Thriller: I Created an Alien Asylum

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There is a feeling that it is tasteless and a pity to abandon. The protagonist rarely appears, and the characters in it hardly interact with the protagonist. Sometimes I even forget the existence of the protagonist. I have never been clear about the extent of the organization's popularity. When I wrote about some events, according to the description at the time, the popularity should be very high. However, when I moved on to the next event, I felt that only a few people knew about it. Moreover, in the early stage, the organization felt very huge. As a result, when I was writing the plot later, all kinds of extremely weak enemies came to provoke the organization and it felt like mosquitoes. It was obvious that the strength was crushing and it had to be dragged hard. There was no decent opponent. The only one was played by the protagonist himself. The appearance rate was also very low. People who watched it were really frustrated. The plot is also very slow, and the character performances are very, very slow. After watching it for a long time, I felt lonely. There are also many places where the writing is very vague, making the reader's head confused. But of course I think the author's characterization is still very good. The characters in it have distinctive personalities and are quite likable. The setting of the protagonist attracting scheming members is also very interesting. This book has some good and bad qualities, it all depends on personal preference.

Yi Shengda's writing style has been improving all the time. From Shen Yan, who played the villain boss at the beginning of 2021, to Shen Li, who created the strange lord, and now President Shen Yu of the Alien Containment Organization, each of the extraordinary beings, related supporting characters, and world view are very fascinating, and most of the author's novels are non-CP (this is highly recommended). The human laws and regulations in the protagonist's organization make people see that they are different from the aloof Western gods, but rather benevolent human gods. The novel also features a large world exploration similar to a mini-game. The characters of the supporting characters are also very clear: the bitchy and arrogant bad-mouthed (Wei Tai), the impatient and stubborn, Bo who is loyal to the witch, the strong woman Ling Hanyu, Xu Zhou who is rediscovering himself, the worried supervisor Ji Wu, Zhang Lin who protects the masses, the unlucky Young Master Yuexia (appears in the Beimu plot)... From the "villain" to the member of the Alien Club, all the distinctive characters make people see the various little people in reality. The conspirators played by the president, Bai Zuo, the "crazy criticizing evil son", or Asuka A who pursues freedom, their stories are very interesting, and the movie viewing in special scenes always makes my eyes shine, and I look forward to more descriptions. There are also big foreshadowings buried in the president. He has a mysterious and strange physique (the succubus president), the wind disaster (man-made disaster) in the former natural disaster organization, and the inadvertent nostalgia revealed make the president even more mysterious. This work also has great linkages with other works, such as the great god of games - Shenqi, etc. It is expected that more characters will be added later. "Different tracks, different paths, but different paths leading to the same destination." In short, I hope that the pit will be filled slowly. ૮₍˃̶ꇴ˂̶₎ა

This author is an old one. I liked the Illusionist he wrote at the beginning, and the White Zuo and White Bird A he wrote now are also very cool [blowing kiss] Bai Zuo: gloomy and full of malice, manipulating people's hearts, weaving traps and tasting malicious spiders [send heart] White Bird a: A proud and confident bird with broken wings, white hair and red eyes that controls the storm, so handsome [shy] The strength of life remains the same as before [love] [love] [love]

This book has completely grown on my XP. I also want to ask when new character cards will be available. Also, I want to ask, is there a female protagonist? If there is a female protagonist, forget it, I hope it is one without a female protagonist.

Super good-looking, I really like the president, the president is simply a succubus 🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺🥺 and the boss Bai Zuo and Asuka A. Well, I actually like them all, hehehehehehehehehe. I like both the Cunning Master and the Cunning God very much! ! The character cards created by the author are so beautiful and charming that they are full of personality. That is, there are more and more character cards now! ! I'm so looking forward to it, so looking forward to it, so looking forward to it, so looking forward to it! ! In fact, I'm a little bit hesitant to continue reading it, because of your series ꒦ິ^꒦ິ. I hope I can read it slowly and then stock up on more. It would be better if the author could directly release the ending ꒦ິ^꒦ິ.

