[No Heroine] [Lovecraftian Elements] [Sequences] [Ensemble Cast] [Apocalypse] [Mutation]
A strange diary splits consciousness and leads souls through the moon's hidden, ancient portal district. The hounds guarding the portals bow to you, the most honored one.
Eighteen sequences of authority. The gaze of an evil god from a dimensional rift. A strange gateway of dreams. Is it the vigil of the lonely, or the ambition of the greedy? A spirit ferry spiraling into madness: when will it find its long-lost master again? The forgotten one, missing part of its body, yearns endlessly for an anchor.
The extinguished White Tower of Truth. An unknown sun that has never appeared. Strange moons, each with its own personality. A plate that devours without end. The mysterious surname “Clotho.” A beauty vase, a soul lantern, a crystal skull, and the crow that heralds death.
After seeing that eye, Yang Wen, who should have died during the Sequence Seven advancement ritual, unexpectedly returned to the first day the strange entities arrived. But this time, the strange game had begun a full year earlier.
The Fountain of Youth is a sorrow that turns girls into machines. The Broodmother of Desire will drag all living beings into depravity. At the Flower God's sacrificial ceremony, who will become the bride of a nonexistent moon?
Words appeared in the diary: [My name is Yang Wen. I died because I stupidly stuck my hand outside the portal district.]
(Note: This is a slow-burn story, not an overpowered power fantasy. It carefully develops the worldbuilding, clarifies the traits of each deity and the connections between the authorities of different sequences, and tries to bring even one-time background characters to life. That's not padding! Padding is easy: have idiots pick fights, beat the younger one and then have the older one show up, and churn out tens of thousands of words. But writing like that would be no fun for Bai Miao.)
Old book friends all know that Bai Miao will make a good outline before writing a book. There was indeed too little foreshadowing in the previous book, which led to problems with the rhythm later. I will reflect on this book and correct any bad points if they are there, and encourage them if they are not. 💕
The writing is good, and I haven't seen any poisonous points yet. The male protagonist's brothers are decisive in killing. The main male protagonist is the elder brother. He is very wise and humane. Although he has been desperate, he still hopes that more compatriots can survive. The younger brother seems to blindly listen to his elder brother, but he is not bad at all. When facing children, he still has compassion without hurting himself. The author's skills are good, and the human nature in it is real. The weapon administrator, the skeleton girl, and the child in E-area are all very real. It feels like watching best friend + brother Huozi. I hope the two brothers can become gods in the end and go to a higher place in this weird world. The elder brother does research that he doesn't want to do for his younger brother. I hope the two of them can reach the top together in this life. Highly recommended!!!!! (This should be regarded as Changping. The author of such a good book without a rating is still begging for Changping. I feel really sad...) If you've seen Girlfriends, you can come and check it out, it's very delicious~ If you have watched Brother Huozi, you can come and take a look. He is not as crazy but his style is more cunning~ Those who haven't seen Girlfriends should come and see it to open up a new world~
It is very innovative. It starts with a rebirth, and does not follow the development of the previous life. It sets some pitfalls, such as the eyes, the owner of the diary, and the future of some minor characters. If possible, I hope the author can make the rewards of the protagonist not necessarily what he wants, and don't make the rewards like a wishing machine, just like the ability of the shadow clone. I thought it belonged to the woman who went there, but ended up going to find an ally of Katsuo. It's great, at least it didn't make me guess the future correctly. I want to see something new now, come on!! Author, write a good book and keep updating. As long as you keep updating, I will always be with you 😘 😘 😘 😘 ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
I have to say that this sequence of books is okay. Although the protagonist is reborn and the setting is a bit shabby, I quite like the character of the protagonist. Although the protagonist has gone crazy before being reborn and becomes bloodthirsty in order to achieve his goals, but later in the article it can be seen that the protagonist's humanity still exists, and his respect for life is more in line with this kind of sequence. The character of the protagonist It's not bad. It's not just about not being a virgin and then killing people randomly. The character of the protagonist is still in line with the moral bottom line of the public. It seems quite comfortable. If it's a bit toxic, it's not too toxic, because the character of the protagonist is well set up. Generally, a book like this won't have a lot of toxic points. However, there are still too few chapters in the book. It is recommended to read it before reading it, otherwise it will be a bit uncomfortable [laughter]
According to my observation, when you ate spaghetti today, you encountered a bad businessman who did not mix No. 42 Concrete and used inferior screws, which seriously affected your torque, thereby affecting the output of UFOs. Insufficient absorption caused internal honey imbalance, leading to disordered emission systems, causing serious nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and the charger. I personally think that this pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. Because of the length of this screw, it can easily directly affect the torque of the excavator. You know, when you smash it in, it will produce a large amount of high-energy protein in an instant, commonly known as UFO, which will seriously affect economic development and even cause certain nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and chargers. You know? Furthermore, based on the Pythagorean theorem, you can easily infer that the artificially bred Hideki Tojo can capture wild trigonometric functions. Therefore, whether Qin Shihuang's section is radioactive or whether Trump's Nth power contains sediment will not affect the rendezvous between Wal-Mart and Welcome in the Antarctic. I don't know if it counts as a long review [laughs crookedly]
