Star Railroad: Become a Forger as an Automobile Character

First of all, congratulations to the teacher for winning the resurrection competition (clap, croak, croak, croak, clack). Although there are very few updates now, the teacher's writing style and writing style really touched me! Moreover, the teacher really made the readers take on the image of the "dumpling" classmate (after all, my friend and I were like this when we went crazy). The image of Yongxiu is also written very well. He has his own experience and personality, and is also different from Ying Xing. It makes people feel that he is an independent and pure young man who pursues his dreams. This is my first time writing a review and I feel it's confusing, but I really like the teacher's work! Teacher, come on and create! (Also: I personally don't think you should care too much about being stabbed in the original work. Since there is "Yongxiu" that is not in the original work, it means that this world has separated from the original work and is a completely new world. If you stick to the original work too much, the plot may become cramped.)

It's nice to watch. The protagonist is not the stand-in for Ah-Ren (Little Star). He is different from Ah-Ren and has his own life and his own character. In this regard, I hope everyone will not regard the protagonist's baby as Ah-Ren's stand-in! Let me talk briefly here. The plot is generally good, and there is nothing ambiguous about the characters. I feel very comfortable watching it. There are also jokes and jokes. I am very happy to watch it. And I am a CB (friend) with the character. This is a point that I want to praise a lot. Oh my God, do you know how I feel when I see this CB? I was so moved that I almost cried. I saw so many CP-oriented movies that fit my taste (I like no CP). Now I don't have much hope in seeing CB-oriented movies. There are currently no poisonous points, and the number of chapters is small. You can read it after reading it (it is not recommended to read it, because you are afraid that you will kill the book). Finally, the author would like to work hard and update! Bu Yao will cheat corpses and play resurrection matches again, please keep updating! But you should also pay attention to your health! It's best not to fall behind in your studies! Congratulations to the author for his title on the gold list! I personally think this book is very interesting! (*^▽^*)

It's really good-looking, especially the part where Blade and Yongxiu fight, and the comment of the character after getting the light cone. I cried "Wow" TT. From the perspective of a senior, he is a blessing to those who come after him. Really don't want to be too touching [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration] Recommended, good-looking, love to watch Thank you for your hard work

To be honest, I think the author's writing is great. I think it is the best among MiHoYo fanfics so far. It's limited to Tomato. I don't like other software. The other one is Captain Genshin Impact's National Games story next door. That one really depicts the image of the captain. It's a pity that it has been discontinued. There are a lot of grave-sweepers. This one is also The writing is also vivid, the characters are very vivid, there are knives, sugar, and twists and turns, the structure is reasonable, and it can be seen that it has its own understanding, not the kind of people who follow what others say and write blindly on the Internet. In short, I am looking forward to the author's follow-up, and I hope to see this book officially completed instead of hasty ending or discontinuation, five stars Author! The captain next door is back, how about you? !

Okay, okay, the author wrote it very well. Well, what I have seen so far is very good. There are no obstacles. The author also handled the part with the egret very well. Well, the description is very delicate and the details are well controlled. It's very good.

Nice! The serious and attentive craftsmen are completely real, not staged, and everything makes way for forging. Whether it's popularity or the system, it's all about getting materials. I started to wonder who the second generation of Yunshang Wuxiao is.

The author did not set the protagonist to be the second generation of Yingxing, but created a new generation of craftsmen through the protagonist's background supplement and off-site cultural hints. The shortcomings are that the plot is slow to advance, and the part of grabbing the magic sword is very abrupt and embarrassing. Even if it can be rounded off later, the look and feel is very poor. However, the flaws are not concealed, and the author is able to create a true "original protagonist" in the current cosplay text. The author is very courageous and powerful.

It's good-looking, Giant Invincible is good-looking, that is to say, I really like the sense of fate of "Yuan Yuan Lei Qing" and the collision between the past and the present.

It's very beautiful, the writing is very good, very good. If Ying Xing had not gone to Luofu, he would probably be like Yong Xiu. If Bai Heng had not passed away, Ying Xing would probably still be a high-spirited Baiye.

