Naruto*******

It's okay, but Naruto with long hair is too awkward

It's okay, even the psychological description of the Sandaime is not very good. In comparison, it would be better for Whitebeard next door to accept Naruto.

It's pretty good. I don't think there's much problem with it so far. If the follow-up is guaranteed, it might become a good book.

I have had an idea before about what Naruto would be like if he could become an immortal, so I would like to thank the author for writing such a novel. The celestial arts in Naruto are very similar to Qi training. Whether it is recorded in real Taoism, the dual cultivation of life and life to create a yang god and become an immortal, or the system in fantasy is quite interesting in Naruto. Also, let me tell you whether the author has also finished the Zhetian trilogy (Zhetian, Perfect World, Holy Ruins) [laughing evilly]

It feels good, it's quite novel, I just hope that the characters in the later generations will not be too bad, although the characters of the third generation have already been too bad [note]

It suits my taste very well. Come on, author, don't cut it in half [laughs awkwardly]

There are signs of opening a harem. As soon as it opens, we will withdraw.

Come on, author, five stars.

Come on, come on, come on, come on

Needless to say, I just like Naruto

Very beautiful (*^ω^*) Great work＾0＾~Update੭ ᐕ)੭*⁾⁾ By the way, I have a question...? Will... (What kind of Taoist priest is here?) Come back after that?

When will volume 2 come out?

This novel is very good

Not bad, keep up the good work

I hope the author will create an independent worldview in this book