The Witch's Hound

Originally, I planned to write about a single female protagonist, but sometimes as I write, I feel a little out of control, so I can't say. In fact, I have also thought about the multiple women surrounding the protagonist. It is definitely different from most harem stories. I am not sure if you have seen it before, but I am sure you are familiar with it. I have experience in writing some articles before, and combined with my own personality, I know which track is more unique [laughter]

Lady Ladis's most loyal puppy 😳 This is really good, unlike some novels that say it is similar to a "hound", but it turns out that they are all the same? A harem with a single heroine is either ambiguous or the heroine is cheating. This is really good, with plot and emotion. The writing is not very good, but it's still comfortable to read 😘

The novel written by the author is very good, and the writing style is also very good. It just feels that the front and the back are a bit inconsistent. Overall, this book is very good. I hope the author will continue to work hard [smile][smile]

To be honest, I couldn't stand the first few chapters. ʕ •ᴥ•ʔ..., Both the description and the characterization were almost boring, and I felt like I wasn't very clear-headed when I wrote them (꒪⌓꒪) , but then it got straight up. I read the comments and the author said that he had time to continue writing after a long time. I still want to read the later content, which allows me to build a strange and fascinating different world in my mind. I think this is a good book╭(ᵔ_>ᵔ)╮. I hope the author can stick to it and finish the book normally. Come on↖(^ω^)↗

A very good book, the protagonist's early abilities are more like those of a bloodhound, and the gift from the Father of the Gods dropped me to the ground. But I think you might as well let the witch make him a cluster bomb launcher, just like the Hound and the Thunderbolt are a pair in Apex, what? 👿Throwing cluster bombs👿Cluster bombs are coming👿Wide area bombing is coming, take cover👿Throwing thermite👿Shattered the enemy's shield👿Throwing arc stars👿Throwing fragmentation grenades👿Oh, damn, I fell to the ground seriously injured, but that shot was a good one😭😡Back off! Launching cluster bombs 😡 Ta-ta-ta-ta-da-da smashed an enemy's shield 😡 Give them a cluster bomb 😡 Launching arc stars 😡 Throwing arc stars 😡 Throwing fragmentation grenades 😡 Throwing fragmentation grenades 😡 Throwing thermite 😡 Wide area bombing is coming! The sky is falling! 😡Killed the whole team! I am the new kill king! 🤔

The writing style is a bit immature, but overall it's still very good. This kind of subject matter is still rare in this circuit.

The straightforward plot, concise and direct battle and killing scenes, and the characters' violent emotional fluctuations that appear at the right time, inadvertently bring a light depressive atmosphere to people. The side also expresses how difficult it was for the protagonist to live in a different world in the early stages, but it was very consistent with the general environment at that time. It's very beautiful!

If fully automatic weapons are added later, the fighting style will directly change, from hunting duel to battlefield.

You can check it out, but it's just not fun enough. If you want to read a fun story, forget it. The protagonist's current strength is average, but the forced love of the witch is still very satisfying.

It's a very good article. It has great potential if you keep writing it. There are no problems with the plot. Some flaws in the writing need to be improved. I hope the author can stick to a single female protagonist. The male protagonist will not play with stacking buffs to death in the end. It is a good book. The title is a bit confusing. The author loves you very much [sending my heart] [sending my heart] [sending my heart] (Also, Lao Deng will update me quickly 😠)