A middle-aged man born in the 1980s who lost his job, divorced and went bankrupt and returned to a small town near the desert to open a self-driving camp. A beautiful girl born in the 2000s, painting is both her job and her hobby. A rich second-generation photographer born in the 1990s, handsome and sunny. What story can happen between the three of them?
Reader comments
From what I have seen so far, the beginning is too abrupt, the characterization and inner monologue are poorly handled, there is too much emphasis on directly describing the loneliness of the protagonist, and the writing is too straightforward.
From what I have seen so far, the beginning is too abrupt, the characterization and inner monologue are poorly handled, there is too much emphasis on directly describing the loneliness of the protagonist, and the writing is too straightforward.