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The characters are richly described, and the protagonist is usually rational and thoughtful. The plot is lively and interesting. The only drawback - it's too slow. Summary: Really good-looking Well, how should I put it... The content is very good, but there are too many side plots. Since entering the fantasy space, I haven't had an adventure at all, and it's basically just daily writing. Judging from what has been revealed before, the final villain should be quite powerful and have a sharp body, but he has only appeared once so far. And from the perspective of creating conflicts in daily writing, it's pretty good for a novice. It should be possible to apply it to the final villain. You can follow the old routine of Internet articles. Arrange a few subordinates for the villain to conflict with the protagonist, progressing step by step, and then the final battle. All in all, the current shortcoming is that there are too many daily routines and more and more characters. If it is a supporting role, it is good to only appear once or twice. But if they are all integrated into the protagonist group, it will be very difficult for novices to control. It is recommended to add at most two or three. Otherwise, some characters may be marginalized in the later stage, and the plot will be tight and the impact will be exerted.

Hope single heroine Naya

666, I finally found a book that suits my taste, come on!!!!!!

The writing is a little lacking (no malice), but overall it's pretty good.

Hey hey hey, hey hey hey hey

Big cheers for the author

Okay, very nice.

Very nice, good luck to the author! [Like][Like][Like]

Hehe, second comment, it looks good and is very appetizing.

It looks great, I hope you continue to work hard [laughing]

Author, come on, I believe you, you are the best

It's really well written. Come on, author. I hope there will be more [laughs][laughs][blowing kisses]

I really really really like the layout of this book

It's okay, but I started to go a little eccentric later on.

Already replaced myself

Beautiful and informative

There are so few people, I don't understand

It's too serious every day, but I like it🥰