William Granger is the twin brother of Hermione Granger. He and his sister Hermione went to the Bead Curtain for adventure and experience. The protagonist may be a bit childish in the early stage, but it will be better in the later stage. After all, he will grow up. In the later stage, Niyali's housekeeper will not follow him on the adventure. Experience the world: Yimei Daochang, Marvel, Super God, Titan and Dragon King in progress
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At the beginning, the abilities were given too much, and the character design was weak. As a result, I don't know how to write it later, just like a big-headed son.
The male protagonist is described as a fool...
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I don't like the idiot protagonist. I'm speechless. I don't distinguish between priorities.
The writing is so bad that I can't stand it anymore
Is the protagonist a waste? He should be more mature and take the initiative to learn and control. Isn't it good?
Suddenly gone?
What's going on? It's been taken off the shelves?
I gave away a girl at the beginning, and the golden finger was used and controlled at will, and the protagonist's authority was directly reduced. I don't know what to say.
The setting is not bad, but the writing is not good, the characterization is too toxic, and the world view is also problematic.
At the beginning, the abilities were given too much, and the character design was weak. As a result, I don't know how to write it later, just like a big-headed son.
The male protagonist is described as a fool... Writers can click on my avatar and enter any topic in the book recommendation topic area on my homepage. You can check out what I personally recommend... Hogwarts fanfic. You can see how others describe it.
I don't like the idiot protagonist. I'm speechless. I don't distinguish between priorities.
The writing is so bad that I can't stand it anymore
Is the protagonist a waste? He should be more mature and take the initiative to learn and control. Isn't it good?
Suddenly gone?
What's going on? It's been taken off the shelves?
I gave away a girl at the beginning, and the golden finger was used and controlled at will, and the protagonist's authority was directly reduced. I don't know what to say.
The setting is not bad, but the writing is not good, the characterization is too toxic, and the world view is also problematic.