The City: the Return of the Confused

Hmm... Overall it's not bad, but it's a bit sloppy in some places. It feels like I wrote whatever I wanted to write and specially added things to the protagonist (such as Rainbow Dash). You can also pay attention to the typo problem, and there is no description about the world of Abnormalities. At present, it seems that the protagonist's ability is related to light, and that light is closely related to the fantasy. The body is an indispensable part, such as Welchler soda. The process of obtaining it may become a small poisonous point, so the background world of the abnormality and the description of the story become very important. For example, "Leticia has many good friends. The protagonist becomes one of many friends after entering the book. Leticia has not yet made friends When put into the gift box, the friend does not look like a human but is not like a multi-eyed spider. The protagonist has to play with Leticia, assume the role he plays in the story, and choose a different path at the end, such as: supporting Leticia's idea, helping her put the friend into the gift box, gaining the ability to send gift boxes containing friends, or , changed Leticia's mind, allowing her to move forward with the blessings and memories of her friends, and gain the ability to summon the shadow of her friends, and the Leticia extracted during the Lobe Company has also changed." At the same time, because of the change, it is easier to strengthen the synchronization rate of the light seed or to obtain the light seed synchronization rate later. All in all, this is a book with considerable potential. Please work hard, author.

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Gu... How should I put it? I feel that when writing about Lamp Cat, I should pay attention to some paragraphs and partial descriptions. Some plots require more study, Gu, but it is still good Gu♪[Send heart] (ps: Reading the full text makes the cat feel overwhelming, surging, roaring, and makes the cat's liver and gallbladder rupture.)

It's pretty good. Although the plot of the protagonist is not handled very well in some places, it is indeed an excellent work and worth watching. The idea of the book is very good, but more attention should be paid to the description of the characters and some scenes. It is a novel worth reading for beginners of monthly calculations. [Praise]

It's a good novel, but no one has read it

The author is rich, too rich

I feel very comfortable watching