book is well written and has a helpful plot. The only drawback may be the protagonist's low self-esteem, his verbal frivolity, and his teenage impulsiveness. This may not be very flattering in the current atmosphere where highly intelligent, decisive, and calm characters are popular, but the protagonist is only a high school student anyway, with no rebirth and no system, so the protagonist's behavior is the most normal. This is a young boy with ordinary youth but extraordinary. I think this kind of character is very good (but the verbal flirtation is really disappointing) But the author said that this book is to commemorate his youth and is autobiographical. I can regard this book as an extension of the author's youth. In fact, I have no right to evaluate other people's experiences, but the author has already written this book, so I expressed my opinions from the perspective of a novel. This book will definitely get a score of 9 or above. It is still less than 8. I personally think that the traffic is too poor. I still hope that this book can be seen by more people. I hope that everyone who sees this book review will read this book. After all, it is indeed worth reading. It is not too late to abandon it until it is really shocked. I will also recommend this book. (Actually, it's okay for Ah Ben to finish this book first, which can attract some book lovers) finally I wish Ah Beng's life will get better and better I wish you all the best By the way, there seems to be a plot about the knotted wings, but that shouldn't be counted, right? ꒰꒪꒫꒪⌯꒱

To be honest, my impression of this book is excellent. The rating of 7.1 Is a bit low. The writing style and structure are beyond most of Tomato's books. I personally like this kind of novel with a slow storyline. It can relieve stress and kill time. It is a novel that I personally recognize. (This is my first book review on Tomato, like a serious primary school student [smile])

Very good novel that made my brain spin. Also, can the author accept them all? I feel that since she has created such a vivid heroine, she shouldn't have any regrets [Sending my heart][Sending my heart][Sending my heart]

I saw the chapter between Yan Twelve Moon and Xiao Shen last night, and when I looked back it seemed that there was no highlight of Yue'er, so I didn't want to read it for the time being. But to borrow a sentence from the book review, I would like to thank the author for creating Yan Twelve Moon. This book is indeed my favorite kind of novel that is a bit literary, a bit funny, and a bit youthful pain literature, but in the end it has a happy ending. But I really like Xiaoyue, and I don't want to read it after seeing that she has no highlights. This book will still stay on my bookshelf. Maybe one day, I will open this book again and see my favorite Xiaoyue, and I will read it. So now, goodbye, Xiao Shen Xiaoyue

The content of the book is very well written. I don't think it's a stream of consciousness at all, and the pace is relatively slow. Unlike most fast-paced industrial saccharine books nowadays, it feels very comfortable to read, and the characters are also very three-dimensional, which is in sharp contrast to most of the facial makeup characters nowadays. In short, the author needs to work hard, don't end it [laughing][laughing][laughing]

I'll give it five stars. It's well-written and touching. Among the books I've read, this book is one of the books that allows me to experience the feeling of being there. When reading certain chapters in this book, I always feel a chill in my heart. Come on, author!

It's super good-looking, and the characters are all vividly drawn. I hope the author can give them a happy ending. Finally, I wish the author all the best and good health. (One more thing, please update quickly! I want to read Tiantian's campus chapter now!!!)

The charm of light novels, I think I have a tricky taste, but this novel can still fascinate me (compared to the books on my bookshelf that I read when I first entered the novel circle, they were hit by dimensionality reduction [laughing and crying])

