
The End of the World: Get the Shadow Space at the Beginning!
末世:开局获得黑影空间!
- Status
- Ongoing
- Length
- 139k Words
- Genre
- Sci-Fi & Apocalypse
- Audience
- Male
- Updated
- 2y ago
- Source
- Fanqie
Stats
1Reads
5.8Score
67Chapters
1Listens
37.2kReads · all time

末世:开局获得黑影空间!
The core is good, but some of the wording techniques are still relatively simple. To put it bluntly, it's a bit dramatic, and you use too little punctuation. Sometimes characters use punctuation marks when they speak. For example, when the protagonist speaks, you can say, "I'll use you to clean the housework in the future." This way, you can read it more casually. Although you can't do some details very well, your core is indeed very good. What I mean by core refers to the protagonist's superpowers. It is very detailed and very good👍