The Witcher: Dragonborn of Skyrim

I am a newcomer to the book. I know that I have many shortcomings, but I really want to write a good story. If you find any shortcomings during the reading process or have any suggestions, you can express them directly in the paragraph discussion. I read every comment you make, and your reading is my biggest motivation. Thank you all in advance! [Working on draft] Friends, I am not writing these character levels to clearly indicate the price of combat power. They all have accumulation and depth in their own fields, which does not mean they must be able to defeat anyone. I like these games, and I have a lot of respect for these people in my heart. Maybe I didn't express my inner thoughts in words. I will make adjustments to the character introduction when I have time later. There were suddenly more people, and I tried to watch them all.

It's good-looking. Although it's in the world of The Witcher 3, it's not a simple retelling of the original plot, but the author's own thoughts about how the powerful dragonborn crushes the garbage like witch hunters, saves Margarita and Ciel, and resolves many difficulties in the original plot.

The best novel about Lao Gun and the Wizard that I have read so far. While maintaining the character of Dragonborn, it did not distort or degrade other characters' personalities and abilities, nor did it suppress Dragonborn to death. Dragonborn just achieves whatever level he wants to achieve, instead of shattering the continent with his roar every time. Freedom means not doing anything that he doesn't want to do. This kind of Dragonborn is really great.

It looks good, but the combat power level system is too confusing. Keira is not a strong person among the sorceresses at all, but she actually has master-level skills? The ancient world has significantly higher magic than the witcher world. There should be a big gap in the overall combat power system between the two sides. The top warlocks or high-level magicians in the witcher world can only be regarded as second- or third-rate masters in the ancient world. If in order to suppress the combat power and facilitate the advancement of the plot, the protagonist can be weakened more severely, such as traveling through time and losing all his strength. Or instead of setting the protagonist as a Dragonborn who has completed the game, change it to a Dragonborn who is just starting out. This way, you can travel back and forth between the two worlds and slowly upgrade. If you don't plan to go to the upgrade stream, but to the invincible stream, then just go for it. The strongest mortal wizard throws it to the old gun, which is the expert level. I like the author, but maybe because he is a newcomer, there are indeed many immature places.

The rare wizard + old gun, I must finish it, it's very interesting

If character creation is an expression of the author's ability, then the author of this book is definitely not a mediocre person. After reading this book, it feels like replaying the main plot of The Witcher 3 with perfect archives. There is no objection to the addition of the second protagonist. The control of the timeline and settings is very precise. I hope it can continue 👍

Not bad, except that the performance of the protagonist is a bit poor, not at all like the powerful dragonborn who defeated Alduin

There are not many battle scenes. If you come here for this, you may be a little disappointed. It is more of a daily style, but from a personal perspective, it is really good because when you play the game, you have actually imagined what the daily life of the game characters is like. This novel has achieved this, so there is nothing wrong with giving the author high marks.

It's nice and smooth, and there are no unintended contradictions. The main plot is about the errand boy, the protagonist, who goes to the Witcher 3 world to open up territory and search for the Elder Scrolls. The overall look is relaxed and humorous. In view of the fact that this fanfic itself is a niche article, there is a certain reading threshold for readers who have not played the game or watched the videos and the original novel. There are some jokes and the original plot that need to be understood or ignored. Overall, it's a five-star review, and it's an above-average work among The Elder Scrolls and The Witcher fanfics 😄

It's not bad, it's quite relaxing and comfortable. Currently, I am a top-level dragonborn escort leading a team of important wizards to search (Dwemer Ruins), fight (Witch Hunter, Eternal Fire, Wild Hunt related) and retreat (rescue Ciri and retreat to a safe area × 3). The main line is to find the Elder Scroll. I guess I will do the Wild Hunt of Frost, but I don't know what to do after finishing the Wild Hunt to revitalize the witcher school?