The Beginning of Hell, If It Is Not Closed, It Is Open?

The appearance of another world is really unexpected, and the details are well controlled. There are many characters, but they are not repeated. I can only sigh, "The heroes of the world are like the crucian carp crossing the river." There are not many jokes, but it also adds depth.

I didn't expect it to be unexpectedly good-looking. The climax of the whole story is non-stop and exciting. It is the top among tomato fantasy, after all, it is the best in history. It has been two years and he is still updating. I will not give up.

See Chapter 104 My personal suggestion is to add more elements to the system and avatars. ① You can try to fuse the avatar. The existence of other weak substitutes is very low, and they are becoming more and more numerous and mixed. ② Improve the setting of main tasks and side tasks. So does the lottery. After all, except for paying attention to these when receiving rewards, the rest of the time is like a small transparency, and the rewards are not written out in advance. When receiving the rewards later, I feel that the rewards are a bit confusing. Why do you think this task has this reward? ③The avatar has evolved and the use of avatars has been strengthened. Most of the time, the stand-in plays the protagonist himself and is not very good at manipulation. Moreover, the substitute's weight level is relatively low just after being drawn. His strength cannot defeat the immortals, and his ability cannot reach the level of immortals. You can upgrade faster when upgrading. The concept of ability can be stronger. ④ Take the time to write a few chapters to describe the characters that appeared earlier. Otherwise, they will become more scattered as we go to the later stage. Write the connection between the characters and make the characters fit the main line. ⑤The collapse of heaven, the vast world, the separation between immortals and mortals, and the struggle between immortals and magic. You can find an opportunity to unify the main elements of these articles and improve the world view. Well, I feel like I talk a bit too much. I thought this book was well paced. The content setting is rich and the character descriptions are also fascinating. In summary, the content, plot, and characters are rich. But I didn't feel the main emotion. Unlike those cool articles, you don't know what you read after reading them. The content is repetitive and the same. Sum up this book in three words New knowledge. Novel. Rich

It's okay, but the process of grabbing people is a bit too long, and there are too few memes. Please provide more interesting memes.

Xianpin, the writing is not bad at the beginning, it is as long as noodles but not smelly, it just makes people a little irritated. The subsequent plot is well connected, and the memes are included in the article in a way that less appears and more is used, and less wins more. It is really writing a fanfic about memes instead of using memes. The protagonist is almost invincible among his peers, but he has the setting of a large and small world in the same sea of ​​chaos. The addition of characters who can crush or defeat him at the right time makes him not have the characteristics of invincible fast-food novels that are more exciting and less likely to cause impotence. Summary: md is less and good-looking Ending: Well, yes, it's me. This is 5 stars. More to come!

The author is rich in imagination and writes very well about combat power. However, the world view is opened too fast and I may not be used to it. The events in this world are not over and then jumps to the next world, which gives people a confusing feeling. Because of the perspective of readers, they will prefer the first one described, so I always think it is the main one. The character will return to the first world to join the sword sect or pick up the previous leaks, but seeing that he has never been there now, he has to accept new information. This is why I said there is a sense of confusion, and I feel that the first world is well written. Why do people say that the procrastination of the sword sect and so on are all well written.

There are novel themes, the characters have souls, and the most important thing is that there is no sense of contradiction. It is rare that all people and things develop in a reasonable and reasonable way. The characters have independent thoughts and three views, and there are no flaws. It is very comfortable to watch. It is the kind of "this story is not because he is the protagonist, but because of this story he becomes the protagonist."

It's good-looking, don't let the jokes put you off, it's quite good, it has brains, reason, and jokes. But I am sane throughout the whole process. I recommend reading it. If there is a twist, don't complain. I see that there are no poisonous points. I recommend it. ૧(●´৺`●)૭ I hope the author will work hard. Come on I've seen Chapter 398 so far

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This book is worth reading in the early stages, but the background and foreshadowing are too long in the early stage, which makes many people impatient to give up in the early stage. The later stage is very interesting.

I hope that the protagonist can finally abstract the road and become a god by playing tricks. Also, I feel that the protagonist has played too many high-end rounds. Either he didn't play well, he felt that he didn't have time to develop, or he was too tired.

It's good to read, but no one likes the name. The cover is not good. In the early stage, Dihua let people who like wits go. In the later stage, wits are very good. Tiyi opens a trumpet and writes with brains. When you read the first chapter, you will be crazy about wits. More talents will stay. And most of the people who like to read novels are just reading novels. There are very few old bookworms. Without these, there will be no traffic. In the early stage, Dihua opened a trumpet and published a trumpet. The title of the trumpet was changed to "Collapse of the Great Road, Weird Cultivation of Immortality, Start of Hell, I Sweep the World as a Stand-in for Meme"

There's not much to say, it's long enough, exciting enough, the rhythm is very good, the content is humorous and tense, and it's well grasped. The best part is the fight scene.

Kids, this novel loves elbow strikes.

The first snatching scene uses too much pen and ink, and it seems too draggy to keep reversing, but overall it's still good.

Resurrect me the Valley of Punishment Our Guzhen Assembly will judge you

Have you already refined the Immortal Gu of Persistence, Haqixi, you guy? Hakisi, you guy, I'll give you five stars [laughing]

It's okay, but the style in the early stage is a bit different from the style in the later stage. The early stage is a coincidence of wits, and of course it's limited to the first volume. In the later stage, I'm constantly being chased by a high-intensity boss, and then I fight back and become stronger at the same time. The biggest problem for me in this book is that there are really too few authors, and they update every few days.

I want to know the secret of how many jobs the author works in a day.

It's good-looking. I like this kind of literature with the collision between various abilities.

Absolute five-star praise. To be honest, this book is very well written.

What a slap in the face.

I feel like this book was delayed by the title.

Good, good, good, good, good, good, good

I hope the author can persevere. I have read many wonderful books that have stopped writing due to the popularity. Some have been transferred to other platforms, and some have been suppressed and blocked. I hope you can become popular someday. Many books that seem to have high ratings are all industrial saccharine, yandere, female domineering, and have nothing to do with the subject matter. The author will not write it without adding it. It is rare to find pure novels.

Jotaro is so handsome, his face must be very good and won't crack (ಡωಡ) [to be immune to the portal to another world]

In addition to making bad jokes, the writing style is relatively light and barbaric novels. If you are tired of fighting, you can read it. In this stand-in system, the first person to think of it must be Jojo, but getting a stand-in in this system is completely different from Jojo's stand-in. It's because of the existence of skills. The only thing that looks like a stand-in is Picto or the time-limited one.

It's really good to watch. There are no bugs in logic or the character of the protagonist. There are not many protagonists with brains.

Although it was a bit too slow in the early stages, it still cannot hide its excellent content.

Five stars, if you dare to stop updating, I will open the box and cut you [smile] I begged my adoptive father to update more [crying] It is a novel full of jokes. The description of the battle is very detailed, but the rest is just average. It is a bit messy but beautiful. The relationship between the characters is not clear and confusing, but for some reason it is very enjoyable to read. Forget it, no nonsense. I just like to read this kind of novels that are very funny.