Collapse of Iron**********

I have overhauled the current chapter, so today's update may be late. The author will work hard. You can go to bed first. Those who can't sleep may see the update. I was originally going to change the title of the book, but it failed to pass the review. It was said that I copied it myself, emmmm, so I re-wrote chapters 1 and 2. Thank you for your hard work. If you are sleepy, go to bed first. I will remember everyone's reminders. Good night everyone. I continue to write.

The author writes very well, this is a very sweet book. There is part of the game plot in the front, and all the original plot in the back. Unlike many Bengtie fanfics that seem to be about Liuying, they are actually all about the protagonist cheating. This book focuses on the sweet life of the protagonist and Liu Ying. The author pours his pen and ink into the details of life, and uses beautiful images to represent some intense moments. If you want to eat sweets, you should read this book. The author updates very quickly and the quality of the article is good. I believe this book will get better and better [Blow kiss]

The writing feels good, the fighting scenes are average but the emotional scenes are quite sweet. The beginning is really not sluggish, but I always feel that the plot is pushed too fast and lacks details (writing details does not mean that it is superficial). It is obvious that the author of the Harmony Festival does not have enough imagination [face covering]

Xing, write quickly! After-school homework: (Guess a creature with four legs in the morning, two legs at noon, and three legs in the evening)

The writing is pretty good. I suggest the author not forget to add some settings such as the protagonist's abilities [face covering]

Come on, I was stunned by the knife, let's see if you can appease my young heart

Wow, that's great (fanshu voice)

Very good. Don't stab me later.

The writing style is average, it should be the first time to write a novel, and it is the author of Power Generation for Love. But the advantage is that it is free and gives support to the author.

Is this the author's second creation? Don't get backstabbed

I like it, come on author(ง •̀_•́)ง

All I can say is that I like it very much, please be more sweet, author, please

It's really good

Although it is not popular, it is very beautiful and I have the urge to print it into a book. [Thinking] The emotional value is a bit unclear. [Thinking] Further comments: I now see the most important point. The author can clearly write down the love value later, and then use it to restrain the monster. Later, you can write about how love will bind a person, and then turn around. While binding, it will bring endless power. (Personal opinion)

Nice! The content is rich and the plot is great!

Very beautiful, brothers