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I really like this feeling of mutual support! The feeling that everyone cares about each other is really great! In the past, I always felt uncomfortable when I saw the kind of monopoly. I really don't like the kind that get something for nothing or have great opportunities. The heroine is very handsome! Ji Jinjin is also very handsome! I love this kind of handsome female character! It's better to use a gun, Lei's The author's writing style is very good, but I am not very knowledgeable and cannot praise it too much. It is worth reading!

The warriors stepped forward, wielding swords and flying spells, and launched a fierce battle with the demons. This scene is really exciting! Moreover, the social changes of the protagonists mean that the old social order is being broken and a new social order is being established. This setting makes the novel more in-depth and thoughtful. In the process, the characters' sense of responsibility becomes stronger and they need to contribute to the reconstruction and progress of society. This sense of responsibility makes them more mature, determined and brave. "You and I are both the protagonists, and every character has the vitality of life." This is the charm of the novel! Each character has his own unique personality and story, and their growth and changes touch the readers' hearts. This kind of world of cultivating immortals is the real world of cultivating immortals, full of vitality and vitality!

The plot is great. The heroine is actually almost at the upper level of the upper realm. However, she has committed too many sins (no derogatory meaning, it is a black thunder to attack her), so she can only make a deal with the ghost realm and jump into the river of time to reincarnate in the lower realm. Then the system comes to her to start repairing the world that is about to collapse. 1. The system settings are very novel. 2. The third junior sister who cultivates the path of killing is quite sassy. Unlike other articles on cultivating immortals, Ji Jinjin has a righteous and heaven-grade thunder spirit root. She vows to regain lost territory by entering the path of killing. It can be written in a single book. 3. The writing style is very solid, and the poems written by the author have a feeling of cultivating immortality. 4. Everyone in the supporting cast has a story, either overt or covert (the absent master), but it is impressive. In short, it's not a loss to invest in the shares, let's all take a look.

Damn it, the limit is 2000 words, you can write as hard as you can! I don't quite understand where such a low score comes from. Who is the wise person who gave the bad review? [What] According to Taiwan's uneven level, it can basically reach 9.5, So I commented angrily! Do you understand the sadness of a child who looks for food in poetry? [Angry] A very excellent group portrait article, the wording is very trendy, it is equivalent to a longer Zhihu literature, I like to read this kind of √ show off, chew chew chew. [Eat melon] Let's talk about the protagonist from the perspective of this article first, Xue Lan, a protagonist with dual identities. According to conventional novels, he is an ancient power who traveled through time and became an ordinary person, and then strategized and so on. Although it is a bit? Click to read the full text for details! Different from other Shuangwen stories, she blended into the homes of ordinary people from a superior person, and met all kinds of children, which aroused the tenderness she didn't realize she had. As for being so convulsive, it is probably because everyone was respectful to her in her previous life, and as a monarch, she concentrated all the interests, military power, and political power into one body. In addition, as the eldest monarch, he wanted to kill the demon clan, and he was highly regarded by the outside world. Under the centralized rule, he must be respectful to the monarch, and the ministers can only have respect for the monarch. She couldn't change this evaluation, so she could only keep her decisive and cold message. Her sincerity, which had nowhere to put it, could only be realized in this life. According to her thoughts, in her previous life, she killed some demons and went crazy, but in this life she is also bold and reckless. When she met Xue Tong, a modern person, she learned some hot words and became more abstract. [Awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh] Let's talk about the other protagonist, the cute system goblin, Xue Tong. In the early stage, I thought it was normal systematic literature, but the background story introduced later is remarkable. I give the author a thumbs up. [Like] I have read a lot of system literature, about falling in love with the system, blowing up the main system, and then releasing the system's freedom, but there is a lack of emphasis on describing the background of the system. When you write a story, you create a flesh-and-blood body and a fiery soul. This is what readers see, it's so cool! As for details, it is recommended to read the original article. The protagonist's right-hand man, the complainer in the plot, is quite fun to argue with his inner demons. [Laughing] The other supporting characters all have their own merits. How do you evaluate them? There are three kinds of people in this small world. One is Xue Lan fans, the other is twisted Xue Lan fans, and the third is those who want Xue Lan to become fans [awkward laugh] [OK] Reasons for recommendation: It's really fun, the main character is having a seizure and the supporting characters are helpless, but when they're having a seizure together, everyone can't hold back anyway, that's it. In this unspeakable platform, the author's writing style is quite good, with many golden sentences. He can basically catch up with the level of Jiang and Dian. It's rare, it's rare. The child finally has a hot meal [crying] I have written almost 800 words, and it has caught up with the level of a composition. Although it is all a mess of complaints, I am happy. There is also a reminder! I want to see the ending! I am a person who only knows how to have fun. [Laughs] [Like] I usually don't bother to read unfinished articles. Firstly, I am afraid of ending the novel, and secondly, I gave up after seeing half of the novel where the author's writing skills are not good enough to sustain a good-looking story. Okay, that's all. Oh, and happy New Year everyone! I wish this article will be a big hit in 2025! The author has a lot of money and prays for the opportunity to publish a book!

