Wait! The Girl Group Auditions Are Underway

I've read about half of it, and it's a coincidence that it's chapter 25. It's about a girl group story that I like very much. The heroine's personality is quite unique. What I like the most is the line she said about weak, so it should be weaker (probably this one) The shortcoming is that it is too flat, there is no exciting point, no climax, and it is hard to remember. I think next time I write an article like this, I can write more about the time during the draft (stage) The stage is extremely flat, it's almost a rough ride, and the same goes for variety shows. This is my suggestion, hope you can see it