Another World: That's Too Much! Starting from Scratch to Earn Contribution Points

It looks good so far. I don't know how many words the author plans to write. The heroine is very handsome. I like the author. Come on. I forgot that the emotional drama is very boring. The author made the male protagonist look like a domineering president in ancient romance. He has a cold face and a paralyzed face. If you look carefully, the adjectives are cold and cold. Cold, or a deep look, a faint lowering of the eyes... As you can imagine, the standard adjectives used to describe the tyrant are also assembly-line adjectives. This makes me very tired. One comment said that I can't bear to read it. I think I will also mess with it, because in other aspects, the author's writing is good and it is to my liking, so I always expected that this man would be just a tool or that he would have less emotional lines. As a result, the male protagonist's scenes became more and more stuck, and I couldn't even fast forward. I looked back and it turned out that the author had a CP, so I would like it, so I better not waste time. A lot of the plot behind it was not developed, and the emotional scenes were boring. Of course, I don't mind this kind of ambiguous pull between the two of them, and those who are sticky and stringy can enter. Don't watch it if you want to watch a heroine with a strong female protagonist or a male protagonist with few emotional connections.

It's a very attractive book. As a bookworm of more than ten years, it's rare for me to read a few female novels every day. And right now, I don't want to read novels without CP. The author's love story is quite good. I'm looking forward to the relationship between the male and female protagonists later. I hope it won't be written in such a way that the female protagonist is dependent on the male protagonist.

The author's imagination is really deep. This should become the most popular one. I really like this type of article. Come on, author👏

It's very beautiful, all the descriptions are very good, and the writing style on Tomato is top-notch. In short, the writing style is very good, the plot is good, and the heroine's character is also great. The only one who pulls the crotch is the male protagonist. I don't like him, and he always restricts the heroine in this and that, just like my father.

The subject matter has never been seen before! Very new and very beautiful! The key is that it is very interesting!! The first dozen chapters may be a little hard to understand, so don't stop! Keep watching! You won't be able to stop later!! Trust me!! Look!! The author can work harder!!!! Not enough! Not enough to watch at all!!

The imagination is indeed very good, and the language description is also good, but personally I feel that the role of grandma is so poorly portrayed that it would be better not to have it at all. The heroine's own desire to survive is strong enough, and there is no need to force a relative to give her hope of survival. The most important thing is that under such difficult living conditions, the grandma can still raise her granddaughter alone, so she must be outstanding and not as emotional and stupid as she is portrayed in the article. It is true that grandma has no culture, but the wisdom of survival is not directly related to culture. Just like primitive people, they also have super survival ability. But because the title of the novel determines that the role of grandma is quite long, even though the beginning of the novel really attracted me, I was quite curious about the subsequent development, so I still abandoned the novel. But except for the plot about grandma, the author's writing is really good. I hope to continue writing articles and I am looking forward to the next one.

It's good to watch, the atmosphere is tense and a little scary, the heroine is calm and thoughtful, and the world set by the author is a bit novel. You may feel a little confused before the settings are laid out in the first few chapters, but the more you read later, the more you want to read more. The only bad thing is that there are too few updates!!! Author, I hope you are enlightened!!! Don't make me beg you 🥺

I looked at the title and thought it was about business, but when I clicked in, I found out that it was about survival and combat in a different world. It was unconventional and had a very special world view. After seeing too many cookie-cutter routines, the plot of this book is eye-catching. After reading the low-scoring reviews, I feel like I gave it a low score because it didn't match the story I expected. Personally, I think this book definitely scores above 9 points on Tomato. The plot and writing are both remarkable. I hope the author will ignore those unfriendly remarks and write according to his own framework. If more people read it, the score will definitely come back!

It's a rare good book that doesn't start with a routine. The good thing is that the world view of Hive is set, and the balance of hope and despair is very well grasped. It perfectly constitutes an environment that forces the protagonist to hibernate and has a breakthrough point of life; from the reader's point of view, as long as the current mood is not depressing and needs to be relieved, you can still feel refreshed, and this refreshment is not the routine of Long Aotian. The characters, including the supporting roles, and even the passing image of a passerby are all very fleshed out. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and where there should be enough description, enough information is given, which helps readers to directly conjure up the entire scene in their minds. It is highly recommended. Don't give up the book easily before reading the first 20 chapters. Even if you see some inexplicable and weird descriptions in the first 10 chapters, don't give up. After reading it, you will understand that it is a small foreshadowing about the setting of the world view. If there is any shortcoming, it is that the heroine's ability improvement rate is a bit high, but it is also within the understandable range. Later, the author has corrected the problems related to squares and cubes in spatial description. It would be better if you can remember to change the previous squares to cubes after the full text is completed. Overall, as a dystopian web novel, it is far above the pass mark (secretly... In terms of world view setting, I think it is more reasonable than The Hunger Games).

The subject matter is really good... There are small potholes and showers… The pitfalls are: 1. Regarding space, it can be kept warm at one time and cannot be kept at other times. The author realized the contradiction in the middle and filled in the pit for a short time, but then he seemed to have forgotten...[More than 50 chapters mentioned that space is static and has no flow rate and can store food... In the middle, in order to allow the heroine to raise livestock in the space, it suddenly changed with The normal flow rate is the same as the outside world... Then after the heroine and the male protagonist's grandma enters the space, it becomes a place where people can live and food can be preserved... In the later period, I went to a live broadcast in another world and collected three trucks of ready-to-eat food... When it was almost finished, it changed again... It was mentioned that the leftover expired food in the space was used to fertilize...] 2. Regarding the heroine, she was kicked because of her carelessness at the beginning, and she was still careless after entering the other world. Many incidents in succession were caused by carelessness... [Probably due to the heroine's gradual growth through training] Xue Yu said: There are still some characters who have not been touched up and they need to be stabbed after the ending... [Shiigugu, who has a higher voice, Teacher Song who promised to take over, and classmate Yu who sincerely embraces her... It's all a pity] Generally speaking, it is more comfortable to read with only half the brain and not to read it for real... It is a good article