A group of young people are high-spirited, uphold the right path, eradicate evil spirits, and only wish for peace and health in the world. Joy and bitterness are intertwined, and everyone is growing. I am an impatient person, and I like to jump when reading a book. But when it comes to this book, I couldn't bear to skip a chapter, for fear of missing one touching moment after another. The plot is compact and engaging, the characters are well drawn, and the transitions and details are amazing. There are so many things to appreciate, and I can't express my love for it in words. All I can say is, gentlemen, we should all appreciate such a good book. The future of Yuanming Realm must be bright.

There are a bunch of high-scoring and high-scoring books in the bookshelf, and I finally found a good one [crying] but it's a little sad. It made me burst into tears in the middle of the night, and I was still a little hungry🤤. Finally, I am no longer a junior sister ➕ a bunch of senior brothers. The female characters are so sassy, ​​I love them [full]

Super beautiful, no cost! The heroine is a first-class heroine, and the female characters are all outstanding! ! This is the most female bosses and outstanding female geniuses I have ever read in the article! They are all very distinctive! The writing is good and the plot is unconventional.

This is another great book that I found on Tomato after "The Invasion". The author's writing style is witty and humorous. The author's literary talent is brilliant, the framework is novel, the story is unpredictable, the characters are well-shaped, and the emotions are touching. The names and personalities of the characters once amazed me. This is a grand salvation history of the heroine, and it is also a redemption story in which the heroine is saved by her relatives and friends. In this book, we have gone through vicissitudes of life and suffered a lot, but we are still looking forward to hope. The stories in the many small copies in the book are a series of accusations against the injustice of reality, a beautiful wish to change reality, and also a series of attempts. The arrival of the prosperous era is the accumulation of those who have worked hard for many years, the inheritance of the future generations, and the courage and determination of everyone to break the cauldron and initiate change. It is worth appreciating.

I found this article by accident, and I really couldn't stop reading it. In this film, there is no coexistence between good and evil, zero tolerance for evil, and the resistance to evil is vividly demonstrated. As the mysteries emerge one after another, I want to dig out the truth more and more. The heroine's journey from a lonely wolf chief in the upper world to a mortal in the lower world and being stained with the world of mortals is really funny and tearful. Come on, author, as long as you don't die, you will fight to the death. I can hurt you, but you can't hurt us. I love you, author [blowing kiss]

It's pretty good. I kept watching it. I don't know why the rating is so low, but I think it's pretty good. Xue Lan's character is also well portrayed, and the relationship with Xue Tong is also well buried. From a small system without self-awareness to being raised to have a complete soul and more self-awareness, Xue Tong really makes me cry to death [cry] [cry] Xue Lan is really good!!!!

So far I feel pretty good about it, the writing and the plot are both good. The low pressure is relatively large, but the future plot is unknown. The plot and plot are not brainless, and the logic is good. This one is of the endurance type. The overall writing style is stylish and the characters are sharp and prominent. The heroine has a full-bodied character, multiple perspectives, a good outlook on life, and a unique personality. The direction of the writing is very innovative, and some side presentations make the characters contradictory, but they also enrich the characters' personalities. The trust of friends here is sincere and wholehearted, and there is no need to think about the cold side of betrayal. They may seem deep, but among family and friends, they are mostly like students (but they understand other people's thoughts better). The rating is not high but it is really good. It is much better than those with fake ratings. Finally, I would like to emphasize that the author does not have the slightest tendency to sell dog meat here - there is indeed no CP.

I just finished reading the first volume, and I couldn't help but shed tears a few times. I was willing to die for Gong Yuan, Xue Lan, and the dead soldiers. I was willing to die for my family and country. I saw a different world of cultivation. I had seen the love between the fairy world and the demon world before, and it was very interesting. It wasn't until I saw Long Siyin that I suddenly realized that this was wrong. Where can love come from in the face of hatred. Life and death, the life and death of supporting characters, will not live because of the protagonist. They will die, either vigorously or quietly. This book is very good, but there are very few reviews and very few people, so the rating is low. If you can't find a good book, read this book. Happy reading to everyone!

