This Time Our Navy Has Ten General-Level Combatants.

So far everything is good, Tina is also very smooth, but [love][love] is a bit sudden. The plot is also very comfortable. I practice steadily step by step^0^

To be honest, I don't understand why so many people give me low scores. It's probably because it's not a good system, and cheating without a start makes many people feel uncomfortable. As far as I am concerned, this kind of literary talent that develops gradually and reasonably is more readable, and the system cheating is a bit childish. I reviewed it after reading Chapter 340, so my review is definitely valuable. First of all, it is a pure pirate, without jumping between the pirate world and Naruto, it reads very purely. Secondly, the author has researched One Piece very thoroughly, and the settings of the background, timeline, characters, etc. Are very consistent with the original work, and the logic is very strict. Furthermore, the protagonist is a slow-growing type, with brains but not recklessness but not a virgin, clear love and hate, and there are not so many greasy emotional dramas, so it is not greasy. The author's writing style is concise and refreshing to read, and the more you read, the more you read. But the rating of this article is ridiculously low, so I have been recommending this book recently. I hope that more people can read this good article, and I also hope that this book can have a better rating! I saw that many people gave negative reviews after reading for less than 30 minutes. I was really worried for the author [face covering]. I hope you can read more at the back. The latter is really good. I also suggest that the author has time to slightly change the front. After all, retaining readers is the best way.

To be honest, I don't know why this book has such a low rating. This book is really top-notch among the pirate novels in Tomato. I look for pirate novels in Tomato every day, and this one is the only two I can read. Although there are some poisonous points, you must know that 99.99% Of fan fiction is poisonous. Not only Pirates, I read fan fiction every day and even Three Kingdoms fan fiction. As long as it is fan fiction, it must have poisonous points. In comparison, the poisonous points in this book are really very small. I've read almost all the pirate novels in Tomato that have a score of 8 or above (I can't say I've read them all, but I've read quite a few). I really don't think there are any that are better than this one. I typed it a little faster, and there are some typos in it, but since I've already posted so many of them and I can't copy them, I won't change them. When you feel that the sentence does not make sense, it is because I made a typo

According to the current comic performance, generals can be divided into 5 levels. First gear: Akainu, with a single forehand, he penetrated the white ball, instantly killed Whitebeard, chased the black ball, and broke one of Aokiji's legs with his backhand. Second gear: Kizaru (defeated Wang Luffy who defeated Kaido), Aokiji (defeated Garp with a broken leg, don't mention Garp who was stabbed, Akainu beat Whitebeard with one punch without breaking the defense, claiming to be the best in physical skills will not be broken by the emperor's deputy level, Marko and the like can beat Akainu without breaking the defense), Red Hair (there is only one at the moment, he has seen and heard of killing Green Bull, but there is no positive record, let's see how he performs later) Third gear: Wang Luffy (Ganghammer Kaido), Garp (a clown, but he can overpower Kaido's mother and fight with Ao Pheasant), old white beard (in addition to not breaking the Akainu defense, he also overwhelms Kaido's mother), Blackbeard (can leave scars on red hair without fruit, and got the Darkness Fruit) The fourth gear: Kaido, aunt, I won't go into details, physical fitness affects half of it. The fifth level: Green Bull, Fujitora and the like, against generals and below, scavengers, and generals, there is nothing they can do. Their physical and domineering strength is not as good as that of regular generals. They are considered weak generals, but they are more powerful than the emperor's deputy. Elderly Rayleigh is about the same level, and Kizaru can fight with any swordsmanship. Animation fans, don't come to fight. If you want to say it in the first sentence, Oda is a manga artist. He doesn't understand the animation team. So even if you are great, I can't say anything about you.

If you are looking for the ultimate mindless and enjoyable novel, you can skip it. You have to be patient when reading this book, because many of the subplots do not always revolve around the protagonist. The portrayal of the characters in the original plot is also quite wonderful. It is a rare pirate and human novel! ! !

I remember, can't the Dark Fruit be able to peel off other people's fruit abilities?

To be honest, I was very confused when grading. I was afraid that my score would be too high and I would be reviewed repeatedly.

