Hp: Is Being Mind-Reading Really a Small Problem?

It's a new book! It is recommended to read my book reviews to avoid lightning (if you feel there is something wrong, please feel free to discuss it with me! Nope~) First of all, the relationship between the heroine Slytherin and Draco was pretty good up to chapter 63 (it has only been updated to chapter 63 and the relationship in the early stages is average or even not good) In addition, the writing of the early plot is average, but the later plot becomes more interesting. There are a lot of typos and a lot of Harry Potter plots. The heroine is Snape's daughter (the daughter who was raped). The family lines are generally written, which is a bit embarrassing for me. (Because I have been reading novels for a long time and am quite selective) Then there's mind-reading. The way we spoiled Dumbledore in the early stage is mind-reading, and it's quite deliberate. The plot is very good, the heroine's character is also very three-dimensional, the psychological description is outstanding, and other parts are also very interesting. Mind reading + hp There are relatively few subjects on this topic, and this book looks very good. The writing style is okay, there are not many unnecessary adjectives, and it seems to be relatively smooth overall. In short, my review is that it is excellent, and there is room for improvement. The number of words is small, but the plot makes me look forward to it. It's a very good book

Professor Snape, who became a father, is gentle. He and little Amy can warm each other and save each other! The professor in the original work is a source of frustration for many people. It can be said that his life has been dark. The only light left him after a short period of companionship, leaving him feeling guilty for the rest of his life. Lily was Snape's only friend, but Snape was not her only friend. In this novel, Lily did not die, which made Snape feel less guilty. Instead, he felt that he owed Amy. I think this is good. The living cannot compete with the dead. As long as Lily is still alive, Snape will not feel despair in his heart. I hope Amy and her old father can be happy forever. It's another kind of comfort.

That's funny, Snape should have a family

Recommend! 1. First of all, HP's original heroine 2. The heroine's voice can be heard by other people or magical animals (in line with another characteristic of mind reading) 3. The heroine is nominally Snape's daughter, and Snape is no longer alone. 4. There is no smearing or slandering of other characters in the book. 5. A very rare finished article!

It's very interesting and well-written. It's also the best Harry Potter fanfic I've read for so long. The writing level is above average, and it may be higher. I don't know much about it, but this one I think is quite long for more than ten minutes, but now that I see it, it's really not boring. The listening books in Tomato are almost ten minutes long, but there are so many Zhangye, it will be very boring after listening for a long time. I still want to read this! ! ! (*´I`*) I may have made some typos because I am a student, please forgive me.

It's very beautiful. The heroine has a lively personality and gets along very well with other characters. She has a very good relationship with magical animals. She supervises Snape to eat on time and helps Sirius be released from Azkaban. The extras are also very interesting. It's a very good book. But the second grade feels a bit forced to follow the plot, which is a bit intellectually depressing.

One chapter is updated every day, who are you looking down on? If you have the ability to complete 20 chapters a day, no, no, no, madam, you can't do it, right? [Smile]

The plots are interlocking, the characters are good, and the subject matter is fresh. It's well worth reading. It's already very good among Harry Potter fanfics! I hope the author will work hard! ! !

Among Harry Potter fan novels, this setting is so fresh! The author is great, come on ^0＾~

It's great, Lily doesn't have to die, Snape doesn't have to bear the guilt of his whole life, he has gained family love, can be firmly trusted and chosen, and has the bond that he doesn't have to live like a soulless body. From the fact that she got the dragon scale and wanted to give it to James instead of Harry, it can be seen that Lily here pays more attention to her love rather than family affection. This time, Lily loses half of her body. It is not a punishment. Like a reincarnation, the boomerang pierces Lily back. Overall, it looks relaxed, not deeply sad, not physically or mentally abusive, which is pretty good.

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It's great. The whole story is very relaxed and enjoyable, and it's a little bit silly. It's really to my liking. Severus is a bit of a daughter-in-law, and the writing is good. It's just that the story is only written until the third grade. It's a pity that there is no subsequent content. It's great. I still want to read the later chapters, but Voldemort died in the third grade, so I skipped directly to graduation.

Why 🥺 equalizing the result in one breath is exactly the place where I feel aggrieved

How should I put it? The gap between Sif and Lily was resolved because Lily survived. Harry also has relatives around him, and Sif also has his own relatives. Generally speaking, it is not bad, but some parts are too fast, and the thoughts may not catch up so quickly. (The above is just a personal opinion, don't criticize if you don't like it, I will scold you if you criticize me, thank you)

This book is not bad! Time travel, mind reading, original heroine, no CP, fan fiction, happy ending. Some of the settings are novel, the plot is coherent, and the characters have distinctive characteristics. The heroine is lively and cheerful, naughty and cute, smart, humble, studious, and powerful. Keep up the good work^O^~

Nice [Like] It cleverly combines the setting of this kind of complaint with the world view of HP. The first few chapters are considered a transition. Later, the heroine controls the "special powers" and uses her own abilities to change the fate and story line of everyone. Basically, everyone survives. I really like the personal setting of the characters in the article, because the heroine has no prejudice against all colleges, and slowly leads many people who were originally diametrically opposed to no longer fight to the death (although they still can argue [laughing]). Overall it's light-hearted and it's indeed a good fanfic [OK]

I'm a cheesy person and I like happy endings. The death-defying victory was too cruel.

I almost never read Harry Potter fanfics where the main character is not Hermione, but this book is very well written, the overall atmosphere is very relaxed, and the characterization of the characters is pretty good. I hope the author can write more good novels.

The characters are very good, and the last side trip to China is so heartwarming, but it's a bit unwatchable. At the end, Lily is gone when she wakes up [crying] It's really good

It's true that good books are not popular! ! ! The writing is so funny and light-hearted. The key is that it's not OOC! ! !

Although it has no CP, it looks pretty good. The heroine and the professor have an adoptive father-daughter relationship, which is quite interesting. Because of the heroine as his daughter, the professor becomes better and better. It is really a very heartwarming article. And when dealing with Voldemort's wedding and the fragments on Harry's head at the end, it really seemed like a farce. It was so funny.

Daddy, it's so beautiful

I love it so much

I finished the chase in one go, come on, it looks great. (●｀･(ｴ)･´●)

It looks very good, and the updates are relatively stable now.

This is a very cute book. Thank you for writing this book.

It's good to watch, but I feel like the heroine is not very sensitive at times, and the plot is a little weird. The heroine has been living with the professors for so long, but she doesn't feel familiar with them.

The author's current plot is very logical, the characters are very close to the original work, and there is no OOC at all. The writing is very interesting. I just wish that each chapter would be longer.

The setting is innovative, I hope you will continue to work hard!

It's still ok, it's light-hearted and enjoyable, it progresses quickly, there's no CP, and it doesn't break the CP, it has a happy ending, one James dies, and everyone else is alive, which is pretty good.