HP: My Godfather Is Snape at the Beginning

I suspect that the hero's father is a time traveler

The education that the father did not give was given to the children by those whose fathers helped them [crying]

It's very interesting (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡The protagonist is not like other books who travel through time, are reborn, and know the plot. The content of the book is also very good. Keep up the good work and continue to update it. Don't leave it unfinished and don't stop updating it✪ω✪

It's good. Just stick to your own style and keep writing. In addition, the protagonist needs some strength to cope with the subsequent plot.

It is a very good work. The friendship, respect, love, and views of right and wrong described by all the people or ghosts in Hogwarts are very good. It is precisely these little characters that make the Hogwarts Castle in my imagination come alive. I won't spoil it too much. [Laughs] I have a suggestion, after more than 100 chapters, it's almost time for our little protagonist to graduate, so we can hurry up. Secondly, you can be less hostile towards Slytherins. The nobility, education and interests they have cultivated since childhood are more pure-blooded. This is purely a personal opinion, otherwise there would not be 28 pure-blood families for so many years. Please forgive me for my superficial opinions.

I think if the heroine is a Slytherin, [laughs evilly], the sense of fate will be full, but the heroine is Hermione... I thought the hero would go to Slytherin. I feel that the hero's father must have been a time traveler before, and he still has the system [get it]. Although the hero is a bit weak in the early stage, it depends on whether it will be strengthened in the later stage.

Five stars for this, the best among the best, very suitable to my taste (I like this type of fanfic very much, but I don't like dark novels). Norman and Hermione are childhood sweethearts-style innocent love, Rodrigo and Vanessa are happy enemies-style love between a poor boy and a rich girl who has left the family, and the father in this article is The maternal love plot is a highlight. It does not directly highlight the love story of the parents, but intersperses the stories of Norman and Hermione to connect the two stories. During the adventures of Norman and Hermione, we slowly cleared away the clouds and gradually learned the story of Rodrigo and Vanessa. Rodrigo is kind, brave, and just. He has the temperament to draw a sword to help when encountering difficulties. Although he is sometimes reckless and greedy for money, these small "flaws" better shape Rodrigo, a flesh-and-blood, affectionate and righteous character. I would like to call him a Rodrigo-type character (read There are relatively few books and I don't know what the character Rodrigo is called in the literary world. In order to decide her own destiny, Vanessa left her family and went to Hogwarts alone to study. The image of a woman who dared to love and hate appeared on the page. Vanessa was unfortunate. She did not feel the pen of her father. , The surname of the pure-blood family controls her like a chain. Vanessa is lucky that she resisted her own destiny. She gained friendship and love during her study life at Hogwarts (Vanessa's plot is still a bit lacking, I hope to write more in the future) Okay, if the author sees this, , if the books of Rodrigo and Vanessa are published separately in the future or the story of Norman and Hermione is continued, can some backgrounds or stories of Charles IX be added, such as the Mask of the Horrible Witch, Heart of the Pharaoh, Crow City, Vampire Cemetery, King Solomon, Crystal Skull, etc. [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates] [Asking for explosive updates]

It is a rare aboriginal protagonist whose father now seems to have traveled through time. The first time I saw such a plot, it really attracted me. The writing is also very good. The daily interactions between the protagonist and Hermione and the occasional electricity generation between them are depicted, and their care for each other is really sweet. This book is worth reading and highly recommended. I hope the author will not cut off the book or make it unfinished, nor will he follow the advice of some second-rate readers to change his writing plan. Come on, author!

The relationship between Norman and Hermione is very sweet, but when I think of Rodgory dying in Snape's arms, I can't stop crying. It's too cruel. Overall, this novel is worth reading. The rating is at least 9. The author should work hard to finish the prequel [please update]

Very beautiful, I like it very much

This narrative writing technique is really interesting. Each interlude reflects the similarity between the protagonist himself and the protagonist's father, allowing people to understand the changes Rodrigo has made to Hogwarts. I also know the similarities now

