Hmph, What's Wrong with an Esports Girl Who Likes Cookies?

I originally wanted to give it five stars, but I saw that your writing of Otto was too human-like. It was really science fiction, so I decided to deduct one star.

The pace is quite good, not draggy, unlike some novels. . . .

There are very few transformation stories that I can read, mainly because I only read the female protagonist. In many transformation stories, even if you transform, you will still have a male perspective, which is really uncomfortable to watch. In this one, although the male protagonist becomes a female protagonist, you don't actually need to care, because the protagonist is not interested in this. Why do you care, and she adapts very well, and it can be regarded as a female protagonist. Even if the male protagonist transforms into a female protagonist, she will not be obscene. There are many male protagonists in the voice-changing novels, who use their identity as girls to cheat in various ways. It is really obscene and disgusting. This one is really refreshing and great. The adjectives are also very refreshing. There are no common male authors describing women's delicacy, feet, hands, etc. Occasionally, there are uncomfortable descriptions, but they can be ignored. It's just that the gender perspective is different, which leads to different writing methods. I really like this kind of e-sports and other novels, but there are really few female protagonists, and female channels are not popular, so I really have no food to eat, and I am helpless. I have to read this kind of transformation novel first, and I can't stand it before running away. This one is one of the few that kept me from running away, it is so rare.

OK OK! However, I feel like I can add the reactions of some big anchors into it.

At present, it seems that there is less daily work and more text for playing games.

The author's writing is good, and the protagonist's character is well portrayed. However, the supporting characters are not well-established. The descriptions of the supporting characters are very vague, and it feels like they passed by at a glance, and the charm of their own personality is not described. There are also competitions. Although I have written a lot, after reading them I feel like I haven't read anything and can't leave a deep impression. Keep up the good work.

Your writing is very good, and it would be best if there were no emotional scenes. In 2017, it was even more interesting for JDL to assist you.

I don't understand the events of the alliance and related circles at all, so there will be no situations that are contrary to my own knowledge. I feel that it is very enjoyable to watch.

After taking a quick look at it, I think it looks good, a little bland but not a shortcoming. I hope it won't be a bit inferior.

Compared to other alliance articles, this one is a bit bland, but it just suits my taste. Please support it.