Sequence, I Have a Distortion Diary

Old book friends all know that Bai Miao will make a good outline before writing a book. There was indeed too little foreshadowing in the previous book, which led to problems with the rhythm later. I will reflect on this book and correct any bad points if they are there, and encourage them if they are not. [Sending Hearts]

The writing is good, and I haven't seen any poisonous points yet. The male protagonist's brothers are decisive in killing. The main male protagonist is the elder brother. He is very wise and humane. Although he has been desperate, he still hopes that more compatriots can survive. The younger brother seems to blindly listen to his elder brother, but he is not bad at all. When facing children, he still has compassion without hurting himself. The author's skills are good, and the human nature in it is real. The weapon administrator, the skeleton girl, and the child in E-area are all very real. It feels like watching best friend + brother Huozi. I hope the two brothers can become gods in the end and go to a higher place in this weird world. The elder brother does research that he doesn't want to do for his younger brother. I hope the two of them can reach the top together in this life. Highly recommended! ! ! ! ! (This should be regarded as Changping. The author of such a good book without a rating is still begging for Changping. I feel really sad...) If you've seen Girlfriends, you can come and check it out, it's very delicious~ If you have watched Brother Huozi, you can come and take a look. He is not as crazy but his style is more cunning~ Those who haven't seen Girlfriends should come and see it to open up a new world~

It is very innovative. It starts with a rebirth, and does not follow the development of the previous life. It sets some pitfalls, such as the eyes, the owner of the diary, and the future of some minor characters. If possible, I hope the author can make the rewards of the protagonist not necessarily what he wants, and don't make the rewards like a wishing machine, just like the ability of the shadow clone. I thought it belonged to the woman who went there, but ended up going to find an ally of Katsuo. It's great, at least it didn't make me guess the future correctly. I want to see something new now, come on! ! Author, write a good book and keep updating. As long as you keep updating, I will always be with you [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [flying kiss] [love] [love] [love]

I heard that the author wants to make a long review, so I'll see if I can figure out the word count. First of all, the author's cat is very cute and fluffy. I like it very much. It would be great if I could touch it. Secondly, you damn human trafficker, I can tell at a glance that this is my cat. If you give it back to me, I will even let me live in a mansion, drive a luxury car, eat and drink well. (In gibberish) I've made up a hundred words, but I don't know how to make it a long review. I'd like to think about it a little more clearly. Ah, by the way, the author said that he would have the opportunity to dress us in women's clothing in the future. I'm not particularly interested in this or that. After all, I'm a girl. Yes, I'm not very interested in the author's women's clothing. That's how it goes. Then some people will definitely be interested. We all have some idea of ​​who these people are, right? You don't need me to come out one by one, right? Then I added it together and it came to 300 words. I'll just say three more points. . . Wow, I have worked so hard to find the number of words for the author to write a long review. Can't you tell if this book is good or not? If that doesn't work, just look up and look at the five stars. Ahem, I must have put together so many words because I have fallen in love with the author's cat. It's soft and looks good at first glance. Ruarua (continues gibbering) Kitten - I touch it, I touch it, I touch it. What's wrong?

According to my observation, when you ate spaghetti today, you encountered a bad businessman who did not mix No. 42 Concrete and used inferior screws, which seriously affected your torque, thereby affecting the output of UFOs. Insufficient absorption caused internal honey imbalance, leading to disordered emission systems, causing serious nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and the charger. I personally think that this pasta should be mixed with No. 42 Concrete. Because of the length of this screw, it can easily directly affect the torque of the excavator. You know, when you smash it in, it will produce a large amount of high-energy protein in an instant, commonly known as UFO, which will seriously affect economic development and even cause certain nuclear pollution to the entire Pacific Ocean and chargers. You know? Furthermore, based on the Pythagorean theorem, you can easily infer that the artificially bred Hideki Tojo can capture wild trigonometric functions. Therefore, whether Qin Shihuang's section is radioactive or whether Trump's Nth power contains sediment will not affect the rendezvous between Wal-Mart and Welcome in the Antarctic. I don't know if it counts as a long review [laughs crookedly]