I really like this book. The author's literary talent is very good. He can also remember some knives and sweet moments in his heart. You can also feel the feeling intimately. It's like being in this book and experiencing these things together, including the protagonist's father at Hogwarts. Basically everyone knows this new setting and it makes me feel very comfortable. I really hope that this can keep this book going, even though I know the author. The updates are very fast, twice a day, but I still feel that I haven't read enough. I finished the book in two days. I couldn't bear to read it. I saved it for two months. Moreover, the author's foreshadowing in the front and back can be basically connected, and it is very satisfying to read. The most important thing is, who doesn't want a Godfather Snape who is difficult to communicate with everyone and has a cold face, but is very doting, warm and gentle to you [smirk] [snicker] [smirk]

While following the original work, I also wrote a lot of personal settings based on the original world view. It was very interesting. The relationship between the protagonist and Hermione was very sweet. They were childhood sweethearts. Later, as more supporting characters were added, more CPs began to appear. The author seems to like writing emotional scenes, Harry and Ginny, Luna and Rolf, and many other couples, even Snape and Rodrigo. It's funny, but after laughing I felt like crying, but I feel like the author should give it a perfect ending.

My awesome time traveler father

From a very novel perspective, the protagonist's father, as a time traveler, actually played himself to death.

A very nice fan novel. The protagonist is an aborigine, and the relationship with Hermione is very sweet. His father was a time traveler, but he died in the hands of his best friend Snape to save the protagonist. It is very touching. The story line of the protagonist's father, Snape and Vanessa is also very interesting, but it is only in the fourth grade and has not started yet. It feels a bit slow and more daily life.

Don't do it, kid. When I saw him, Luna, and Astoria, I felt like you were going to give me the whole big one? 🧐Personally, I still prefer Hermione, so I still hope there will be a single female protagonist [laughing] There is nothing to say (ー_ー)!! There are many ambiguous characters, but I am still with Hermione. I just don't understand. Hermione is not jealous at all, and she is very, you know. Anyway, this book is not my favorite type. The main characters are very large, most of them are women, and the female football team is not angry at all ヽ(｀⌒´メ)ノ

I feel that many of the things in it are the author's attempt to make up for his original love, which resonated with me [laughing and crying] and made me pick up Marlboros that could have been thrown away for several years.

Both the main story and the side story can be written.

I want to read Rodrigo's story. Judging from the words, he is a very charming person. If you write a prequel about him, the article should be excellent. His story is more curious than the protagonist of this article

The protagonist and Hermione are very different [laughing] @Ranxiaojiang. It's just that the protagonist's father has written too much. How about a side story and another one? (Plot recommendation, it is best to cover all grades) PS: What should I call the protagonist's child [laughing evilly] Author update soon The whole thing is quite logical and the thinking is clear, but it would be better to push the protagonist faster. Part One: The plot is reasonable and the development is relatively fast. Second grade: Hey directly [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly] Looking forward to the author's biography

Come on author, I hope it won't be so short [laughing evilly] [laughing evilly]

Not bad, very beautiful. Come on, author, keep going.

It's not a regular invincible novel, nor is it time travel, it's a breath of fresh air. Daily and natural, don't sprinkle sugar for sugar's sake, the sweetness is just right, keep at it, come on author, you are great!

Very well written, with a very unique starting point. The protagonist is not a time traveler, but his father is. There are also emotional scenes, and the battles are well written. It's not a nanny article, it's a super plus point. The only flaw is that there have been too few updates lately.

The author writes very well. The stories of father and son are intertwined with each other. It is very difficult to write about two people. I hope you will finish writing. I think the title of the book can be changed to "Me and My God Father"

It's okay, but there is one problem. The protagonist is not too old to begin with. It's a bit embarrassing to write less emotional scenes with the heroine. I don't think Tian, ​​of course, is the same sentence. You refute me, you are right, you are good at talking about it [Like]

A few of the protagonists of Tomato are the indigenous Halivan. The whole story is free of knives. It is full of fun and various jokes. However, there are few people who rated it, so the rating is low. I sincerely recommend it.

To be honest, this kind of daily sweet story is really good to read. I feel that the story of the protagonist's parents is even more interesting, reminding me of the parents in Hori and Miyamura. It feels like the protagonist's story is more like that of Xiaojie, a full-time hunter. All in all it's very sweet.

The protagonist's father is Kamito