Fast Travel: the Workaholic Host Is Captured by the Boss

The content is good and worth reading. (Note: I have only watched the first world content so far) I have a few emmms about the content, which I feel is a bit abrupt: 1. Zhu Rui's darkening is too fast. It's not that this is wrong, but the pace of the world story is a bit weird. For example, Zhu Rui, as a reborn person, is blessed by a virus, darkens quickly, and suddenly plummets and exits. I take the first world of the first part of "Always a Love Rival Wants to Chase Me" as an example. In that novel, there is a step-by-step confrontation between the rivals, and there is no abrupt feeling of suddenly going offline. Then there are the confrontation between the protagonist and Grandpa Shen, the emotional scene between Shen Ze and the protagonist, Shen Tian, ​​etc.: The confrontation with Grandpa Shen, since such a scene is described, means that it has a certain auxiliary effect on the main plot. This scene has the feeling of thunder and lightning, and the middle confrontation is good, but the result is a bit unsatisfactory. I'll talk about the emotional drama later. Let's talk about Shen Tian, after Shen Qiong targeted Shen Ze, the confrontation between Shen Tian and Grandpa Shen, and then what? I don't know how the strength of Shen Tian and Grandpa Shen compares, and I don't know any other information. So this description makes me think what's wrong with their confrontation? It feels meaningless. (I think the reason for this feeling is that there is insufficient description of other group portraits, that is, insufficient information, such as the strength of the Shi family and the Shen family, etc., And the characters of Shi Qian, Shi's father, etc., Which made me feel that they are just tool people, which makes the story less full). By the way, there is another very important point: Shen Qiong started to like the protagonist a little bit later. In this way, you can actually make a fuss about this point and increase the content of the story. 2. Let's talk about the emotional drama. There is an introduction in the middle. The Lord God wants to train the protagonist into a person who will not delay world tasks because of love and other emotions. After going through many tasks, the protagonist should also develop a cold personality (not the coldness of the iceberg beauty, but when it comes to emotions, he will not be easily moved. He pays more attention to tasks, which means that he may leave directly after completing the tasks. After all, he has also added "" to himself before). "Stingy" setting and the experience of being deceived, etc.) Therefore, I think the previous protagonists in the world should be in the process of discovering love, and the emotional drama of this story is a bit "bland" (that's not to say it doesn't have to be vigorous, but it is a bit confusing due to not knowing the love, and the intermittent sense of separation), and then the attitude of the main god makes me feel really confused (the feeling of not being able to grasp what he wants to do [exploration]). Of course, the above are all based on the fact that I have only watched the first world, and I will continue to watch it. Yes, come on [like].

I think this is okay, but I feel that the slap-in-the-face plot is not particularly exciting. Some of it is not explained clearly, and then it is over. It may be that the plot is too fast, and then the explanation is not so clear. And as for feelings, there is, but it feels very little. But when I look at it, basically half of it is about feelings, but there is very little feeling. Or should I say, it feels like the mission is a little more important than this, because after the mission is over, his relationship also means that it is over. It is relatively fast, especially when the mission is completed, and it ends after they are together again. At most, it will be one or two chapters, and then it will end directly in the next world. I hope to add more Also, that main god, why do you feel so unfamiliar with the times? Is it a kiss? They were all unconscious. The main god was not very worried and just asked the people in the system to leave it alone. But that Tiandao was the little fox Tiandao. After a while, he came out after calling the main god. He looked very cold. How did he survive a narrow escape? The system was disconnected. I'm really curious. It couldn't have been the main god. He slapped him in the face without saying anything. He also asked him to hand over the fire spirit bead to Ling Jue, but wasn't he the demon king of the devil? How did he hand it over? He didn't say anything. Also, when he narrowly escaped death, how did the two people suddenly merge? Is it to fight against the way of heaven? How did the two of them negotiate [face covering], I really want to know.