I have to say that this sequence of books is okay. Although the protagonist is reborn and the setting is a bit shabby, I quite like the character of the protagonist. Although the protagonist has gone crazy before being reborn and becomes bloodthirsty in order to achieve his goals, but later in the article it can be seen that the protagonist's humanity still exists, and his respect for life is more in line with this kind of sequence. The character of the protagonist It's not bad. It's not just about not being a virgin and then killing people randomly. The character of the protagonist is still in line with the moral bottom line of the public. It seems quite comfortable. If it's a bit toxic, it's not too toxic, because the character of the protagonist is well set up. Generally, a book like this won't have a lot of toxic points. However, there are still too few chapters in the book. It is recommended to read it before reading it, otherwise it will be a bit uncomfortable [laughter]

It's okay, I can still watch it so far, and it suits my preferences. There is currently no female protagonist, the protagonists are a pair of brothers, the plot development is okay, the speed is suitable, the logic is reasonable, and it is still enjoyable. There are some knowledge points that fit the content of the novel, and it can be seen that the author is very sophisticated. I won't keep books for the time being, waiting for updates [exploration] To commemorate my lost time, I haven't read the ending of the author's book yet [crying]

If you want to describe a real world, the play must not only have only one family relationship, but also be mixed with other emotional storylines such as friendship and love. The main story cannot only revolve around one or two people. It will be more realistic to write more supporting characters or two-corner triangle plots. It will be better to have more narrations to modify the plot, rather than blindly describing the perspective of the protagonist. Nowadays, most novels are written with the protagonist as the center, and other characters or descriptions are either mentioned in one or several strokes, or they are "autobiographies" centered on the protagonist or the protagonist's cognition. The works written in this way do not look like a real and huge world, but like a false world, and the center of the universe is the protagonist. For example, for Katsuo in the storyline, the description technique is basically one stroke or a few strokes. We don't know how her skeletons came from. She can only know that she has skeletons through the protagonist's sight. Later, the message she sends to the protagonist has a male-to-female ratio of 1:5 and the speed of the avatar is grayed out. It is most obvious during the day when all the messages are sent. For such a long time, the protagonist seems to know nothing. He is completely immersed in the protagonist's world and has lost his perception of the outside world. We have no idea what is happening outside, just like the protagonist. Whether the protagonist has seen it, whether Katsuo has received a reply after sending a message for a long time, and there is no description of the message received or not received at all. According to the development of the plot of the novel, Katsuo is a character who will appear on the screen, and he is also one of the few collaborators of the protagonist. He should be regarded as a supporting character, but in the end he was written as a walk-on character. The same is true for a villain who is neither male nor female. We know that he destroyed a young student and a family, and we know it entirely from the perspective of the protagonist. There is no detailed description of how bad he is, nor how he turns into a villain step by step. He is completely labeled as a villain from the perspective of the protagonist. He is a villain who will be more important in the later period, and he was eventually written as a walk-on character. It only tells the story of three people from beginning to end, oh! No, the other one is not a human yet, and it is all told from the perspective of the protagonist. The subsequent collection of spiritual items from Sequencers is too smooth. Most of them are like the worms they encounter. What they get is not the spiritual items they need most. Planting flowers intentionally but not blooming, unintentionally inserting willows will make them shade. It should be more realistic. In the end, the Sequencer items collected first are not what the protagonist needs. Importantly, only by writing against the protagonist's thoughts can we break the protagonist's thinking. Only by describing the story to people or things that are beyond the protagonist's sight can we break the protagonist's sight. Only by breaking the world described with the protagonist as the center of the universe can we get closer to the real world and become more creative.

Why does it show that it has been removed from the shelves?

