Star Iron************

A very good work. Kevin has never been a selfless hero. He is very selfish. He only joined the Fire Moth for Mei at the beginning. All he did was that he was forced to have no choice but to retreat. He has always loved Mei deeply and had absolute trust in Mei. At least what you wrote is very similar to Kevin.

I can only say that it is very good. It perfectly transplants Kevin's past into Star Iron. However, I hope that the protagonist is still myself and will not be affected by too many memories. Also, more chapters are not enough to watch [smile]

It's quite interesting. The author is very complicated [laughter] I may be the author's first reader. I saw this book by chance before it was signed and put on the shelves. Now it seems that I am really destined. From the difficulty of speaking fluently in the first chapter to gradually getting better and mastering the writing method, I witnessed the author's great progress. It feels so good to raise a child. I also witnessed the author being severely beaten by Dr. Truth, hahaha [laughing evilly] Some people complain about the name of the protagonist, but I think that is actually unnecessary. Although it is a bit dramatic, this is not Kevin after all. He is a character created by the author with great effort. He does not need to play a certain role completely. Just like us, just be himself. Some people may think that the plot of this book has too many elements, or that they cannot accept the behavior of modifying the world view, but in fact, as long as you read it, you will find that the author actually has ideas, and basically unreasonable things can be rounded off. This book is good at character description, and the author is not bad at shaping the plot. To be honest, would anyone really follow the original settings in fan fiction? Wouldn't it be pitiful if readers thought this way about fan authors? No way, right? If you are also complicated, keep reading, this book will not disappoint you. The author is knowledgeable in a certain sense and is proficient in the themes of various works [learned] Or you can try to push for updates. The author seems to be Maomao. It's interesting to see Maomao almost crying (sorry, I'm actually a bad person [smile]) Author, don't be anxious, sort out the plot slowly, don't care too much about the readers' opinions (including mine), follow your own ideas, your writing is actually good, just pay attention to the logic and reasonableness. I wish the author will get better and better as he writes more. I really like this book. Thank you.

Good! Definitely the best simulation I've ever seen!

Good looking, good knife, so short, sorry for my sister-in-law

The welding between Wang Kaiwen and Kevin is a bit stiff. After all, their personalities are quite different. One is philanthropic and sentimental, while the other is a dedicated and straight man.

I can't wait to see the famous scene of Honkai Impact, Still Chasing Me, [smile][smile][smile]

The author combines the plots of Bengtie and Honkai with a certain degree of novelty, and he also has his own unique insights into the proportion of the two games in the plot. The novel is well written and has a touching plot. Thank you to the author for providing a good work to everyone. However, I don't like this kind of subject very much. I don't plan to read it after the novelty is over. For the overall quality, I will give it 4 stars and run away. All in all, the novel is still good, except for a few shortcomings. If you like the combination of Beng Tie and Ben Hui plots, you can read it to alleviate the book shortage. However, the Honkai plot in the novel accounts for a huge proportion of the Bentie plot, and due to the simulator theme, the plot has been slightly modified. If you don't like it, you can leave a review like me and run away [Cool]

As a book that I am really following, the excellence of this book lies in the fact that most of the plots of the author maintain a strong appeal when writing. While being serious, he can inadvertently use the power of jokes to make people laugh. For those who have never played Honkai Impact 3, this book can't be ignored. Yi Dang uses a planet and a fairy boat in the context of collapsing iron. He does not take fun as the core, but uses fun as a flavoring, which makes the whole book unobtrusively depressing. As for the original protagonist group, they are marginalized and appear different from other fans. As long as you can endure the author's early testing of his own style, you will be able to call it a top-notch work in the future. Those who have actually played Honkai Impact III can see that Kevin and Alto are similar but have very different performances. The transformation of the protagonist is also natural (if you want to follow the main plot, don't read it)

I feel very interesting, at least much better than some books

It feels great to treat each simulation as a small world of infinite flow, but the integration after two simulations feels a bit stiff... Well, actually, it was a bit stiff the first time too, but the connection between Wang Kaiwen and Kevin is still okay and easy to substitute. The revelation of the truth about Su and Mei is also a huge plus. The second time Qiong Hua and Otto... Uh... It's really impossible to combine the two character experiences together -! (Wails)

I feel like it's well written. Cheers, author (ง•̀_•́)ง!

