Another World: It's Too Much, Start from Scratch to Create Contribution Points

It looks good so far. I don't know how many words the author plans to write. The heroine is very handsome. I like the author. Come on. I forgot that the emotional drama is very boring. The author made the male protagonist look like a domineering president in ancient romance. He has a cold face and a paralyzed face. If you look carefully, the adjectives are cold and cold. Cold, or a deep look, a faint lowering of the eyes... As you can imagine, the standard adjectives used to describe the tyrant are also assembly-line adjectives. This makes me very tired. One comment said that I can't bear to read it. I think I will also mess with it, because in other aspects, the author's writing is good and it is to my liking, so I always expected that this man would be just a tool or that he would have less emotional lines. As a result, the male protagonist's scenes became more and more stuck, and I couldn't even fast forward. I looked back and it turned out that the author had a CP, so I would like it, so I better not waste time. A lot of the plot behind it was not developed, and the emotional scenes were boring. Of course, I don't mind this kind of ambiguous pull between the two of them, and those who are sticky and stringy can enter. Don't watch it if you want to watch a heroine with a strong female protagonist or a male protagonist with few emotional connections.

It's a very attractive book. As a bookworm of more than ten years, it's rare for me to read a few female novels every day. And right now, I don't want to read novels without CP. The author's love story is quite good. I'm looking forward to the relationship between the male and female protagonists later. I hope it won't be written in such a way that the female protagonist is dependent on the male protagonist.

The author's imagination is really deep. This should become the most popular one. I really like this type of article. Come on, author👏

It's very beautiful, all the descriptions are very good, and the writing style on Tomato is top-notch. In short, the writing style is very good, the plot is good, and the heroine's character is also great. The only one who pulls the crotch is the male protagonist. I don't like him, and he always restricts the heroine in this and that, just like my father.

The subject matter has never been seen before! Very new and very beautiful! The key is that it is very interesting! ! The first dozen chapters may be a little hard to understand, so don't stop! Keep watching! You won't be able to stop later! ! Trust me! ! Look! ! The author can work harder! ! ! ! Not enough! Not enough to watch at all! !

The imagination is indeed very good, and the language description is also good, but personally I feel that the role of grandma is so poorly portrayed that it would be better not to have it at all. The heroine's own desire to survive is strong enough, and there is no need to force a relative to give her hope of survival. The most important thing is that under such difficult living conditions, the grandma can still raise her granddaughter alone, so she must be outstanding and not as emotional and stupid as she is portrayed in the article. It is true that grandma has no culture, but the wisdom of survival is not directly related to culture. Just like primitive people, they also have super survival ability. But because the title of the novel determines that the role of grandma is quite long, even though the beginning of the novel really attracted me, I was quite curious about the subsequent development, so I still abandoned the novel. But except for the plot about grandma, the author's writing is really good. I hope to continue writing articles and I am looking forward to the next one.

It's good to watch, the atmosphere is tense and a little scary, the heroine is calm and thoughtful, and the world set by the author is a bit novel. You may feel a little confused before the settings are laid out in the first few chapters, but the more you read later, the more you want to read more. The only bad thing is that there are too few updates! ! ! Author, I hope you are enlightened! ! ! Don't make me beg you [I'm about to cry]

I looked at the title and thought it was about business, but when I clicked in, I found out that it was about survival and combat in a different world. It was unconventional and had a very special world view. After seeing too many cookie-cutter routines, the plot of this book is eye-catching. After reading the low-scoring reviews, I feel like I gave it a low score because it didn't match the story I expected. Personally, I think this book definitely scores above 9 points on Tomato. The plot and writing are both remarkable. I hope the author will ignore those unfriendly remarks and write according to his own framework. If more people read it, the score will definitely come back!

It's a rare good book that doesn't start with a routine. The good thing is that the world view of Hive is set, and the balance of hope and despair is very well grasped. It perfectly constitutes an environment that forces the protagonist to hibernate and has a breakthrough point of life; from the reader's point of view, as long as the current mood is not depressing and needs to be relieved, you can still feel refreshed, and this refreshment is not the routine of Long Aotian. The characters, including the supporting roles, and even the passing image of a passerby are all very fleshed out. The plot is compact and not procrastinating, and where there should be enough description, enough information is given, which helps readers to directly conjure up the entire scene in their minds. It is highly recommended. Don't give up the book easily before reading the first 20 chapters. Even if you see some inexplicable and weird descriptions in the first 10 chapters, don't give up. After reading it, you will understand that it is a small foreshadowing about the setting of the world view. If there is any shortcoming, it is that the heroine's ability improvement rate is a bit high, but it is also within the understandable range. Later, the author has corrected the problems related to squares and cubes in spatial description. It would be better if you can remember to change the previous squares to cubes after the full text is completed. Overall, as a dystopian web novel, it is far above the pass mark (secretly... In terms of world view setting, I think it is more reasonable than The Hunger Games).