Baopuzi said: "Xuanzhe is the ancestor of nature, and all kinds of things are different." The bulk is also [1]. I am ignorant of how deep it is, so I call it micro. Yan. Mianmiao is as far away as it is, so it is called Miaoyan. Its high principle The crown covers the sky (2), and its vastness covers the eight corners of the sky. (3). The light is as bright as the sun and the moon, and the speed is as fast as lightning. Or flicker The scene passes, or it floats and stars flow (4), or it ripples in the abyss Clear, or the atmosphere is plump and the clouds are floating. It exists because of omens, and it is latent. Silence and nothingness. Falling into the deep darkness and sinking (5), Ling Chenji And upstream (6). Gold

There is no heroine, but it looks good so far. The brothers are both civil and military, the eldest brother is the protagonist, and there is a plant pet. The plot is relaxed and relaxed. The author has already completed a book on Tomato. This new book draws on the strong points and complements the weak points. It does not seem to be procrastinating, and there is no brainless plot. It is a rebirth novel. There is no sense of frustration in order to suppress the male protagonist's force. There is no water word count when describing the law/panel. The chat channel reasonably promotes the plot. There is no brainless sameness in the style of a repeater. The sequence is novel and the updates are timely. Those who like to read sequences can join it.

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A good book, worth reading. The content of the author's book is clear. If the author is allowed to grow up for a few years, the author may become a famous tomato god [please update]. If the author wants a long review, I will give you an example. However, the ministers of the bodyguard are tireless at home, and the loyal people forget about themselves outside. This is because they want to repay the special experience of the late emperor to His Majesty. It is sincerely appropriate to open Zhang Shengting to honor the legacy of the late emperor and to magnify the spirit of the people with lofty ideals. It is not appropriate to belittle oneself, to use metaphors that are unjust, and to block the road of loyalty and admonishment. The palace and the mansion are all integrated; there should be no similarities or differences in terms of punishment and punishment. If there are those who commit crimes and are loyal and good, they should be punished and rewarded by a judge to show your majesty's common sense. It is not suitable to be partial and make different laws inside and outside. The ministers, such as Guo Youzhi, Fei Yi, Dong Yun, etc., Are all good and solid, with loyal and pure aspirations. Therefore, the late emperor simply removed them and left them to Your Majesty. If you are foolish and think that all matters in the palace are no matter how big or small, if you consult them carefully and then implement them, you will definitely be able to make up for the deficiencies and benefit a lot. General Xiang Chong was a man of good character and well-versed in military affairs. He tried to use it in the past. The late emperor called him Neng, and he was elected as the governor by consensus. If you are foolish enough to think about the affairs in the camp and consult them carefully, you will be able to make the formation harmonious and gain the advantage and disadvantage. Being close to virtuous ministers and staying away from villains is why the early Han Dynasty prospered; being close to villains and being distant from virtuous ministers is why the later Han Dynasty declined. When the late emperor was still alive, whenever he discussed this matter with his ministers, he would always sigh and hate Huan and Lingye. The ministers, ministers, chief historians, and soldiers who have joined the army are all ministers who have learned about the death of Zhenliang. I hope your majesty will trust them, and the prosperity of the Han Dynasty will be calculated in the coming days. I am a commoner, working hard in Nanyang, trying to survive in troubled times, and not seeking to learn and reach the princes. The late emperor did not think that his ministers were despicable, and he was in vain. He paid three visits to his ministers in the thatched cottage, and the ministers were grateful for the affairs of the world, so they allowed the late emperor to drive away. Later, when the army was overthrown, I was appointed to the position when the army was defeated, and I was ordered to be in danger. You have been here for twenty-one years. The late emperor was cautious in informing his ministers, so when he was about to die, he sent his ministers important news. Since receiving the order, I have been lamenting all night, fearing that the entrustment would not be effective and would harm the late emperor's wisdom. Therefore, I crossed Lu in May and reached a barren depth. Now that the south has been secured and the troops are sufficient, it is time to lead the three armies to the north to secure the central plains. The common people are exhausted and the slaves are dull, the traitors are eliminated, the Han Dynasty is restored, and the old capital is restored. This minister owes his duty to the late Emperor and to be loyal to His Majesty. As for considering profits and losses, and giving honest advice, then you, yi, and yun are left to their own devices. May your Majesty ask your ministers to bring the thieves back to life. If this is not effective, then you will be punished for their crimes, so as to appeal to the spirit of the late emperor. If there are no words to promote virtue, then blame You Zhi, Yi, Yun, etc. For their slowness, so as to make the blame clear; Your Majesty should also make plans for yourself, consult the good ways, observe the elegant words, and follow the late emperor's edicts deeply. I am extremely grateful. Now I should stay away. I am in tears and don't know what to say.

