From seizing the body to rebuilding it, this is the mortal path of a genius. When a person with extraordinary talent loses everything and has to start over again, will he still be able to remain firm and look down on the world of mortals? The answer lies in your heart.
Reader comments
The writing is very good, it has logic, a story, a person with worldly feelings, a horse riding a horse in the world, and the writing style is also very good.
Fortunately, giving Tianjiao an ordinary chance to start over again, without golden fingers, is closer to reality.
The storyline is good, and it is different from other cookie-cutter Qi training and foundation building novels.
The writing quality is also good. It is obvious that the author has put great care into it. It has surpassed more than 95% of similar Tomato books.
Recommendation: Highly recommended
The plot and concept are okay, and it's a good book worth reading. Come on, author.
Write quickly and don't stop
It is similar in meaning to Xiandu, and the writing style is excellent.
For those of you who follow me on the bookshelf, save your time, there are not many good books. The writing is exquisite. The plot has ups and downs. The emotions are delicate, profound and soul-stirring. In contrast to many young actors, they are unable to properly describe love, hate, and resentment. There is only pure desire between men and women, and it will naturally become boring if you watch it too much. Love is not only desire, but also mutual companionship, dedication and sacrifice. The author of this article has profound skills and is very personable. Every detail is full of details, from the character design to the magical weapons, they are highly recognizable. The main line of the story is clear, the plot design is reasonable, and the transformation is smooth and natural. The important thing is that it doesn't make people feel verbose. This is language skills. Let me share a way to find good books, which is to use the proportional method and keep blocking them. Haha, different people have different opinions. Then there is the elimination method, the first few pages, because although but after all, there are many transition words, and the inner drama has many narrations and preaching, it is direct.
The early stage was really exciting, but I reviewed it early. I probably didn't write it in my own hand later on, and it gradually became verbose, so I generally don't comment on it. I admit that the author's story structure and writing skills are quite good, and I maintain the five-star encouragement. Later, I found that the narration of the inner drama was too preachy and felt verbose, so I still removed it from the shelves.
Not bad, not bad, pretty good! Especially from the time when the protagonist seizes the mortal body, to leaving home alone, and then walking alone from then on, there is a sense of tenderness and nostalgia between the lines, and it is a very good writing style. I'll comment on this much first, and I'll read it later. [Blowing kiss]
There is love and righteousness, and there is a sense of life, which is a rare quality,,,,,,
Very good book
Do you want to change the name, such as cutting off the cause and effect after rebirth?
I didn't want to read the book when I saw the title, but I didn't expect it to be a rare masterpiece.
A work of classical cultivation and sincerity, with an excellent ending that echoes from beginning to end. It's a pity that the relationship between the male protagonist and the female characters is too ambiguous. Simplify it and it will look better.
The story structure is smooth and there are some eye-catching subplots with sudden inspirations. I like it.
Can the author please stop calling Mo Li "baby"? It's so disgusting [eating melon]
Excellent product! A rare retro style, save it for now and watch it slowly [Like][Like][Like]
I still have more to say, so the author should write a sequel as soon as possible! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
A novel with a complete beginning and end, which is rarely the case in Tomato. One star was deducted because the author's writing was so brutal that I couldn't get over it for a long time.
Fan Tianyin is a book that you really need to calm down and read slowly. Although a person suffers a disaster, he still has the opportunity to live a new life, which is quite like a fairy tale. I just don't know if pig's feet can still be strong [laughing]
Great book! ! !
The writing is very good!
The characters are described delicately.
A rare good book!
It looks pretty good. There are waves in the calm. Not obtrusive, not pretentious. Worth a look
Pull out the wrong one. Pull out the wrong one.
The writing and the plot are completely impeccable! Absolutely addictive. This type should be considered a classic fairy + mortal stream, but it is definitely not a mortal cultivating immortality, because the protagonist is the golden elixir seizing the body, so what should it be considered? "The stream of geniuses and mortals"? [Laughing]
It's so beautiful. I'd like to give it five stars to encourage the author to write more books in the future. I'm afraid I won't see it anymore. I hope to write more stories about Jiang Ran. I have a strong taste and I prefer this old witch [laughing evilly]
The writing is very good, it has logic, a story, a person with worldly feelings, a horse riding a horse in the world, and the writing style is also very good.