It's really good to watch, especially the world of the Republic of China, which doesn't have the aura of the protagonist. It made me see the cruelty of war during the Republic of China, and people who love each other can't stay together. I have read a lot of fast-travel novels, and some of them are from the Republic of China, but in those Republic of China protagonists have the aura of the protagonist, and in the end the war is victorious, and they love each other and stay together for the rest of their lives. I am tired of reading this kind of thing. The author's writing style is very good. Putting aside the original sweet pet quick-travel novel, every world is he. The world in the Republic of China happens to be be. It is really good to read [Like] [Like] [Like]

I really like the article written by the author. The writing is good and the progress is fast. What I also like the most is that it updates quickly! Of course, the characters are also well created! Come on, thank you so much❤️❤️❤️ Hey, it looks good (｡･ω･｡)ﾉ♡ The characters are distinct and the writing is getting better and better. The key is to have huge fans! Let's have a good time when we have passed and moved, hehe! Long live the changing times! I wish you much joy and peace in your transition and relocation. Years of worry-free and long-lasting health. Shaohua is always there, and it will remain the same for thousands of years. Laughing at each other in the spring breeze. As the years pass, the Yuan Yuan begins again. Farewell to the twilight, every year is full of fireworks, thousands of sails have passed and there are still dreams, and the youthful eyes are clear. Congratulations on the new year, may heaven and earth have joy and all the best!

The whole text is relatively smooth. There are slices of the Republic of China world and the Puppet Master world, and the emotional line is a bit sadistic, but I accepted it well. The author did not write a detailed psychological description, so it cannot be cruel to people's hearts. But it also makes readers feel that the emotional line is not sweet enough. It's obvious that the world the author added this year is better than before. Although there are still some logical flaws, the emotional lines are handled more delicately. This may be "quantitative change transformed into qualitative change" [laughing] Keep up the good work, the writing style is very stable, and I look forward to more good works. (It would be better if the logic pitfalls of the previous world could be fixed [making a face])

It's very beautiful [send heart], please do your best [send heart]! It would be better if there were more sweet lives of protagonists (personal opinion)

It's very interesting. The first world made me cry to death. It was very disappointing. I stopped watching the first world after reading it. I believe that the author who can write such an article will also read other worlds. The first world is my White Moonlight. It's worth the five stars.

It's beautiful. There are many themes that have touched my heart [send my heart] [send my heart] [send my heart] Hey, DaDa didn't have many emotional scenes, and then suddenly it was over [shocked][shocked][shocked][shocked] DaDa should explain it more clearly, but it's still good to watch

The writing is very good, and I am also very picky. [Send my heart][Send my heart]

It's very nice. I also want to see Shaoxiang, ABO, CV, those who play e-sports, and those with vests.

It's good to watch, but not enough. Each world is not very long, just right. The relationship between the two protagonists is also very sweet. I like it.

The content is good. I really like this. I hope the author will continue to work hard and continue to update. It's great to read, I hope the author will continue to work hard

This is the first time I've seen something so intuitive... Come on

It looks good, it looks good, but it's a pity that this plane is gone so quickly. I hope that Ye Sui can be finished in the end [grievance]

It's really good-looking. I like the outdated characters very much. Sometimes I feel sorry for the protagonists because they are sometimes powerless. :-(, The author's every aspect is very attractive. It's not particularly long but the plot is rich and the writing is good. It's super good-looking! [Love] [Love] [Love]

It's so beautiful. Come on!

Interesting storyline

Good looking, good luck to the author

Pretty good, watchable

Very beautiful, I like it very much

The writing is quite good, but some of the endings of the worlds are very sloppy (just my personal opinion), but overall it is quite attractive to read on.

It looks good, but it feels a little too fast at the back

Ahhhhhh, I really like this book. I need to update it more quickly [Sending my heart] [Sending my heart]

It's super beautiful [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] The characters are full of images, distinct personalities, and the plot is rich, but there are too few, not enough to watch [please update]

This book is really, really good! The plot is very good! The character design is also very well done! Like! I hope the author can update it soon!

The protagonist is pretty good-looking and really sweet.

So far I have only finished watching the first plane. The character setting is convenient and distinct. Looking forward to better development in Dada in the future, come on Dada!

Nice! The author will update soon! I like the setting of the new dimension [blowing kiss][blowing kiss][blowing kiss]

Super invincible and beautiful

It's okay, it's okay