The subject matter is really good... There are small potholes and showers… The pitfalls are: 1. Regarding space, it can be kept warm at one time and cannot be kept at other times. The author realized the contradiction in the middle and filled in the pit for a short time, but then he seemed to have forgotten...[More than 50 chapters mentioned that space is static and has no flow rate and can store food... In the middle, in order to allow the heroine to raise livestock in the space, it suddenly changed with The normal flow rate is the same as the outside world... Then after the heroine and the male protagonist's grandma enters the space, it becomes a place where people can live and food can be preserved... In the later period, I went to a live broadcast in another world and collected three trucks of ready-to-eat food... When it was almost finished, it changed again... It was mentioned that the leftover expired food in the space was used to fertilize...] 2. Regarding the heroine, she was kicked because of her carelessness at the beginning, and she was still careless after entering the other world. Many incidents in succession were caused by carelessness... [Probably due to the heroine's gradual growth through training] Xue Yu said: There are still some characters who have not been touched up and they need to be stabbed after the ending... [Shiigugu, who has a higher voice, Teacher Song who promised to take over, and classmate Yu who sincerely embraces her... It's all a pity] Generally speaking, it is more comfortable to read with only half the brain and not to read it for real... It is a good article

The setting of this book is really novel and attractive. The only drawback is that the description of the plot of the male protagonist is too protracted. Some segments seem to be written for the development of the relationship between the two, which is very boring, such as the oil extraction part, and the extensive description of the male protagonist training the female protagonist. It is very tiring to watch and has no desire to continue reading. If this book had no CP or the emotional scenes were more interesting, this book could be considered a god. So far, the male protagonist is full of sexual power. Skip the male protagonist's scenes and read it. This is really a good book!

The author's imagination is very good, but one thing is that he likes to pretend to be mysterious, but then he doesn't actually write that feeling. The wording always feels like he is using too much force [laughing and crying]. The writing is good, but the simple plot and emotions have to be written with that kind of pretentious feeling. The reader is at a loss, so just keep reading. I hope the author will get better as he writes.

1. A large amount of information, many details, and a strong visual sense; 2. The setting is beautiful and has a cyberpunk feel, but it is not the European and American cyberpunk, more Japanese style; 3. It is really suitable for adaptation into animation/comics!

I have read dozens of chapters, but the subject matter is still a bit new. I went to the portal to buy various other worlds for zero yuan. The heroine is dressed like a malnourished 15-year-old girl, and the hero looks like a captain. Isn't it a bit too young to be a minor? Isn't it good to have emotional scenes with minors and be beautiful without CP?

It's a surprising book. The author's ability to describe environmental scenes is amazing! The pictures in the story not only have colors and sounds, but also tastes and temperatures! For example, an ordinary book is like an old stage play, and the description of the environmental scenes can only be as good as the background curtain, and the environmental scenes written by this author are as good as a 4K ultra-clear movie ~ It is no exaggeration to say that he is an author who can observe life, not the kind of person who can only write routines. Such a talented writer ~ I hope the author writes more books, I love reading them! ! !

This is the first time I have seen such a novel and unique post-apocalyptic article. It's so good [Adoration] [Adoration]. I really can't find a meal replacement. I hope the author will write more [Sending Hearts] [Sending Hearts] [Blowing Kisses] [Blowing Kisses] (Also, I found that their lives seem to lack the solution to necessary physiological problems. I haven't even seen the toilet [exploration] [laughing and crying] [laughing])

This is a very novel novel, different from the ordinary Mugenliu. The heroine was killed, and then became another person alive. She also got a grandmother. She went from fighting alone to having a family and warmth. She also had to participate in challenges in the daily life of raising a family. It was very interesting. The most unforgettable one is the article about Shiitake and her. Even if it is just a novel, I still felt a little sad when I saw them separated at the end. Great, come on

So far, I have seen Chapter 120 (I also used another account to read it, but this account did not last long enough). The worldview setting is very novel, and the author's writing style is also good and delicate. The disadvantage is that the plot connection is not good and the description is not clear, which makes people feel inexplicable. Then the existence of the male protagonist is also very strange, and the male protagonist seems to be providing help to the female protagonist as soon as he appears? Also, the current look and feel of Grandma's character is relatively average. Come on, come on [send heart]

The stories in each small world are very interesting, including Xianggu's comedy and the patriarch's loneliness. . . The only shortcoming is the emotional drama written by the author. Well, when I saw the emotional drama, I just skipped it [laughing and crying]