Damn it, why has it been taken off the shelves?

After all, it's gone

It's a bit of a bargain in the early stage~ [laughs crookedly] On the Mid-Autumn Festival in Bingchen, I was drunk until the end of the day, so I wrote this article because I was pregnant with my son. When will the bright moon appear? Ask the sky for wine. I don't know what year it is today in the palace in the sky. I want to ride the wind back home, but I'm afraid it's too cold in the high places. Dance and clear the shadow, how can it be like being in the human world? Turn to the Zhu Pavilion, look down at the Qihu, and the light will make you sleepless. There shouldn't be any hatred, so what's the point of saying goodbye? People have joys and sorrows, separations and reunions, and the moon waxes and wanes. This is a difficult thing in ancient times. I hope that people will live long and share the beauty of the moon thousands of miles apart.

Three stars is considered a relatively reasonable rating at present. The character setting is relatively solid. There are no serious mistakes in the plot so far. The background is blurry and there is no clear explanation of the past and present life. It is very confusing. For the sake of the cat, I give you five stars.

After reading it, it is very consistent with the idea in my mind. As long as you don't be too brainless, the most important thing is that the description must be accurate. The description of the world cannot be monotonous, but you cannot forget about the companions who have traveled through time. I am convinced. I am not a sailor. How should I evaluate it? This idea is very good, but I don't know how to say it. Anyway, it's really good-looking.

This novel is a compelling work that deftly blends reality and memory to immerse the reader in a rich plot. The author has excellent performance in character creation and emotional description, allowing readers to deeply feel the protagonist's inner world. In addition, the structure of the novel is compact and the writing is fluent, allowing people to read it in one sitting and have endless aftertaste. Five-star praise, ahem... I am not commenting just to see women's clothing [laughs]

It's very interesting, but the first few chapters and the introduction are not very attractive, but the whole story is still very attractive. The only thing I worry about is that the author is afraid that the author will discontinue the update and the ending will be unfinished. It will be a pity if it feels like this. I hope the author will stick to it. Come on.

It's really exciting, I won't regret watching it! I really don't want such an interesting novel to die QAQ

A very good story, not a brainless novel, but actually an adventure in another world.

I now strongly suspect that the author has a Cthulhu-style book, which contains the fantasy of a junior high school student in his third year of junior high school. There are many things that are very similar to the anchor points, laws, reality, death, gods, planes, etc. In this book. They were generated by me under high pressure at the time. Reading this book really makes me happy. I feel very familiar, as if I wrote it at that time (of course I didn't write it at that time, I just wrote a lot of world views and many things that are not the same). In the end, I can only say that although the author's writing style feels weird, I will always support the author just because of the similar elements in it.

It was very comfortable to read, and the chapters in the wilderness at the beginning felt almost the same as the original sequence.

This book is really good. I actually finished reading it without reading the poisonous part. Is this a book that can be found on Tomato? Come on, author.

A very good novel, with a sequence and a different world for everyone. The strange setting is mysterious but also has its own innovation. The layout is large and the content is also very exciting. The prostitution party is ecstatic

It's great, can't wait for the next chapter🔥🔥🔥

Just read this novel, and you'll be speechless after reading it [laughing evilly]

Great book, very recommended to read

The rhythm is very good. I highly recommend it. It's a new book. Come on (ง •̀_•́)ง