I like this plot very much! The new White Bird A really pokes fun at me, I love having fun! Chishengda, can you choose a time that is not in the underworld? The time you update is really in the underworld. I can't catch up on time every time [I'm about to cry][cry][cry]

The subject matter is very good, I like it very much, it is also because of the four stars, but also because of how to say it? Anyway, I have an inexplicable feeling that there are too many exclamation points. If they appear more frequently, it will create a sense of writing for the first time, because only they can feel from the bottom of their hearts that there will be an exclamation mark in this paragraph, and then again. An exclamation mark, an exclamation mark, the kind that you always add an exclamation mark whenever you feel something ups and downs in your heart. In fact, you can replace the exclamation mark with other behaviors, reduce the frequency of use, language, top notes, etc., Add a little more, small actions. I really feel like it could use a little less exclamation points. Really, really, you can use less and more exclamation words. I don't recommend using more exclamation words at all. You really need to use less exclamation points in writing, more vocabulary, or some small actions, which can be replaced. You can see the meaning of the exclamation mark, but I really feel that it doesn't matter. But if you really feel that the temperament is missing, you can use more vocabulary. All the above are some opinions that I really like this subject matter and can't help but express. I really like this subject matter, but the writing style seems a bit unacceptable. I don't mean to belittle it. It's my own personal reason. I have read several such white articles before. Basically, there is only an exclamation point in a paragraph. That kind of thing, after encountering several books, may leave a psychological shadow, and then think about it and you may be a little bit unable to control it. Of course, this one is okay, and it is not widely used. At least it does not add an exclamation mark to every sentence. The feeling of using the exclamation mark as a period is really painful. Let me reiterate, this is not that serious, but I can't control it a bit, but I really like this subject matter, and I can't help but pick up the wall. Although it is not necessary to use the exclamation mark as a period, an exclamation mark will appear after a few chapters after the period, so what can I say? Okay, I admit that I am a bit lacking in words. I don't know how to describe it. I really can't stand that feeling. The subject matter is so good, but I can't hold it back.

It's very good, and it suits my taste. There was a novel before that also had a role, but it was too much about female romances, so I had to reluctantly delete it. The characters are well drawn (≧∇≦*), but I hope that each character has his own thoughts instead of being played by the protagonist.

It's worth appreciating. When I first saw this book, I thought it was some kind of horror world with unlimited flow. After reading the introduction, I was a little confused, but after reading the comments, I had the mentality of giving it a try. The more I read, the more attracted I was to continue reading. 1. The protagonist's imprisonment is in line with the public's sentiments. He has a beautiful appearance, is calm and thoughtful, and is extremely intelligent. The direction of everything is under his control, which greatly guarantees that he will not suffer losses. He is also very decisive in killing things that touch his own interests, and will not be soft-hearted. He also has a gentle atmosphere, his IQ is always online, and he knows how to weigh the pros and cons. 2. The writing style is natural, easy to understand, and the descriptions are detailed and vivid. It has a sense of picture. It makes me immersed in the scene. The simple and natural descriptions are even more vivid. Many long-form writings cannot express that feeling. Kangkang has recalled countless scenes in his mind after a few strokes. His evaluation is sublimated. The characters in the writing have their own characteristics and will not repeat their personalities. They are all unique. Just by looking at it, you can know what kind of character this person is, and they will not automatically be substituted for that kind of look. You can tell at a glance that an ordinary person is boring and has no fresh feeling, especially for a character with many and important roles. When you watch the descriptions, language, and actions, your mind will automatically fill in the descriptions, language, and actions, and even the fantasy sounds, as if they are really a living person, and the details are particularly in place. Through some small details, the characteristics of the character itself are enriched, and a lot of descriptions and plots are incorporated into it, which makes me upside down! The description of the characters is spot on! A lot of words and ink have been incorporated to make the characters fuller. Even if the subsequent characters appear without too much description, they have automatically replaced the already established characters... And will not collapse. 3. The plot is novel and stands out from the crowd of cliche plots. It belongs to the world view and has a unique nature. All aspects are carefully set up to shape it. After watching it, I only have one thought that is reasonable and correct. Summary: Worth recommending, don't be fooled by the name and label description!

