After Two and a Half Years of Training, I Returned to My World, but Wound Up in the Wrong One
修炼2年半回到原来世界但穿错了
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 407k Words
- Genre
- Anime Fanfiction
- Updated
- 1y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Synopsis
Other names
- The Cultivator Who Accidentally Arrived in Kivotos意外来到基沃托斯的修仙者Alternate title on Fanqie
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To be honest, don't skip the plot all the time. More descriptions of students and protagonists, psychological activities, facial expressions and actions. I hope there can be more descriptions, otherwise it feels too stiff. The plot is quite good, but the relationship between the protagonist and the students is too stiff. It feels like a stone. It feels like every sentence and every action is operated according to a program, and there is always a feeling of forcibly promoting the plot. When Hoshino saw the protagonist, he must have made some small moves, raised his eyebrows and frowned. These are the performances that should be shown. Don't copy too much of the dialogue between students and with the teacher. Just copy the important points. It is best to change the language yourself for the unimportant parts. This will give readers a sense of the protagonist's time travel and add some metaphors. For example, when Shiono is sleeping, he is like a cat clinging to a whale. These are all plus points, and it allows the protagonist to play some realistic jokes, which makes the book more interesting. I will comment on the rest later. These are my thoughts.
The idea is very good, but I suggest that the details of the students be appropriately added, and I feel that the role of the protagonist is not very prominent in the novel, and more interaction between the protagonist and students can be written (the above is purely a suggestion, please do not criticize 🙂)
As an author, is there anything wrong with giving yourself a five-star review? 🙂
So far it's pretty good and worth looking forward to. 👍 Author, you are so short [laughs evilly], so short and weak, it only lasted a few minutes. (Happy)
When you watch for a long time, you realize that the teacher is actually Ye Guzhou's clone. But Ye Guzhou has personally severed the causal relationship between himself and the teacher, so the teacher is an independent person and is no longer considered to be Ye Guzhou's clone, and the same is true for his supporting characters. The yellow and black roe deer often appear, but the three swords appear too rarely. There is a blind man, a broken hand, and a double force.
The more detailed the plot is, the more troublesome it is to keep the protagonist from going crazy sometimes. He is really handsome for only one second...
I'm a fighting maniac
Overall, the sensory experience is very good. Although the simulation time is a bit slow, slow work yields fine work. It's not very sensory-impacting. Overall, your book is pretty good. The emotional aspects are also very delicately described. Come on, I'm optimistic about you.
Not bad, come on author
Yes, it is rare to see books about primitive people in Tomato, because there are not many people who have written them. To be honest, can the author add a new skill to the clone, for example, the keyboard man's 108 trolling rules, or the small golden shovel that can dig through everything? In the future, I will dig tunnels directly.