Honkai: Star Rail: Everyone, Please Enter the Dream

This book is very good, but there are no punctuation marks. It is not very comfortable to read and listen to. I hope the author will pay more attention to it. One more thing, I hope the author will stick to writing. Xingtie's books are really one less book to read. Come on!

How can I say that I fell in love with this type of book because of a game? The writing is quite good, but it is a newly published book and has not been updated much. You can put it on your bookshelf to fatten up and read it later.

Brother, please put some punctuation marks. This is so smooth.

Brother, don't you do it in sections? [Stare]

If possible, you can re-segment the first few pictures.

The Headphone Party is dead

Nice writing! The overall structure is also very clear, and it reads smoothly. I hope the author will work hard!

There was a small problem with sentence fragmentation in the early stage, but the author corrected it in the later stage. Although the previous post has not been corrected yet, maybe he was too busy studying! I hope the holiday can be changed and it will be better! Come on!