I heard that the author wants to make a long review, so I'll see if I can figure out the word count. First of all, the author's cat is very cute and fluffy. I like it very much. It would be great if I could touch it. Secondly, you damn human trafficker, I can tell at a glance that this is my cat. If you give it back to me, I will even let me live in a mansion, drive a luxury car, eat and drink well. (In gibberish) I've made up a hundred words, but I don't know how to make it a long review. I'd like to think about it a little more clearly. Ah, by the way, the author said that he would have the opportunity to dress us in women's clothing in the future. I'm not particularly interested in this or that. After all, I'm a girl. Yes, I'm not very interested in the author's women's clothing. That's how it goes. Then some people will definitely be interested. We all have some idea of who these people are, right? You don't need me to come out one by one, right? Then I added it together and it came to 300 words. I'll just say three more points. . . Wow, I have worked so hard to find the number of words for the author to write a long review. Can't you tell if this book is good or not? If that doesn't work, just look up and look at the five stars. Ahem, I must have put together so many words because I have fallen in love with the author's cat. It's soft and looks good at first glance. Ruarua (continues gibbering) Kitten - I touch it, I touch it, I touch it. What's wrong?
It's okay, I can still watch it so far, and it suits my preferences. There is currently no female protagonist, the protagonists are a pair of brothers, the plot development is okay, the speed is suitable, the logic is reasonable, and it is still enjoyable. There are some knowledge points that fit the content of the novel, and it can be seen that the author is very sophisticated. I won't keep books for the time being, waiting for updates 🧐 To commemorate my lost time, I haven't read the ending of the author's book yet 😢
If you want to describe a real world, the play must not only have only one family relationship, but also be mixed with other emotional storylines such as friendship and love. The main story cannot only revolve around one or two people. It will be more realistic to write more supporting characters or two-corner triangle plots. It will be better to have more narrations to modify the plot, rather than blindly describing the perspective of the protagonist. Nowadays, most novels are written with the protagonist as the center, and other characters or descriptions are either mentioned in one or several strokes, or they are "autobiographies" centered on the protagonist or the protagonist's cognition. The works written in this way do not look like a real and huge world, but like a false world, and the center of the universe is the protagonist. For example, for Katsuo in the storyline, the description technique is basically one stroke or a few strokes. We don't know how her skeletons came from. She can only know that she has skeletons through the protagonist's sight. Later, the message she sends to the protagonist has a male-to-female ratio of 1:5 and the speed of the avatar is grayed out. It is most obvious during the day when all the messages are sent. For such a long time, the protagonist seems to know nothing. He is completely immersed in the protagonist's world and has lost his perception of the outside world. We have no idea what is happening outside, just like the protagonist. Whether the protagonist has seen it, whether Katsuo has received a reply after sending a message for a long time, and there is no description of the message received or not received at all. According to the development of the plot of the novel, Katsuo is a character who will appear on the screen, and he is also one of the few collaborators of the protagonist. He should be regarded as a supporting character, but in the end he was written as a walk-on character. The same is true for a villain who is neither male nor female. We know that he destroyed a young student and a family, and we know it entirely from the perspective of the protagonist. There is no detailed description of how bad he is, nor how he turns into a villain step by step. He is completely labeled as a villain from the perspective of the protagonist. He is a villain who will be more important in the later period, and he was eventually written as a walk-on character. It only tells the story of three people from beginning to end, oh! No, the other one is not a human yet, and it is all told from the perspective of the protagonist. The subsequent collection of spiritual items from Sequencers is too smooth. Most of them are like the worms they encounter. What they get is not the spiritual items they need most. Planting flowers intentionally but not blooming, unintentionally inserting willows will make them shade. It should be more realistic. In the end, the Sequencer items collected first are not what the protagonist needs. Importantly, only by writing against the protagonist's thoughts can we break the protagonist's thinking. Only by describing the story to people or things that are beyond the protagonist's sight can we break the protagonist's sight. Only by breaking the world described with the protagonist as the center of the universe can we get closer to the real world and become more creative.
Why does it show that it has been removed from the shelves?
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