This time I'm going to do it the other way around. Let's talk about the shortcomings first. The first golden finger is too big. The golden finger is so big that it can only be a bug. A growth space + multiple entrances and exits for others + storage for others + the ability to externally protect the body at will + the spirit male protagonist can be invisible and has super high combat power and can use space + copy cards that are almost the same as perpetual motion machines; secondly, there are too many bugs. On the one hand, the author writes first and then forgets. On the other hand, the setting is incompetent and cannot be justified. For example, in the beginning, only the female protagonist could expand the space. In the mine, the male protagonist also found and piled them up for him, and the female protagonist pretended to fall to absorb them. I don't know what happened later, but he became the male protagonist and absorbed it directly. For another example, when the space is initially set to allow external protection, it is said that items cannot be used during this period. As a result, this setting was later ignored. There is also a very abnormal setting for the spirit body that needs to eat, drink and take a bath. There are also rules for using copied cards. From the time this card appears to the end of this book, the comments have been criticizing this setting. However, even with such obvious problems, this is still a very good book. The writing is very good, the plot is exciting, and the design of the end of the world is very special. And the best thing is that the overall setting is very different and completely unconventional. So I was very invested in reading it. The best part is that the characters are very lovable and wonderful. In addition to the protagonist, there are several supporting characters who are impressive. For example, the patriarch who makes people feel uncomfortable. Worth a look.

It's very good. 9.2 Is low. It's really low. It can be rated as 9.6 At least. Maybe the author in the early stage likes to use ambush to make readers dumb. I've seen many paragraph reviews where they make random guesses, so there are many people who don't like to use their brains and give low scores. The paragraph reviews in this book are the most brainless paragraph reviews I have ever seen [face covering], so this is why I almost never read the paragraph reviews. A book, the plot is really good, the CP also has the kind of generous feelings, even if you are not sticky [laughing], the emotional plot is a little more in the later stage. In the early stage, the heroine mainly focuses on hoarding goods and developing a strong self. The heroine is not aggressive throughout the whole process, but she takes revenge on the spot. Anyway, it is very interesting. I think [like][like]

It's pretty good-looking, except for the emotional line. The man is so sweet, but the heroine seems to be a completely different person when it comes to the emotional part. Ah ah ah, where are my mushrooms? Is there any mushroom extra?

The first few chapters were a bit mystical, and the psychological descriptions were a bit tiring. Most of the three stars came from this, but after arriving in another world, the writing was really good. The subject matter is novel. Finally, I have a novel subject matter. It's not easy. Come on, keep writing.

Five stars for the author's imagination and plot settings are really novel. Because I have read too many novels, novels with novel plots are really attractive. There are still some unfilled holes in this book, the kind that make readers curious but the author doesn't explain much in the end. For example, why did the world of the patriarch become like this, and I am really curious about what kind of fruit they dug and how to eat it without being poisoned, because the heroine believes that she can find a way to eat it. There is also the relationship between Tingbai and Hive. I think it would be better to explain these in detail and improve them, or maybe tell us about the second season? In fact, the ending was too hasty, and I was also very curious as to why the people in the world I was fed at the end became like that. As for the emotional scenes between the male and female protagonists, I think the stage where Xiaojiu asks the captain to teach him is the most interesting. All in all, I think there are quite a lot of areas for improvement in this book. I'm really curious about what the author hasn't written about [I understand]

After Anjiu's accidental death, she was reborn into another barren and desolate world, becoming the bottom class with difficulty in survival. In order to live a good life for herself and her dependent grandmother, she used all her strength and means to continuously improve herself and her space capabilities, and went to various mutated worlds to collect supplies. Her days were getting better day by day, and warmth and hope were growing. The heroine is really strong. It was difficult to survive when she was at her weakest, but she cherishes her own life and the relatives around her very much. She works hard and is very smart, and never misses any opportunity to become better. Every trip to stock up on supplies in the mutated world is exciting, and the people and things she encounters are also very profound. A person with a strong core will live well anywhere. The family relationship between the heroine and her grandmother is very touching. They rely on each other and support each other. No matter what kind of wind and rain they encounter, warm relatives are the most stable harbor. The heroine's love is just a small branch line outside the survival line. It is not long but very touching. They attract each other, heal each other, and create a different kind of sparks, but they are not just trapped in love. The heroine always puts survival and family members in the most important position. Love will not truly bloom until the survival crisis is solved later. Shiitake is a good boss, this dungeon is funny, exciting and touching, and the dungeon of the other clan leader is particularly ruthless. After watching the extra chapter, I couldn't calm down for a long time. The survival and continuation of the clan has come to an end. Maybe it's just so lonely and sad. It is a very good story. Various elements are well integrated. Each character is very distinct. Each story is worth thinking about. The final ending is also satisfactory. The highest pursuit of human beings is survival, continuation, freedom and love.

