Star Dome Railway: in the Name of [Save]

For my own book, five stars is not too much to give [currently in preparation]

It looks good (if you like cool stories, it looks cool). The protagonist at least has strength, unlike the game plot where he has no power at all (I can't do anything). Among the Liuying fanfics I've read so far, the protagonist shows the strongest strength [laughter]

Overall, are you okay? Except a little watery. Then it is better not to study the part about the black tower. And then there is the fact that he is poisonous. [Thinking] There are a lot of poisonous points. But it does not affect reading. So you can still watch it. Then it was really good.

As long as you don't suck and continue to update, I can watch it. So please update it quickly.

There is no need to read this review, it is just a recitation of the inscription of salvation. "Hector knew that the kingdom would fall" "Achilles also knew that he was heading for death." "But the two of them" "Still embarking on the battlefield without hesitation" "They are not tougher than ordinary people" "Just knowing failure" "It's another name for success" "Their ideals are completely opposite" "I hope my ideals will be trampled on." "That's right" "To prevent the sun from setting" "I fly to the sky" "Take away your light" "I will melt with it" "Falling in the sea" "But if you want to take it back" "you" "You" "Must fly to a place higher than me" "These are after transcending childhood" "Adult logic" "Come on with everything I carry" "It's not about choices" "It's not a matter of life or death." "At this moment, the ideals of all people converge into the only ambition." "The Beasts of Brahma" "Added to this body" "The Demon of Karma Enters the Abyss" "Draw the sword to save the world" "Come forward" "This is it" "Inscription of Salvation" "Come on" "This time" "I put my life into the barrel of the gun" "And looking forward to you" "Beyond everything"

Hope to see Liuying soon

Not much else to say, I am very satisfied with the way (He Wu Facing Death) died.

It's very interesting, and it's the only one-girl mainstream Hotaru to finish in my book.

The author's short story is pretty good, but he is in a hurry to find Liu Ying [laughter]

Not bad, very pretty

Looks good, Queshi is good (ｖ＾＿＾)v

The world is in the palm of your hand. Time is nothing but a waste.

Like it, like it very much, like it very much

Big cheers for the author

It's pretty. Come on.

Yes, highly recommended

Finally no more knife

You're a Wenka guy. I don't care where your home is. I'll send you some souvenirs.

Come on, you don't want to be sliced ​​up either, right? (Action Director: Eclipse Treasure)

In the Pinoconi scene, what the protagonist said really touched my heart.

It's very well written. I hope you keep working hard.

No matter what they say, believe in the author! Keep writing hard! There are also reminders [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

It's really good-looking, and the plot inside is also very interesting. Although the process is a bit tricky, the final outcome is good.