It's really nice. I got it from the book publisher. At first I didn't understand why the main character was called President Succubus. But when I saw him later I missed him when I couldn't see him. I really hope he can appear in every picture [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] [crying] President, please show up soon.

I only watched the early stage, and I gave it four stars mainly because some of the characters were more attractive to me, and the excitement of Dihua + the behind-the-scenes flow was enough to give me two stars. Everything else is pretty average. What's more annoying is that there are too many exclamation points. It feels like they are used as periods [Thinking] After reading a few more chapters, I found that there are many flaws. .

The book's character introduction, background, momentum, and the mystery of the protagonist and president are all very well written. It is also very well written about some weirdness. It is a novel worth reading. The only shortcoming may be... Author, can you update it quickly? It is not enough to read, not enough to read at all, so points will be deducted. I really hope you can read one chapter per second. The more you read, the more addictive you become. Alas, I love and hate it at the same time.

The big behind-the-scenes text is as beautiful as ever

It looks good, but there is one small flaw. Of course, it may just be my fault, that is, there are very few scenes for the protagonist. It was originally intended for the protagonist, but in the end, there are really very few scenes for the protagonist! This should be a group-oriented article, right? To be honest, I don't really like to watch group portraits, but this one looked okay, but the protagonist's role is really too small! I really like the protagonist, I like it very much! ! ! It would be great if there were more scenes! First of all, let me say that he is not behind the scenes now, so I didn't know about it at first. I came here for the protagonist, but the role of the protagonist is really very small, so don't scold me again! Don't talk about behind-the-scenes stories. The protagonist has only a small role, and he has no standard!

There are currently more than 300 chapters in progress. So far, this is a very good behind-the-scenes article. Each character's personality is very unique and not broken. Maybe this group portrait has too much content? Many characters that I personally think are quite unique and important are often highlighted in more than a dozen chapters after their appearance, but it is a pity that there is not much space in the later period...

The beginning of the book is a little bit toxic. For example, the patrolman was a little too upright (of course it may be a problem with the Tomato author's writing style), and then he was controlled. When he saw Bai Zuo for the first time, his first thought was--what do you think of life? I was very confused when I saw it. Although I don't know how to describe this scene, I always felt that this question was very confusing when placed in that clip. After arriving at the hospital, everything was calm and gradually getting better. The plot design was okay, especially the related characters were really good. At the same time, I am reading a book here, which seems to be - Subversion of the World and I am the boss behind the scenes (I can't remember the specific title of the book, can any book friends help me find it?) The characters created in it are also very good. In addition to the protagonist (the protagonist is a bit poisonous at the beginning, and then becomes a good product after joining the identity of the supervisor), there is a sentence in it about the dream master and the illusionist that is full of CP feeling - "It's you when you open your eyes, it's an illusion" "Close your eyes and it's me, dreaming" Okay, I may have spoken too early. There are still some minor problems with this book. For example, the world view is too laid out (especially the section where Beimu, the God of Wealth, comes to the company. Everyone can read that there is a problem there). In comparison, the world view of the book that overturned the world is very good (that book is also based on the earth). The story ends with a myth, and it goes directly from the planet to the multi-world), but the world view in that book is very smooth. Unlike this book, it emphasizes on the one hand the mastery of multiple worlds, and on the other hand it emphasizes that Beimu is an S-class (it only destroys cities, which refers to ability, not combat power), and the sense of isolation is a bit strong. I said it too early. There are about 650 photos. Regarding Beimu's copy of Greenleaf Company, the description is too anticlimactic. I didn't say anything about the problem or story. I just wanted to say one feeling - it was too anticlimactic! ! ! ! Too general! ! ! I really can't feel it in the early and middle stages, but it's too obvious around the 650th shot in the later stage.