Overall, it's pretty good, although there are some flaws (and some idiots, after all, they didn't read carefully, and they have probably forgotten some of the things the author wrote before), but I have to say, some of the changes in it almost made me unable to stand up (ah heh) [smile] The other thing is this simulation, full experience, my God, I have experienced it all at once in more than 20 years, focusing on a full-body experience. The good news is that you have the fighting skills and even knowledge in the simulation. The bad news is that although you have them, your emotions may not be able to bear these memories. After all, if it is all a tragedy, do you think you can really bear it without some auxiliary entries? It can only be said that our protagonist's psychological endurance is quite good. He is already very strong without being overwhelmed by memories and tragedies immediately. Children, pay tribute to the legendary pressure-resistant king [laughing] I have read relatively little so far, so this is my impression after reading a few. If there is something wrong, you can tell me. [Thinking] After all, only by understanding the content of the book can I devote myself to it better, right?

This kind of writing by a new author is pretty good. There have been quite a few in the simulator genre in recent years, but there are fewer of these writing with a bystander (not from Kevin's perspective), and the description of the environment is quite detailed. The overall feeling is good, but I feel that the personal pace is a bit faster (most of them seem to be more than ten chapters per chapter [laughing]), and the emotional line I feel like I can't keep up with it, but the interesting part of this book is probably the complex composition [thinking], including but not limited to Jinju, Demon Slayer, etc. I can look forward to it, and I also hope that the author can find his own writing direction as soon as possible. After all, there are a lot of second creations these days, but most of them are either useless or unfinished. I hope this book can at least guarantee the current level.

Great needless to say. The author's writing style is very good. It reads like prose and like a person telling you a story. This is the first time I have seen this delicate writing style on Tomato, written by the author of "Sending Love to You". I still want to say one thing, the knife is not harsh enough! ! ! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

Pretty good. Mortals embark on the road to salvation, and fools embark on the journey of foolishness. Various aspects are presented in the form of a simulator. Although the interlude of the (pseudo) paradise is very abrupt, the story is still exciting. False paradise, false heroes, false crystal flowers, the awakening of humanity, a world where Ellie does not exist, showing the paradise (false) where Ellie exists.

The author is really a dragon and a phoenix among men and a hero among women. He actually integrated the ancestor Kevin and Bishop Otto into one body. The two collided with each other. Instead of falling apart, they complemented each other as if they were one body. Supplemented by the elements of war hammers and stars, it was full of fun and amazing (the best episode of Culture [currently in the process of being drafted]) (So the author should update quickly!!!!!! [Laughing])

I would like to give you a suggestion. It would be better to remove the facial expressions and systematic complaints. Like this, it always feels like it ruins the atmosphere.

In the part of Yaliluo No. 6, When you first watch it, it may be difficult to accept this directly applied world view, but if you can accept it, it still looks pretty good.

The quality is very good. If the author can keep updating twice a day and update steadily, the rating of this book will be a little over nine points [please update]

The ultimate invincible Niubi is a beautiful stitched article. Kevin's article really shocked me. He perfectly wrote the transformation of the ancestor. I thought there was a knife, but in the end, there was a twist. My sister Mei is the winner, right? It's a comedy that brings joy out of tragedy. Looking forward to Otto's chapter and Lao Yang's rise to fame again [laughing]

Damn, I fucking understand why it's only 8.2 Points. His plot is too advanced. It's hard to describe the plot in words, but it's really good. There's no sense of inconsistency between the two games in this plot.

It's good-looking, but the update is a bit slow. I feel like there are a lot of people raising it, so don't run out of people [staring] I read the book reviews, and I can only say that everyone has their own preferences for radish and cabbage. The author's writing is quite good, so don't be affected. It's normal for the plot to be a bit self-contained, and the author is still making progress. It's just that the connection between simulation and reality is a bit stiff, so come on!

Five stars. Absolutely five stars. The ability to empathize is really strong. And the characterizations are all very good. This is the best fan book I have ever read that combines Honkai Impact and Star Railroad. He brought out the soul of every simulated character. Although there are a few chapters now. But except for the insufficient number of words, everything else is very good.

I stayed up until three o'clock and watched it all in one sitting, Fight! Cool!

It's good to read, love to read, read more, the author is so fragrant, the author is so good!

If the savior of the Star God is really born, then the universe will inevitably be destroyed, which will change the wisdom and there will be no need to anchor the fourth moment of the universe. There would be no Pharos. (I have an idea. If the protagonist takes the light cone of salvation directly to the Destruction Star God, the Savior Star God will be awakened and the Destruction Star God will be destroyed.) This is really interesting.

If you don't have some artistic talent, you really can't see it. It's not simply invincible, but it feels like the stronger you get, the more powerless you feel, but you do your best.

This book feels more like a retelling of the stories of people in Honkai Impact III. There isn't much new stuff, but it persecutes Lao Yang. I give it 4 stars.

It looks good [laughs] We found a small number of memes among the large number of roast chicken articles [face covering]