Five stars are mainly given to the author's ideas, which are very good and novel. The whole book makes me feel a little difficult to judge whether it is good or bad. The main reason is that the author's writing is good and the overall story line is also good. However, there are various small bugs, logical problems, and the heroine's design often breaks down. For example, the unit of area is written in cubic meters throughout the book. For example, the space suddenly becomes unpreservable and there are so many cooked vegetables. For example, the heroine is not very strong in the end and basically relies on luck and noble people to pass the level, but she works really hard. The entire 48th floor, or the sixth-class citizens, seem to be able to live on air, earning 20-50 contribution points every day. The rent costs more than 1,000 yuan a month. Mining is a high salary of only 50 yuan a day, and private buying and selling of food is not allowed. There is a feeling that everyone lives to starve to death. This is a question that troubles me. For example, setting a daily limit to sell food to them, so that not everyone is waiting to die, would it be more logical? Sorry, I don't mean any writing guidance. I really like the author's imagination, so I have to say a lot. I hope the next book will be better!

[Shy] Nothing to say, very warm and beautiful, each different world is very real, and the imagination is very rich. The first world is the world where the heroine lives, the world of floods, the second world, special materials in the sky, causing human clones to appear, the third world is the world of Shiitake Gugu, a world of very tall plants, a world of mutated humans, a mixture of humans and insects, like a mantis, the fourth world, a suspended world, suspended land, the heroine almost died I fell from the sky. Fortunately, I met a reborn person and was saved. I also got 3 copy cards. The fifth world is the assessment world, the survival game world, killing zombies in the foggy sky. The sixth world is a lonely world, woo woo hoo, the loneliness of the patriarch is really heartbreaking. In order to resurrect the clan members, they are reborn again and again, waiting again and again, but they are always alone, and only the patriarch is guarding the whole world. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo pitiful. Later, there was an abnormality in Fengchao, and everyone fought together. The male protagonist was also very pitiful. He was just an emotionless clone, an undercover agent of the other group. His mission was to be an emotionless tool, but after meeting the female protagonist, his world suddenly became colorful. Good looking ^ω^ The male protagonist was really cute when he was growing up (*/∇＼*) ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. It's just like a Barbie doll. It's very fun. It can also be said to be like the Ye Luoli elf, so cute (*/∇＼*). . . I like it very much.

The author's writing style is quite good, and his imagination is great. Unfortunately, it is not long enough, and there is still a little lack of specific exploration of other worlds. The ending is a little rushed, and I feel like I still have more to say after reading it. There are a few holes that have not been filled in, such as the origin of the end of the wilderness, the formation of the abyss, and the ending of Fengchao's high-level officials underground. There is very little description of other groups, and the conflict description is not enough... It can be said that it is a relatively open ending. The author has not finished explaining it, allowing readers to have more room for their own imagination. But the overall story is still very exciting. The heroine grows up step by step from living a difficult life to living comfortably in the end. In addition, the descriptions of several small worlds are great, the imagination is wide open, and the descriptions of several characters encountered in the small worlds are very vivid. In addition, it is the CP line. I personally feel that it looks very comfortable with the emotional line of the male protagonist. The character and background of the male protagonist are also quite interesting, and the character development is not bad. I don't know why there are so many comments about the CP that there shouldn't be one. The introduction clearly states that there is CP, and those who don't like the CP can just discard it. There should be no CP in the CP article, and there should be CP in the non-CP article. These are two groups of people that really make the author scratch his head. The first few descriptions are great, but they are all about the heroine, which will make the reader lose the feeling of a God's perspective. If you are impatient, you may jump or give up directly. If you stick to it, you will have a feeling of peeling back the layers and suddenly realizing it. It is quite good. To be honest, I usually just run away when I encounter this kind of description, but this one actually persisted until I read to the end. It must be because the author is so good at description. It makes people want to give up but insists on reading to the end. In the end, I was attracted by the heroine and continued to read. All in all, this is a good novel, HE, I recommend reading it.

Relatively novel and warm, with a large imagination and a strong sense of picture. The author of the male protagonist in the middle should have failed in writing. The logic of behavior is a bit strange and unpleasant, so the witty Yuan came back and changed the male protagonist's design. The clever rationalization of the behavior pattern. The female protagonist is more humane. I really like the progress and transformation of different characters in it. They encourage and help each other. The friendship between grandma's old best friends is also very touching. One of the few books that I have not skipped and read the whole book. For the novel plot and imagination, it deserves a five-star rating.

I have been reading post-apocalyptic travel stories for several years, and this one is really well written. The beginning is very exciting, and you can see that it borrowed a lot from detective novels in order to have an attractive opening. Survival in the main world is not easy, which makes me a little scared after being numb for so many years. If the doomsday really comes one day, it is estimated that I will not be on the floor below. Each of the different worlds you travel through is very innovative. Generally speaking, the heroine is neither a virgin nor a cold and ruthless person who kills people randomly. It is a very good article [Chigua]