The Chronicles of Akajiadelo

This book is a relatively good new book. You can give it a try. I have read Chapter 99 so far. Let me talk about my feelings after reading it. First of all, although the author wrote in the introduction that the book is in the style of a fairy tale, and the encounters between people in the text are also as beautiful as fairy tales. After all, it is impossible to care for you just after you meet a stranger (this kind of thing in the book is indeed more like a fairy tale), but after reading it, I still feel that it is wrapped in a fairy tale and describes some darker things. Secondly, this book can be read as a group portrait article. Although the introduction is about a single female protagonist, it uses another perspective to express the story between the male and female protagonists and team members. The story is narrated from the perspective of the group's favorite (probably) Xilian, telling the story of meeting and growing up with the male and female protagonists (Rorschach, Dongya), roommates Venina, Ye Yasi, and companion Notya (now these people, I don't know if Kitty Girl counts). This perspective is very good. It not only describes Xiao Xillian's personal growth, but also shows the sweet relationship between the male and female protagonists. It no longer focuses on the male and female protagonists to unfold the story, which is not bad. Then, the character creation in the book is quite good, with their own distinctive characteristics, which can be expressed through every incident. In addition, the main plot of this book should be obvious, so I won't reveal too much. The story is roughly based on college life, and the overall atmosphere is relatively relaxed and pleasant. In addition, in the first-year competition, the final ended a bit too quickly. No other team performed better after losing, so it was a bit rushed to end. Finally, let's talk about the problem. Some typos and wording need to be considered to better fit the context. Another point is that I hope the combat power system will not be too broken. It's okay now. The character's move names can be changed to conform to the labels. After all, with double quotes, I thought they were all shouted out 🤦 [sneaky smile], during the battle. The book is overall pretty good. Although the writing is a bit immature, the story is told very well. It is very good. If you like a single female protagonist, you can read it. There is nothing sinister about it. The female protagonist is very cute! 😏[Laughing] I hope the author can tell the whole story. 👍[Learned]

It's good for a novice, but this narrative perspective makes it difficult to tell who is the protagonist. Also, Xilian, you said later that she fought alone to survive and relied on caution, but she was deceived earlier 🤦

The character creation is very good, with a distinct personality and no poisonous points, especially hope Lian's positioning, she is independent and self-reliant, but also gentle and cute. The emotional lines of the male and female protagonists are at full level at the beginning. Instead, they can focus on other places and sprinkle sugar from time to time. Currently, most of it describes daily life and the academy, but it also establishes the framework of the world in a few words. I hope to expand the map soon.

Daily life is okay, but the main body of the narrative makes it difficult to distinguish who is the heroine. Compared to Dongya, Xilian has more scenes, and she feels more like the protagonist of the entire novel.