It's a very good group portrait book. The teachers and students help each other, and the wife's layout is also very big. I just hope that the master will stop doing this (sincerely)

This is my first time writing a book review. The author's writing is really good. Don't be anxious when you first read it. The more you read, the more interesting it becomes. In this book, everyone is the protagonist. There is no messy love and love. They are all young men who stick to their original aspirations and are full of passion and righteousness. The whole article gives me the feeling that it is moisturizing and silent, making people follow the heroine to read their story! It's so beautiful! Like, like [blowing kiss]

The final exam is finally over, I want to leave a big comment (♡>𖥦<)/♥ Boss's writing is very good. Almost every chapter has a sentence that touches me. From time to time, it appears like the ripples of raindrops blooming in the river, pattering and touching my heartstrings. A very clever article, the pace is slow (?), And it feels like a small bridge flowing through the water. I hope the boss can take care of himself and update more (it's so good, it's tied immediately, boss, please update quickly, I'm really going to make a fuss ꒦ິ^꒦ິ) As a group portrait article, the most important thing is the description of the characters. I think the description is very full. Although the heroine was an indifferent and powerful leader of the wolf tribe in her previous life, based on the image of the real senior sister, it can be seen that she is also a very lively and cute baby. The heroine's "system sister" is bold and careful. Although she will curse when she is assigned too many tasks, she will still complete them (I won't say it anymore, just pet her). The soul-inducing baby is also very cute. The little sword spirit carries the responsibility of reincarnation. And our Wolf Lord's friends all have their own cuteness. The world view is very grand, and he uses his body to build the world and rebuild the Yuan and Ming Dynasties. You can see that everyone is contributing their own efforts to the Yuanming Realm, whether they are ordinary people, demon cultivators, or city gods, Shura, they are all working hard. I like this plot very much, and it feels like a fishy relationship between the military and the people.

It's so good-looking, so long, and I admire the teacher so much. I usually listen to books, but I'm tired of them, and then I see there are so many things I haven't read yet. My teacher is so great, and his writing skills are also very good. Although it's very long, each story is very compact, and the rhythm of the plot is also very good. In my eyes, the teacher's writing can be ranked first in Tomato. This book is exactly what I'm willing to pay to read.

After spending a long time, I finally got a guarantee! There is absolutely nothing wrong with the writing and plot. I personally think it is a perfect group portrait and the characters are well developed. There is no CP, no joking. Anyone who can fall in love with the distressed protagonist after reading it is a ruthless person. The female characters are also very well created and there are many bonds with the protagonist, and they all have unique characters and personal highlights. It gives people the feeling that everyone is walking on their own path, striving for their ideals and beliefs. The characters cannot be summarized in one sentence. There are no ambiguous scenes so far. They are all pure and touching family and friendship. In the end, I like this world view and storyline very much. When watching the main plot, I don't feel like I'm watching a house, and it doesn't feel very thin. If you like the plot, no CP, group portraits, don't like ambiguous scenes, and hope for a brilliant female character, you can definitely buy it now, and you won't lose money by investing in it.

This book is super awesome and beautiful, but there is one thing that I have been wondering about. There are always some words like "woman", "girl" and "youth" appearing in the text. It is okay to use it occasionally, but it is very abrupt when used often, especially before a paragraph. The name of the heroine has already appeared in the first chapter, but the very beginning of the second sentence is about what a woman is like. I remember that it was not like this when I read the previous chapter. I have read more than 400 chapters now, and now I feel that the whole article is filled with words like "woman". . . I don't mean to say bad, because this book is very good-looking. I like the complete and coherent plot of Xue Lan's past and present life, the daily interactions with Xue Tong, the sympathy between friends, and the heroine's sharp mouth and tofu heart, but I still hope there can be fewer words like [send heart] [send heart] [send heart]

