Black Mist Sequence

One of the few that allowed me to read from scratch to the end. It has some shortcomings, but overall it is very, very well written and has a strong sense of immersion. But it seems that the update will be discontinued. I hope the author will write more [Thinking]

How should I put it? There is nothing wrong with the plot of this book in terms of traditional sequence flow. The fact that the protagonist just gains power and uses it but then finds that his body cannot bear it is very endearing. It makes people feel that it is not just for the sake of pleasure. The subsequent increase in combat power is not too fast, which provides a good foreshadowing for the subsequent plot. Now that it has reached 200,000 words, I feel that the early stage should have been well prepared. At least it will be enough to keep the combat power from collapsing later. I hope more people will read it to give the author the motivation to update twice every day.

I suggest that there be less scenes of pretense and slaps in the face. It's a bit too much now and it's just not pleasing to the eye.

Fortunately, I like this style

Bookworms don't rate randomly

Well written! Good! Good!

Not bad, the flaws don't hide the flaws

The author must keep updating [crying][crying][crying] Don't be a eunuch, this is the best book on Tomato. If you keep writing it, it will definitely become popular [crying][crying][crying][crying]

The logic is good and the details are well written. I'll give it a try!

It's been a long time since I've seen such a beautiful sequence cheat article.

Why do so few people see it?

It's very interesting. I hope the author keeps writing. I really like the character of the protagonist and his friends [shy][shy]

Not bad, keep up the good work

It's a bit rushed at the end, but overall it's pretty good.

Apart from the slightly shorter edges, it's really good in other aspects. The innovation of the plot, characters, and sequences must be praised! Looking forward to the second part [Like][Like]

It's so good. When will the second part be released? I want to watch it [Like]

The writing is delicate, and there are no brainless plots for the time being. It is a rare good book in Tomato. It is a pity that it is not promoted well and there are too few reviews.

When will the black fog sequence appear?

The plot content is wonderful, delicate and smooth, very beautiful and very interesting.