
One Piece: Dark Smoker, No More Three Straight Losses
海贼:黑暗斯摩格,绝不三连跪
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- Completed
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- 1.2M Words
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- Anime Fanfiction
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- 1y ago
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- Fanqie
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- This Time, Our Navy Has Ten Admiral-Class Fighters这次我们海军,有十名大将级战力Former title · until Oct 2026
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So far everything is good, Tina is also very smooth, but ❤️❤️ is a bit sudden. The plot is also very comfortable. I practice steadily step by step^0^
To be honest, I don't understand why so many people give me low scores. It's probably because it's not a good system, and cheating without a start makes many people feel uncomfortable. As far as I am concerned, this kind of literary talent that develops gradually and reasonably is more readable, and the system cheating is a bit childish. I reviewed it after reading Chapter 340, so my review is definitely valuable. First of all, it is a pure pirate, without jumping between the pirate world and Naruto, it reads very purely. Secondly, the author has researched One Piece very thoroughly, and the settings of the background, timeline, characters, etc. Are very consistent with the original work, and the logic is very strict. Furthermore, the protagonist is a slow-growing type, with brains but not recklessness but not a virgin, clear love and hate, and there are not so many greasy emotional dramas, so it is not greasy. The author's writing style is concise and refreshing to read, and the more you read, the more you read. But the rating of this article is ridiculously low, so I have been recommending this book recently. I hope that more people can read this good article, and I also hope that this book can have a better rating! I saw that many people gave negative reviews after reading for less than 30 minutes. I was really worried for the author 🤦. I hope you can read more at the back. The latter is really good. I also suggest that the author has time to slightly change the front. After all, retaining readers is the best way.
To be honest, I don't know why this book has such a low rating. This book is really top-notch among the pirate novels in Tomato. I look for pirate novels in Tomato every day, and this one is the only two I can read. Although there are some poisonous points, you must know that 99.99% Of fan fiction is poisonous. Not only Pirates, I read fan fiction every day and even Three Kingdoms fan fiction. As long as it is fan fiction, it must have poisonous points. In comparison, the poisonous points in this book are really very small. I've read almost all the pirate novels in Tomato that have a score of 8 or above (I can't say I've read them all, but I've read quite a few). I really don't think there are any that are better than this one. I typed it a little faster, and there are some typos in it, but since I've already posted so many of them and I can't copy them, I won't change them. When you feel that the sentence does not make sense, it is because I made a typo
If you are looking for the ultimate mindless and enjoyable novel, you can skip it. You have to be patient when reading this book, because many of the subplots do not always revolve around the protagonist. The portrayal of the characters in the original plot is also quite wonderful. It is a rare pirate and human novel!!!
According to the current comic performance, generals can be divided into 5 levels. First gear: Akainu, with a single forehand, he penetrated the white ball, instantly killed Whitebeard, chased the black ball, and broke one of Aokiji's legs with his backhand. Second gear: Kizaru (defeated Wang Luffy who defeated Kaido), Aokiji (defeated Garp with a broken leg, don't mention Garp who was stabbed, Akainu beat Whitebeard with one punch without breaking the defense, claiming to be the best in physical skills will not be broken by the emperor's deputy level, Marko and the like can beat Akainu without breaking the defense), Red Hair (there is only one at the moment, he has seen and heard of killing Green Bull, but there is no positive record, let's see how he performs later) Third gear: Wang Luffy (Ganghammer Kaido), Garp (a clown, but he can overpower Kaido's mother and fight with Ao Pheasant), old white beard (in addition to not breaking the Akainu defense, he also overwhelms Kaido's mother), Blackbeard (can leave scars on red hair without fruit, and got the Darkness Fruit) The fourth gear: Kaido, aunt, I won't go into details, physical fitness affects half of it. The fifth level: Green Bull, Fujitora and the like, against generals and below, scavengers, and generals, there is nothing they can do. Their physical and domineering strength is not as good as that of regular generals. They are considered weak generals, but they are more powerful than the emperor's deputy. Elderly Rayleigh is about the same level, and Kizaru can fight with any swordsmanship. Animation fans, don't come to fight. If you want to say it in the first sentence, Oda is a manga artist. He doesn't understand the animation team. So even if you are great, I can't say anything about you.
I remember, can't the Dark Fruit be able to peel off other people's fruit abilities?
To be honest, I was very confused when grading. I was afraid that my score would be too high and I would be reviewed repeatedly.
One update a day is too slow and sometimes the updates are interrupted. The author is diligent and clicks on more code words 💕💕💕 You can develop more attack skills. If you have no inspiration, you can search on Douyin to find out what skills Blackbeard has in the game. If you have more fruits, I hope it will be a shock fruit or a fantasy beast fruit (you can consider Yamata no Orochi, vampires, bull ghosts, and Pegasus, all of which have appeared in comics)
"I pretended to be fascinated by her first" "This is just part of my plan" "I have my own rhythm" "Listen to me that she is different from others" "It's true this time, I think he is a good girl" "Why am I being fooled by her? I just like to spin in circles" "She really understands me" "Brother, we will have good results" "I checked her zodiac sign but it's not Love to reply to messages" "I checked her horoscope but she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her zodiac sign but she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her blood type but she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her five elements and she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her horoscope and she doesn't like to reply to messages" "Brother, I won't live if she doesn't reply to me" "Brother, I have no choice" "Brother, I won't fall in love again" "Brother, I think I have met the real person again "I love you" "Brother, I miss her a little bit" "Brother, does she still love me" "Brother, can she and I still be together" "Brother, she answered me with a question mark" "Brother, I knew she still loves me" "Brother, I think it is right for girls to be shy" "Brother, I seem to have fallen" "Brother, I have really met true love"
After seeing Chapter 217, I have a good impression so far. The protagonist is Smoker of the naval force, the White Hunter in his previous life, but this time he eats the Dark Fruit. On this basis, the author has his own private assumptions and understanding based on the original work. In my opinion, it is relatively self-consistent and logically reasonable. In its setting, the Dark Fruit cannot be elementalized, but it can change its shape, and with the help of knowledge and domineering, it can achieve the effect of natural elementalization. And as the strength increases, the setting of double pain for the Dark Fruit will also be reduced. I think this is more reasonable. I prefer the setting of the natural fruit awakening here. He believes that the natural awakening is to assimilate the objective environment and cause permanent changes in the environment. This setting is reflected in the Dark Fruit, which is to create an artificial source of gravity, which makes the Dark Fruit, which originally seemed useless, have many functions. The route that the protagonist takes is not that he is beautiful alone and then takes on the whole world by himself, this kind of growth style of Long Aotian. He chose to run the navy, giving it economic independence, and then took advantage of the general trend to find allies and overthrow the Tianlong people. In this book, the previous generation of naval admirals led by Warring States, Garp, and Zefa are not negative characters or rigid. They are new progressives who are determined to reform and are left-wing forces. At present, the entire work is full of vitality, but one problem reflected is that the combat power system is not exhaustive. The protagonist's combat power is a mystery. Occasionally he can defeat some people, but sometimes it is very difficult. Moreover, the Dark Fruit has not shown its potential, which is known as the most vicious fruit. It seems to be quite useless. So for now, the biggest problem for the author is to improve the protagonist's combat power. Whether it is the multi-fruit fusion routine in the original work, or the author's own creation of a state above awakening, relying on the protagonist's own development and creation should not be able to match the level of a general or the four emperors, so the only way to go is to fuse other fruits. This depends on what is written later.