It's very beautiful! I always feel that the rating is not very high! There aren't too many push streams. Personally, I think it's totally fine for 9.4-9.6! The only shortcoming is that it is not finished (?) I am looking forward to the follow-up. It is very mature and perfect in every aspect, with no flaws or bugs. It's a very mature novel! Next is what I appreciate and like very much The setting is very reasonable and novel. It is different from the traditional setting of cultivating immortals, but it can also be justified. The writing style has a touch of humor, is not too heavy, is not pretentious, and is very mature and skillful. The plot has knives, gags, connotations and reflections. The part about the knife is easy to cry about, but it won't cause a heart attack. It's a melancholy relief. It's like the wind blows away and cannot be retained. I was very moved when I wrote this part of Xiaotong. Her existence is gentle and kind outside the world, like a perfect mirror, reflecting the kind side of Lan Lan. But her kindness and gentleness do not come from her perfection. In reality, she is a child who was in a coma because of the gangsters. She experienced horrible things, but she came out. This section is particularly good, it will bring tears to my eyes. There are a lot of realistic evils in the plot, but there is no despair. Everything is moving towards a good and promising future. The other one is the three views, which is very to my liking and very comfortable. I won't go into details, as it doesn't make any sense to me. I really like the setting of demons here, they are dirty and disgusting. Although there is this human form, it still has a disgusting essence. Such a straightforward setting is too symbolic. It should be a group portrait setting, every character is so attractive, even if there are not many descriptions, they stand up very well. You can clearly feel that everyone in this world is alive and has their own past. This is the most satisfying article I have seen recently! I hope the author can finish it happily, and I am looking forward to future works! Sir, I want to follow you lovelove

This book is really good, a very good group portrait article. Each character has a full image, and there is a friendship between geniuses (the kind that hurts each other when nothing happens, helps each other when something goes wrong and is full of trust). The author's writing style is very good, humorous and not like the jokes on the Internet today. But I feel like there will be a knife, I hope it's an illusion. One more comment The protagonist is System, but System is a modern little girl, very cute. In the early stage, it was the daily life of the sect, with geniuses from multiple sects working together. Then there was a battle between immortals and demons, the protagonist sent his junior brothers and sisters to the battlefield, and went to the mortal world himself. The heroine is very deep in the city, taking one step counts as ten steps, and is a little suspicious, but she is very kind to her own people. It's so beautiful, it's not enough. I hope the author will work harder and update it, so that it doesn't end badly or hastily. It just feels like a rain of swords is coming, and the master is probably a big swordsman. Everyone, you won't lose money by investing in shares! ! !

Everyone's character is very distinct, and you can't help but get addicted to it when you look at it! Why is such a beautiful book not popular? !

It's great. I haven't seen such a complete fairy tale in a long time. The overall plot setting is also very novel, and the main and supporting characters are very vivid. I didn't expect that I, who has always been the protagonist, would prefer a supporting role - Careful Calculation. I almost cried every time a carefully calculated plot came out. The writing is very good. This novel is as good as Yin Nian for me!

It's super good-looking, but I'm short of words. At least there are no surprises in the more than 300 chapters I've read. It's just that Uncle Shen and his disciples have suffered too much, and the sacrifices made by Yuan Ling's lower realm to resist the demons are too great [cry][cry][cry][cry]

I like it very much and look forward to the follow-up. Come on, teacher! Very much looking forward to Lan Lan's enlightenment [adoration][adoration][adoration]

A well-written book, the passion of young people and the love of elders, the determination of people to resist foreign enemies, and the protection of the common people, the human race, and the pattern of the Yuan and Ming Dynasties! No CP, pure passion [send heart]

I haven't seen such a beautiful book on Tomato for a long time. There is no cp, no female competition, and there are many excellent female characters in the article. The elders of the sect are also wonderful people. Uncle Shen Suan really made me cry many times. The heroine's friends are also very good people, and each of them has their own highlights. The author's writing is very good, and the pace is fast. After the first three chapters, there are basically wonderful plots in the following chapters. It is not laggy at all, and the plot is very smooth. It is very comfortable to read.

Everyone's character is very distinct and the plot is fascinating. Why is such a beautiful book rated so low [angry]

The overall story is very good, but there is not enough preparation in many places in the early stage. There are too many names of people and places that are easy to forget. Many places are a bit jumpy and difficult to understand. But if you stick to the beginning and finish it, it will be much better. The protagonist is very good, and the other characters are relatively less three-dimensional, but they are also very good. The reason why so few people watch it is probably because there is not enough foreshadowing in the early stages, which makes it difficult for people to watch. Many things require explanations and spoilers from the author. If you can persevere through the early stages and watch the rest, it will still be great. It really looks better the further back you go.

It's very beautiful, they support each other, everyone is sober, every character is vivid and delicious (not) and the plot is very smooth, it's beautiful!

I really like this kind of boy group portraits. Every character has flesh and blood. Although there is a protagonist, the description of each character is not neglected at all. Just reading the words describing the character's personality from the side will make you smile subconsciously. Yes, she/he is such a child! Author, you really love every character