Collapse of Iron: Xu Yiliuying

4 Stars. The writing style of this book is good (at least among Liuying fandoms. I don't know if Liuying is too popular. To put it bluntly, there are all kinds of trash in Liuying fandoms). The plot is also good. Except for the inexplicable start of the imaginary number deduction, the logic of the plot is also good. The only original character is rich. Fu, but you said in the last two chapters before you stopped updating that at least there would be an ending. But after you stopped updating for so long, it's okay not to write it. Although it's a bit regretful, if you write something original with your writing style, you might have a chance of becoming popular. Come on, at least write an ending when you write something original. Don't leave any regrets to the readers who support you.

The best Star Iron fanfic I've seen so far

The wonderful narrative, even if it is a backstab, can be read as another branch line. Fans don't need to follow the main plot completely, it's well written! This revision of Night of the Witch makes me wonder, the author, what kind of state were you in when you wrote the sober plot [laughter][laughter][laughter]

I hope that book friends who like it can leave a review [send a heartfelt message]

Why did he only have 1 chapter yesterday and not make it up today?

The writing is very good and the content is substantial.

It's the best one among all the Bengtie fanfics I've read. It's not brainless. It's a female mainstream Yingyds[shy]

Come on, come on, come on

Hahahahahahaha

Wonderful, one of the few breaths of fresh air in tomatoes And I don't know why, but I always have a premonition that the author hasn't really exerted his strength yet [face covering] I knew it when I saw the second chapter. The author really hasn't exerted his strength yet [laughs and cries] How long has this book been published? Why is there still no rating yet? I think I should get 8 points no matter what (the writing is good, but it's a bit CPU intensive) This data...

It's a wonderful entry point and great writing style. I always feel that the author has not exerted his strength yet. I look forward to the subsequent development of the plot. Galaxy Baseball Man, here you go!

Are you really a new author? [What] writes really well

So far, the plot seems to be pretty good

The angle is unique and the writing is good. Good luck to the author.

Very nice novel, it makes my eyes spin

Damn it, why are there so few?

Come on come on! Really well written

Author and prophet!

I think it looks good, but I don't know why not many people see it.

The plot is pretty good, but a little lacking