One update a day is too slow and sometimes the updates are interrupted. The author is diligent and clicks on more code words [send heart][send heart][send heart] You can develop more attack skills. If you have no inspiration, you can search on Douyin to find out what skills Blackbeard has in the game. If you have more fruits, I hope it will be a shock fruit or a fantasy beast fruit (you can consider Yamata no Orochi, vampires, bull ghosts, and Pegasus, all of which have appeared in comics)

"I pretended to be fascinated by her first" "This is just part of my plan" "I have my own rhythm" "Listen to me that she is different from others" "It's true this time, I think he is a good girl" "Why am I being fooled by her? I just like to spin in circles" "She really understands me" "Brother, we will have good results" "I checked her zodiac sign but it's not Love to reply to messages" "I checked her horoscope but she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her zodiac sign but she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her blood type but she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her five elements and she doesn't like to reply to messages" "I checked her horoscope and she doesn't like to reply to messages" "Brother, I won't live if she doesn't reply to me" "Brother, I have no choice" "Brother, I won't fall in love again" "Brother, I think I have met the real person again "I love you" "Brother, I miss her a little bit" "Brother, does she still love me" "Brother, can she and I still be together" "Brother, she answered me with a question mark" "Brother, I knew she still loves me" "Brother, I think it is right for girls to be shy" "Brother, I seem to have fallen" "Brother, I have really met true love"

It must be five stars. Not to mention the writing style, it is very fluent and smooth, and the plot is also very good. Especially the author really regards One Piece as a real world and describes the human nature in it very well. It is not disgustingly written as a comic.

Yes, there are not many books from the naval perspective, and even fewer are written based on the original characters. The plot is very compact. There is no such thing as opening a harem or being invincible at the beginning like some novels. The protagonist gradually becomes stronger. Under the premise of knowing the future, he plans step by step. It is super passionate.

It's very good. As a pirate fan, I respect the original work and have my own reasonable inferences. It's well written, but I don't understand the domineering character that defeated Im in the end. Everything else is very good, and all the pitfalls are buried. It's worth recommending.

The simple Dark Fruit is really not very strong. It's not like Blackbeard who can eat a few magic fruits, so you look like the simple Dark Fruit is actually quite weak.

The ending has enough foreshadowing and no sudden ending, so I'll give it five stars for that.

It looks good. The protagonist gets a golden finger at the beginning. The Fruit of Darkness has a good starting point. After that, he trains hard and opens his mind. His strength increases little by little. Step by step, he uses various cool operations and plot advantages in the navy to improve the navy's combat power, allowing the navy to grow obscenely under the eyes of the world government. Although I feel that the character of the time traveler changes rapidly between the past life and the present life, there is no description of adapting to the new world. Sometimes the plot is not particularly rigorous, and the five old stars are written with bad minds, but it looks smooth and the writing is witty and humorous. Above

No one will complain, in fact, the author is also a human being. Can you update it soon? As long as you can't do it to death, do it to death. How many pictures a day is enough to see? Take another 100. 100 Tickets per person.

I have the same idea as the author, only after eating a fruit will you be better awakened. As the author said: Eat the bitterest of hardships.

Give me a five-star review. This book has been on my bookshelf for less than 200,000 words. I haven't read it since I read it a little. I'm not used to it because I have the stereotype of the character. Smoker is the smoker and must be the smoke fruit. But I also know that the smoke fruit is very weak and difficult to develop, so I will give it a five-star rating and withdraw it.

The writing is quite good and the plot of the article is novel. Logical. It doesn't feel too teary to read. The characters have distinct personalities. Come on, author.

In fact, as a Pirates fan, the writing is quite detailed. Maybe it's because everyone has read too many cool articles and the slow-burners can't stand it anymore. I feel like this book can get an 8.5 Rating. Come on, author!

I personally think it's pretty good! A relatively happy ending! The tea dolphin and the peach rabbit can be paired together. I have never seen anything written by a fan. This is the first one I have read!

It's good-looking, but there are few people and few comments, so it's not fun.

The book is a good book, but it's a pity that it's not to my taste. You can read it

I forgot about it after watching it, but I still remember the bad part, that is the love between the protagonist and Tina, it was so sudden! [Send heart][Send heart]

Other similar novels in the world of One Piece are simply incomparable and worth a read!

It's good-looking\(//∇//)\Occasionally there are some laughs. The plot that imitates Sauron's knife test made me laugh to death.

The whole book is well written and has a happy ending, giving many tragic characters a happy life. It also has some settings of its own, making it a good pirate fanfic.

Dude, can you please be more powerful? Can you update it faster? It's time for vacation. Other anchors are following me every day.

After Blackbeard eats the Dark Fruit, he can eat a Shocking Fruit. I don't know if he has two hearts or there is some special situation. Isn't the protagonist going to eat two fruits? I feel that a single Dark Fruit is a bit weak. Please do more, author.

It looks good, it looks good, it looks good, it looks good