It looks good, and the interaction between the president and his employees is super delicious! I just want to watch the scene where Little Spider and Little Bird fight for the president~ Mr. President hehehehe (*/∇＼*)

It was fun to watch, but the plot felt like it went by too fast. I like all the characters. At first I was worried that a female protagonist would suddenly appear, but it turned out that so many of the characters were male, so I felt relieved. This is one of my favorite books among the weird novels I have read. If I have time, I will read the other three [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

So far, it looks pretty good in Tomato. There are no big bad points in the plot. The global announcement after clearing the copy may be considered one. In terms of plot, because it is behind the scenes + group portraits + self-directed and self-acted, the protagonist has less roles, and there are so many supporting roles that I may not be able to remember people. The plot is a bit childish, and it gives me the feeling that the whole world is playing house with the protagonist. This is my personal feeling after reading nearly 120 chapters. I may modify it later. If you don't want to complain about CP, remember to read less in the comment area. I have now read Chapter 250. I will simply add my opinions. It may contain spoilers. Please watch as appropriate. The problem of too many characters is becoming more and more obvious. Except for the few characters controlled by the protagonist, the supporting characters are all flat. They are almost flat, and the supporting characters are constantly increasing. I saw that there were 15 additional characters in one chapter, and 2 to 5 supporting characters were added for each character controlled. There were so many characters that I couldn't remember them at all. There are also some things to say about the plot. The first is the issue of live broadcast. Of course, this is actually a feature of this book. If you can't accept it, don't read it. The global announcement I mentioned above is actually a small problem. The live broadcast of every event really starts to affect the perception. After Chapter 120, I There are four events in my mind: Suppressing Bandits in Another World, Replenishing the Past of Characters, Solving Weirdness, and Solving Cults and Weirdness. These four events are all live broadcast for ordinary people in Blue Star. Two of them are still live broadcasted in full. It would be fine if it is just a simple live broadcast, but every time you have to join the battle with ordinary netizens. It's a bit unbearable. Every time I see these plots, it gives me a sense of déjà vu between the Tianmu Stream and the National Fortune Stream. Secondly, the plot is childish. The plots about the country and the branch always feel like a grassroots team to me. It is similar to the point of view of playing house above, but it is becoming more and more obvious. Finally, there is the issue of knocking CP. The CPs I have seen so far are almost all about men, and half of them are still related to the main character, so it doesn't look good to me. This book is almost openly knocking, and many of the paragraphs and comments are knocking the characters. If you can't accept it, just give up. That's it for now, we'll look at it later.

It's very good-looking, and the supporting characters are particularly well-cast. There is one minor drawback: the protagonist and supporting characters are too young. 15-17. There is a sense of absurdity about a bunch of brats saving the world! Some people may be a little uncomfortable looking at the details. If you only look at the plot and character creation and ignore age, it won't matter. After all, 17 is really too small. 17 Is still a minor. It just so happens that apart from her age, her character is very stable. The sense of fragmentation is too strong. When I think of a few 17-year-old kids saving the world, it's so beautiful and eye-catching

Very nice! I had been reading this for a long time, but my eyes lit up when I saw this one. I really like the feeling of the protagonist controlling everything behind the scenes. He is mysterious, powerful, tolerant of everything, and full of charm! [Adoration] Each of the bonded masters in the asylum has its own distinctive personality, and each plot is based on their recovery of the strange. It gives people the feeling of being the person in charge behind the scenes, witnessing the accident, and solving the problem! It's pretty cool and exciting. I highly recommend everyone to take a look, it's quite interesting. In the modern city, something strange is coming. What was originally the secret of China's top officials was revealed to the people at that time as they led to the tip of the iceberg of the mysterious organization hidden in the fog. Become a solid backing force for people's safety and security. (It will not be restricted by Chinese officials, it will be like a cooperative relationship, and it will be free to move) Moreover, the bond masters under his command are all mysterious and unpredictable. The feeling of burying secrets in the book is really refreshing! Highly recommended! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Mr. President, Sai Gaoヽ(✿ﾟ▽ﾟ)ノ The author, Dai Nais (≧∇≦)ﾉ, has achieved equality and every book is beautiful. I like the character, the content, the president likes, Bai Zuo likes, Asuka A likes, Fu Zhang likes, Bei Mu likes, Milan likes, Xu Zhou likes, Ji Wu likes... The author greatly prefers (broken sound) ⊂(˃̶͈̀ε ˂̶͈́ ⊂ )))Σ≡=─

