[Double clean + one-way to two-way + mutual redemption + vest + he]
Su Wan's ruthless way to transcend the tribulation failed, and he was only one step away from becoming a god. The thunder tribulation was blocked by a possessed bird demon.
Not only did she not die, but she was suddenly informed that she was still alive!
That's right, who made her die so unlucky!
Just after adapting to her new body, she picked up a slightly sick boy. The influx of memories made her feel ashamed. The original owner... The original owner actually teased him severely!
Seeing how injured he was by the sect, Su Wan patted his shoulder, "Don't be afraid, I'll protect you!"
But why didn't anyone tell her that the original owner's broken identity had so many connections? He was seeking pleasure, both good and evil. Facing the men who appeared one after another, Su Wan shook his head, stay away from me... I'm allergic to men!
What about him!
Others pointed angrily at the big boss who was hiding behind Su Wan and pretending to be weak.
Su Wan turned his head, his eyes were soft, he was different, he was obedient.
Everyone was angry, are you blind? ! ! He is the one who eats people without spitting out their bones!
Reader comments
Objectively speaking, my sense of reading more than 40 chapters is very good.
The characters are well developed and the characters really caught my eye.
As for the writing style, compared to many articles I have seen on Persimmon and other software, I think it is mature (of course, the book review is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me). I am very particular about writing. If it is not good, I will quit within five chapters.
As for the three views and some article bugs, I haven't found anything wrong so far. There are only about 40 chapters, so I really can't find anything wrong.
But one problem is that the rhythm of the story is not very well grasped, it is a bit too fast, and sometimes it is difficult for people to enter the emotion.
Also, there are a lot of typos, and I'm just too lazy to catch them [face covering]
Generally speaking, I think it is a book that I will continue to follow. It is not bad, but the traffic is not very good. I personally think that this book should not only have such a small traffic.
After all, a new book is on the shelves, and I am willing to give it five stars. I hope it can be of some help!
Personally, I feel that after reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I am very interested in the author's story introduction to this book. However, after reading a few chapters, I intuitively feel that the author's writing style is still too immature. The connection of some details and the characterization of the characters are too stiff, and some of the Internet memes feel like they are hard to find. They still need to be polished. Come on, author!
It's pretty good-looking, you can rush it
I like it, the setting of the heroine is very special
I'll go, it's very beautiful, why is there no one there?
It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it
The language is humorous, funny, logical and beautiful.
Objectively speaking, my sense of reading more than 40 chapters is very good. The characters are well developed and the characters really caught my eye. As for the writing style, compared to many articles I have seen on Persimmon and other software, I think it is mature (of course, the book review is just my personal opinion, please don't criticize me). I am very particular about writing. If it is not good, I will quit within five chapters. As for the three views and some article bugs, I haven't found anything wrong so far. There are only about 40 chapters, so I really can't find anything wrong. But one problem is that the rhythm of the story is not very well grasped, it is a bit too fast, and sometimes it is difficult for people to enter the emotion. Also, there are a lot of typos, and I'm just too lazy to catch them [face covering] Generally speaking, I think it is a book that I will continue to follow. It is not bad, but the traffic is not very good. I personally think that this book should not only have such a small traffic. After all, a new book is on the shelves, and I am willing to give it five stars. I hope it can be of some help!
Personally, I feel that after reading a few chapters, I can't stand it anymore. I am very interested in the author's story introduction to this book. However, after reading a few chapters, I intuitively feel that the author's writing style is still too immature. The connection of some details and the characterization of the characters are too stiff, and some of the Internet memes feel like they are hard to find. They still need to be polished. Come on, author!
It's pretty good-looking, you can rush it
I like it, the setting of the heroine is very special
I'll go, it's very beautiful, why is there no one there?
It's so beautiful, I can't get enough of it
The language is humorous, funny, logical and beautiful.