This book is really good to read. The protagonist is so well-written that it makes people want to read it. Why hasn't it been updated for several days? Hungry, hungry, hungry, hungry!

Super beautiful [Blowing kiss] [Adoration] [Adoration] The author's small thoughts really give people a refreshing feeling, and the heart is cleansed all at once [Adoration] [Adoration] Especially the name "Yongxiu" seems to drag me into reality, and it is really a surprise [Adoration] [Admiration] [Like] [Like] Good to support the author ps: The author pays attention to his health and his studies and updates his mouth and teeth [blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Author, your writing is really good, don't stop updating it [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][ cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry] [cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's so good-looking, so good-looking. I'm especially looking forward to the scene where the protagonist meets Dan Heng, Jingliu, and Huaiyan. It's so fun, and I'm simply in ecstasy. Who said the writing is slow? The writing is so good.

To be honest, I'm quite touched. I started reading it when there were a few thousand people and now it's over 100,000 people. I'm really impressed. The author really takes the story and readers seriously, even though it has been discontinued for a while. . . I still remember very clearly that you were updating us on the night of your sister's birthday. . At that time, my conscience really hurt Hey, give me a thumbs up! !

Looks good! The rhythm is very good, I really like it, and it doesn't feel too abrupt.

This is a book with great potential. I hope that such a good book will not be deceived.

Congratulations to the author for successfully winning the resurrection competition, keep going! Rush! Rush! Rush! I really like the subject matter of this book. In a sense, it allows me to see the cycle of life. I hope that "them" I like will not make the same mistakes this time. In the end I really liked this book.

It's very nice. My favorite type is yours. It's newer.

It's super beautiful, the logic is clear, the settings are perfect, the details are well received, and the narrative is very smooth. It's super beautiful [Adored]

Short! And small! I have read so many Star Iron articles. This subject matter is quite new and the writing style is also very good. You can read it with confidence [Like]

It's really great. I finished reading it in more than two hours. It includes character description, characterization, and writing style. It's really unique among second-generation novels. It's very high-quality, but it's a bit too little.

The writing is very comfortable, each original character is a little bit subversive and has its own characteristics, and the game characters are not OOC. It is very consistent with the mental state of Bengtie players.

It looks like a genre I have never seen before, and the writing is very good. The characters and personalities are also very good. Highly recommended to watch. Author, if you don't update, who will I eat? Wow, this kind of subject matter really pokes me, but it really feels rare. Wow, author, please update it quickly.

It's very interesting. I just want it to be updated soon. I really like the scene when Jingyuan and Ren meet the protagonist. I also look forward to the encounter between Jingliu and Danheng and the protagonist. It's very interesting to think about it.

This is undoubtedly a good book with an engaging plot. But the author has a characteristic, he is always "retired" (I'm kidding, if you see the author, don't be angry. But... This means that the author is still [eating melon])

It is the best among all the Beng Tie novels I have read, but the author is missing.

So far, it's very good-looking, and the protagonist's character is pretty good.

Woo hoo hoo, sobbing, sobbing, it's been a long time since I encountered a book that suits my taste. The pace is just right, it doesn't make people feel rushed, and it feels like a long and reassuring book, hehehe. I was stuck at first, thinking of rating it after reading the best chapter, but suddenly I jumped out of the rating system, and unconsciously clicked 5 stars, so I just wrote a review first. I really like the protagonist created by the author. I was very touched even though the characters were not OOC. Suddenly, I felt a sense of relief to meet a truly loving and attentive author. It is great to discover treasures. I like the author's narration very much. It's not too rough or too gorgeous. For me, it's very comfortable to read. Original plot competition is high! The segmentation is also very good. I really love it. People are curious about how Yongxiu will show his talents and past. They are looking forward to how the plot will develop. They are eager to read about the delicate shaping, sincere emotional expressions, Maomao's creativity and imagination. Please express it more, please! [Please update][Love]

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Overall, it's pretty good. I'll give it five stars first to see how it goes, and I'm looking forward to the follow-up plot (and whether the author's updates can be more stable, I'm really afraid that one day this book will be gone [face covering])