Star Iron************

To be honest, the writing is not very good. First of all, the character characteristics are well written, and everyone's personality is written correctly. In terms of plot, there is a big difference. There are errors in various details, but it is understandable. After all, the author wrote it casually and did not have high expectations. There are also insufficient prerequisites. For example, there is no running-in process between Zhe and Xiao and the system, and they all rely on unconditional trust that is taken for granted. In fact, the author chose this subject very well, and it is very interesting. The ordinary people in the previous life are combined with the abilities and personalities of the millet. There is a lot to write about. I have been looking for a book with this subject these days, but unfortunately I did not finally find this one. Although the writing is not very good, it is worth giving me five stars. I think if the author plans to continue writing, he can make an outline first and change the previous parts. After all, it seems that the author actually has no outline and writes completely casually. For example, you can travel to Star Iron a thousand years in advance and then work as an agricultural master in [Cangcheng], and then transfer to what you wrote later when [Cangcheng] is about to be destroyed, and lead to the following plot. Such a long time interval can not only write about the process of making the relationship between the protagonist and millet become better, but also use it in the world view of Bengtie. The process of rationalizing the strengthening of millet, as well as the process of becoming an envoy of fertility, will also make the identity of the exiled Vidyadharas more reasonable (here it can be written that they were exiled because of the relationship between immortal boats and fertility), as well as the experience of being exiled for thousands of years after becoming an envoy of abundance, such as traveling to many planets in the environment. In a place with a cruel environment, you can talk about miracles, sow and cultivate the land, and then you can accumulate fame and popularity (although popularity is not important), and then come to the Black Tower Space Station a few years before the plot begins to wait for the plot to begin (this is actually reasonable, after all, millet can see cause and effect, although it is not particularly useful due to worldview factors. It's not big, but it can be the reason for knowing what will happen in the future, and there is indeed someone "Elio" in Star Iron who can predict the future, and then after that, the common individual "Zhe and Xiao" can also appear in the "script", which rationalizes most of the plot) You can write dozens of chapters here alone The above are all my own personal thoughts. To be honest, I have even thought about writing a book. . . It's a pity that my writing skills are not strong enough and I don't have that ability. . In short, if the author is just playing around, ignore me. If you really want to write a decent story, I suggest you completely rewrite the book. As for how you want to write it, it depends entirely on you, the author. The suggestions I gave above are only one of thousands of possibilities and are for reference only. Also, why do you like to hide your tail and horns! It's obviously one of the important cute features of Sister Millet! Oh, and one more thing, it doesn't matter if the protagonist gradually transforms into a millet body. As long as the character's personality characteristics are clear, it can be written like this. After all, this is the subject of this book. It would be strange if it didn't change.

The writing is very good, and the image of Sister Ma is perfectly reflected. As long as the book does not collapse, it can continue to be written perfectly. The story needs to be perfectly presented, and it needs exciting conflicts and climactic plots to attract readers. As long as the characters and plot do not collapse, it can continue to be written. If the story develops peacefully, there is no point in continuing to read. For me, it needs to be low to climax (creating conflicts and climaxes) to arouse the desire to read and resonate with emotional intelligence. My review ★★★★☆ (The early stage is the stage from beginning to development, which is almost the two stages of 'crisis' and 'climax') [A message for you: Even if it is a book, it has rich emotions that can infect others. Even if it is a depressive book, it can be written with sadness and rich sad emotions. A healing book can also be written with rich healing emotions and sad emotions.]

It's very well written, really very well written. It perfectly embodies the image of Sister Shu.

Finally, there is something written about Sister Millet.

Well written, bro, finally there is a book written by Millet. Do you have a group?

The author writes well