Fortunately, giving Tianjiao an ordinary chance to start over again, without golden fingers, is closer to reality.
The storyline is good, and it is different from other cookie-cutter Qi training and foundation building novels. The writing quality is also good. It is obvious that the author has put great care into it. It has surpassed more than 95% of similar Tomato books. Recommendation: Highly recommended
The plot and concept are okay, and it's a good book worth reading. Come on, author.
Write quickly and don't stop
It is similar in meaning to Xiandu, and the writing style is excellent.
For those of you who follow me on the bookshelf, save your time, there are not many good books. The writing is exquisite. The plot has ups and downs. The emotions are delicate, profound and soul-stirring. In contrast to many young actors, they are unable to properly describe love, hate, and resentment. There is only pure desire between men and women, and it will naturally become boring if you watch it too much. Love is not only desire, but also mutual companionship, dedication and sacrifice. The author of this article has profound skills and is very personable. Every detail is full of details, from the character design to the magical weapons, they are highly recognizable. The main line of the story is clear, the plot design is reasonable, and the transformation is smooth and natural. The important thing is that it doesn't make people feel verbose. This is language skills. Let me share a way to find good books, which is to use the proportional method and keep blocking them. Haha, different people have different opinions. Then there is the elimination method, the first few pages, because although but after all, there are many transition words, and the inner drama has many narrations and preaching, it is direct. The early stage was really exciting, but I reviewed it early. I probably didn't write it in my own hand later on, and it gradually became verbose, so I generally don't comment on it. I admit that the author's story structure and writing skills are quite good, and I maintain the five-star encouragement. Later, I found that the narration of the inner drama was too preachy and felt verbose, so I still removed it from the shelves.
Not bad, not bad, pretty good! Especially from the time when the protagonist seizes the mortal body, to leaving home alone, and then walking alone from then on, there is a sense of tenderness and nostalgia between the lines, and it is a very good writing style. I'll comment on this much first, and I'll read it later. [Blowing kiss]
There is love and righteousness, and there is a sense of life, which is a rare quality,,,,,,
Very good book Do you want to change the name, such as cutting off the cause and effect after rebirth?
I didn't want to read the book when I saw the title, but I didn't expect it to be a rare masterpiece.
A work of classical cultivation and sincerity, with an excellent ending that echoes from beginning to end. It's a pity that the relationship between the male protagonist and the female characters is too ambiguous. Simplify it and it will look better.
The story structure is smooth and there are some eye-catching subplots with sudden inspirations. I like it.
Can the author please stop calling Mo Li "baby"? It's so disgusting [eating melon]
Excellent product! A rare retro style, save it for now and watch it slowly [Like][Like][Like] I still have more to say, so the author should write a sequel as soon as possible! [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]
A novel with a complete beginning and end, which is rarely the case in Tomato. One star was deducted because the author's writing was so brutal that I couldn't get over it for a long time.
Fan Tianyin is a book that you really need to calm down and read slowly. Although a person suffers a disaster, he still has the opportunity to live a new life, which is quite like a fairy tale. I just don't know if pig's feet can still be strong [laughing]
Great book! ! ! The writing is very good! The characters are described delicately. A rare good book!
It looks pretty good. There are waves in the calm. Not obtrusive, not pretentious. Worth a look
Pull out the wrong one. Pull out the wrong one.
The writing and the plot are completely impeccable! Absolutely addictive. This type should be considered a classic fairy + mortal stream, but it is definitely not a mortal cultivating immortality, because the protagonist is the golden elixir seizing the body, so what should it be considered? "The stream of geniuses and mortals"? [Laughing]
It's so beautiful. I'd like to give it five stars to encourage the author to write more books in the future. I'm afraid I won't see it anymore. I hope to write more stories about Jiang Ran. I have a strong taste and I prefer this old witch [laughing evilly]