It's very good-looking. As a book about the behind-the-scenes of group portraits, it's pretty good. Both the plot arrangement and the characterization are very good. The storyline is fascinating. The author is also very talented and even drew the character pictures himself. In short, it's very good. I hope the author can work hard and keep writing. (This type of novel is still relatively niche, so the author should not be discouraged [salute])

Nice! ! ! Bai Zuo's character is so annoying to me! Who understands? ! Ahhhhhhhhhhhhh! ! !

Bai Zuo and Asuka A are one of the most vivid and long-lasting characters among them, and their loyalty to the president is also the most obvious. For these two characters, the author also cares about these two characters (this can also be clearly seen, after all, they are the first two S-classes to follow the president, and the two are even somewhat at odds with each other. Dealing with it, without the president's jurisdiction, there is really no chance of fighting to the death), the growth path of the characters is traceable, and the changes are obvious. The characters in the later stages have a certain style of their own, vivid and vivid, and their life experiences are gradually added later, and the images are three-dimensional and full. Reading this book, the two of them must pay attention. The same is true for Natural Disaster. The fate between the President and Natural Disaster was forged long before the story began (referring to the timeline in the novel). Later, the two of them parted ways due to disagreements in their ideas, but they still care about each other. Natural Disaster has complicated feelings for the President. He cares about the President very much but is always angry with him? The author is a veteran in writing about role-playing genres, and has also opened a trumpet. There are also characters from the book written by another account of his appearing in the article, but it does not affect the perception. Not long after the appearance, he carefully blurred it. In the early stage, the writing style was still relatively stiff, but later on it became smoother and smoother. All in all, worth a look.

It's very interesting, and everyone enjoys it. However, I recently saw a novel that is very similar to this book, and the writing is not good. All in all, the big book is very beautiful! ! The interaction between Bai Zuo and Mi Lan is too cute

Personally, I think the writing is good, but the plot progresses slowly and quickly, which needs to be improved. Moreover, the members of the Alien Club are all controlled by the protagonist, which gives people a sense of emptiness. It feels like such a large organization depends entirely on the protagonist. It's too absolutely cool. It's really like the brain storage room has opened. Every time the aliens act, the protagonist group has to show off again.

The previous section mainly describes the protagonist's vest, but the details are rather vague and difficult to understand. Other characters, such as the trainee conspirator, are more heavily made up, and it feels like the dialogue is just to advance the plot, which makes people feel a little uncomfortable. You can also read it if you like pure and refreshing writing. Around Chapter 228, I finally got to match everyone's name with what they were doing. It wasn't just a conversation anymore. We'll have to look at it later. There are many unnecessary descriptions, and it feels like the necessary emotional connections between the "president" and other people are not written at all. They are sketched out in large sections, and the more delicate emotions cannot be grasped, making people unable to empathize. And every time a new member comes in, they have to be shocked, worship the president, and then become devoted to him. One or two is fine, but it's true that I wrote too many

The vest role-playing article feels a bit like a group portrait. The image of each vest is very three-dimensional and distinct. The author's writing style is very good and it is really beautiful [Blow kiss] In the later period, I felt that I was struggling. I either crossed the world film to other worlds to watch the players of Infinite Train break into dungeons, or I wrote about newcomers stumbling to complete tasks. The vest rarely appeared, which deviated from the core of the original writing. There used to be three or four thousand people following the update, but now there are only a few hundred. After watching Asuka A's special scene - the realm of freedom, you can retreat and it's no longer interesting.