As a bookworm who has only read online articles for more than ten years since childhood, I felt that for the first time I had encountered a work that can be engraved in my life. In fact, I spent two consecutive days chasing the second half of the book. I dare not say that I have a deep feeling about the youth of this book, but comparatively speaking, this is the first time I read this kind of work that made me feel entangled in my heart (I used to pick some bad street novels). I am still a student, and I have been a bit misogynistic since I was a child. This is probably why I am particularly attracted to some online novels with multiple female protagonists. However, after more than ten years of experience, it is only in the past year that I have gradually begun to have a real understanding of love through reading and life (of course, I still only dare to say that I have a crush), until this book gave me a critical blow from the so-called youth. Ah, I mentioned the entanglement before. In fact, I could not help but squirm when I was watching several girls and Xiao Shen. It was mainly because Xiao Hua felt uncomfortable with Xiao Shen when she assumed that she would fall in love with another boy in the future. This is probably what caught me the most, because it was very different from the routine and cool stories I had read before, "Of course the heroine will do it." "I am devoted to the male protagonist forever" and the like, (like the threesome between Xiaohua and the classmate whose name I can't remember. Maybe it's because they have a strong sense of separation between text and reality. If you see it in reality, you won't feel any awkwardness, but if you see such a plot in text, you will be a little jealous and dissatisfied? Maybe? (Put it in, hehe)) There are also some extra words from Laobeng, which actually caused a slight shock to my young mind. As a male high school boy who had trouble talking to female classmates in real life until a year ago (not to mention holding hands) (actually I started reading online articles in the third grade), I still couldn't help but feel huge regrets, probably because I read these stories in words. . . But after all, I can no longer read those cool articles like before. Regret is also a part of life. Is it the value gained in exchange for the passing of time? Finally, regarding the extra story, although I didn't realize that it was going to be the finale when I asked for leave during the Chinese New Year, it was so nice to be able to eat such sweets. In fact, I only have a rough idea of ​​the timing clues for the extra episode, so I'm a bit confused. As a work that commemorates youth, it should be understood that when Shen Qiye is ready, this youth work will naturally end. As for the subsequent extra chapters, I understand that they do not belong to this work, but they should be Shen Qiye's life. In fact, when I first read a few chapters, I simply regarded them as a buffer for the end. In my heart, I was secretly thinking that this might not be Shen Qiye's true ending. But, I was really stunned when I saw the death of Ye Wei in the Ye Prisoner's Record later. I felt quite complicated. How should I put it? This is the first time in ten years of online writing that I have read about the heroine's death. It is the first time for real. After all, I saw Ye Wei's death at the age of 20 and her death at the age of 80 within three hours in a row. I was so anxious that I wrote this review immediately. It's weird, of course. I was a bit confused by this girl in front of me, but... Well. After all, as the introduction says, this is the polygonal redemptive love balabala of the villains, which is a work that has been completed when the New Year boy Shen Qiye is ready. I have just read a few chapters of the new book, and I probably understand the positioning of these extra chapters. Although the sudden change of the world view of love in the daily world of science fiction apocalypse is a bit hasty!? Besides, we have already reached this point in science fiction. Can we really not let Xiao Shen, Xiaobai, Xiaohua, Xiaoyan Xiaoye show up again!!! Let me complain, in the final analysis, back to this love light novel, they who belong to the story of this novel are just flawed characters. Ordinary people, die of old age, illness and death, carrying the feelings between him and them without regrets, or perhaps with regrets like ccc, towards the end of life. A common destination is actually much better than an empty ending like eternal life, isn't it? (Woo, even though I am a happy bookworm, I still want that. How about you, Brother Beng, put a hat on them with the responsibility of saving mankind and let them continue on?) (Just kidding) Well, there are actually a lot of emotions stuck but I don't know how to express them. As expected, I still don't know how to use words (sadness). In short, this book really shocked my youth half a month after I became an adult. It was inevitable that I would take the place of Xiao Shen, or I could erase my own subjective consciousness and truly integrate into this story. In the end, it gave me such an unforgettable mark in my life filled with Internet articles. After coming out of the story, I regret that I can't continue to freely integrate into the story and continue to feel the love between him and them. You and I (?), Maybe I will not be able to stop fantasizing about the non-existent college chapter in the future. No, my thoughts at the moment are like this, my emotions tell me that this is the case. I can't imagine their youth after that, and I don't have to imagine those [youth]. Ah, I finally figured out what to say. No matter where the [story] of this novel, which I still don't know the official name of, ends up, no matter what the [ending] of their [life] looks like, at least I want to believe, a somewhat fragile belief compared to the reality, that Xiao Shen achieved the happy ending and became the male protagonist. There is no other better man, no one gave up, and they said goodbye. They really had three daughters and one son, and Ye Zui also lived happily to the end. They all probably hate separation and regret, and I don't like be either. Life is short, and happiness has an end. I really care about Ye Wei's death. How should I put it? In fact, I am still quite dissatisfied with the result of this foreshadowing. I still hope that even if they are written to the ending, it should be described in a positive way, be happy, leave together, rush to the end together or one after another, and stay together on the other side until the end of everything. That is the ending of a happy ending, isn't it? Rather than paving the way for other stories or setting the stage. Sorry, I'm a little impatient Shen Qiye, Lu Shihua, Bai Xiao, Yan Twelve, Ye Wei. Perhaps in my future, in my rosy youth that has not come yet or may not come at all, I will still think of these from time to time. I will not secretly make up other stories for them. This is the first time I am so confident. I sincerely hope that Beng will meet the person who can be together until the end.

Think they are in love? No, it's actually those four people who are working hard to weave the mess created by them (including but not limited to them) into separable threads (what am I talking about)

Ahhhhh, the author's writing is really beautiful! I haven't seen such a good light novel in a long time! Don't be deceived by the name. The name is also super interesting and the content is super interesting [Love]

Can anyone tell me what the name of the god is? I have been looking for this book for a long time. You told me that this book is called Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh Oh [face covering]

Author, is it a single heroine? It must be, right?

It seems ok so far, looking forward to further development Beautiful, no need to say more

This novel has some radio waves. Those who are familiar with it will find it interesting, while those who are not familiar with it will find it boring. Personally, I like it very much.

Great, great, great. I always hope that the story can have a perfect ending, but most of the time the reality is cruel, so I like reading light novels and happy endings. Looking at the back, there are some small knives in the work, and you can vaguely feel the pain of the protagonist. (There is also some sentimentality about the author's experience) I have always agreed with the saying "Adults should have their own fairy tales." This book is great!

The author is very interesting. This novel has a relatively light style and good writing style. Readers who have a preference for light novels should not miss it. The author writes that so far, the control of the protagonist's character and world view is still good, and there are basically no poisonous points. However, I hope the author can complete the outline as soon as possible. For novels of this style, whether it has multiple endings, a harem or stock trading, it is acceptable, but there should be no fake harem or no heroine. Come on! (PS: Author, I have a small question, will there be a sister-type character? [Make faces] I want to see it)

How to put it, although this kind of story-like communication has a very Japanese-style feel, but don't always struggle with the meaning. How can you struggle with the meaning of a dark little white rabbit who is dying? Write less. In fact, everyone will like to read it if you focus on other female characters. After all, the dark white rabbit in this kind of novel is actually a female character with bipolar disorder. Not everyone will like it. I like Bai Xiao.

It is a very good light-oriented novel. It unfolds the narrative from multiple perspectives and different characters' perspectives, enriching the characters, whether it is from the perspective of the male protagonist or the perspective of Xiaohua. It is a pity that in today's fast food era, it may be difficult for this kind of novel to become popular.