Lost Immortality

The author's writing style is good and his ideas are also very good. The protagonist is also very capable. It's just that there are not many updates every day. But it will be fine if it can be updated continuously. Looking forward to a new reversal. 🧐 The plot is gripping and the characters are well-developed. Take Tantai Shuyang, for example. This person gives people the impression that he has a sunny inside and is easy to get in touch with. I think most readers will like this kind of image. Including the protagonist Luo Yishu, sometimes people feel a bit... Can't let go, but this is good, there is a lot of room for growth. I really enjoy watching these characters grow up little by little. The plot arrangement is also remarkable. It feels like there are a lot of foreshadowings. I hope the author can fill them in. There are a few chapters that feel like the amount of information is relatively large, but this is also an advantage. Too many online articles nowadays are really brainless, and there are not many such brainy ones anymore. Anyway, keep going, I hope the author will keep writing!!

It's very interesting and the writing style is pretty good, but I haven't read enough yet. Please update it soon! 😢😢😢

Use heaven and earth to mold a man, use man to take the place of eternal life

The writing is smooth, the story is novel, and the characters are well drawn. If you keep writing, it will definitely become popular 👍