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This book is one of the best Harry Potter fanfics I have read. Currently, I think there are only two books that are the best, so I highly recommend this book. The writing is very good! I hope the author can update on time and don't abandon the article [cry][cry][cry]

It's very well written. Deha's CP writing is really awesome. The characters are basically not OOC. Many HP fanfics basically improve themselves to fight against Voldemort, or form CPs with people they like. ． There are very few cases of gender transformation; and Deha's CP writing is very good, it's this type of slow-moving together... (But I can understand it) The author updates 3 times a day, which is too few. It is recommended to update 10 times a day! !

The concept and concept of this book are excellent. Although the protagonist is the sexually-transformed Miss Malfoy, she is a native girl in this world. It gave me the opportunity to experience a magical world with a tsundere daughter. The story unfolds from the perspective of the daughter, with delicate emotions, natural development, and natural writing style. It's just that when it comes to action scenes or certain camera transitions, I personally feel a little messy. All in all, it's a good story, I hope it gets better and better [you taste it carefully]

I finished reading the existing ones in one go. Each character was well portrayed. Because I read it in one go, I felt better. I felt depressed after watching it [face covering] I like it, the ideas are clear and smooth, the relationships between the characters in the book are realistic and clear

It looks pretty good. The description of the heroine, an arrogant young lady, is quite cute. She also gradually grows up in some things, changes herself, and understands others. As you go to the back, she feels less arrogant and more coquettish. However, there is very little description of the heroine and Harry's strength, and they don't know their specific strength levels.

It's great. The plot description, character psychology, and storyline are all very detailed. It can be seen that the author's writing style is very good and the gradual process of emotions from shallow to deep, from rejection to later attraction is perfectly displayed. I have to say that it is among the best in this genre. There is one thing that I am a little confused about. Malfoy is a noble. Sister and Harry became interested in each other when they first met, which makes me feel a little hasty, but maybe it is to pave the way for a not-so-good opening to later resolve the misunderstanding and understand each other, but overall, this flaw seems insignificant. Come on, author, continue to wait for your updates [Blowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss][Flowing Kiss]

It's very well written. The story of Draco and Harry, the tsundere eldest daughter, is a theme rarely seen in HP fics. It's worth reading.

It's quite good. How can I put it this way? I really like the feeling of this kind of alternative novel. It's not like the original novel, emmmm. I'm not good at expressing myself, but you can definitely read it. I think this is a relatively good fan book. I really recommend watching it. Many characters don't have occ (should it be the abbreviation? My English is not good). I like my sister-in-law character very much. Let me tell you again, you are a stupid Harry Potter.

It's really good. Teacher, please keep on keeping on. Please, there are really very few non-OOC fics in the fanfic, and the ideas are also very novel. It's a good-looking fic.

As far as the HP fanfics I have read, this one is the most emotionally detailed, and the portrayal of the characters and the control of the plot rhythm are also good. I had never thought of Malfoy's gender being changed. I have to say that the setting of the tsundere young lady is quite touching [smile]

The language and writing style are very beautiful, the description is very vivid, and the reading is extremely smooth. It is difficult to stop after reading. The wording is appropriate, the expression is delicate, and the details are grasped well. It is very satisfying. It once brought great satisfaction to my spiritual world. The subject matter is novel, the plot is exciting and fascinating, and the arrangement is reasonable. The characters are distinct, vivid and three-dimensional, and the creation is perfect. The character descriptions are appropriately interspersed in the text, the emotional expressions are profound and make people understand deeply, and the psychological descriptions are excellent. Overall, just look good! (ง •̀_•́)งMay the author continue to work hard!

The character creation is very consistent with the original work, each character's characteristics are retained, the story is interspersed with the original work, the general plot direction remains unchanged, only Draco's plot, and the changes in the plot and mentality of the characters related to Draco are changed, just like Pansy in the original work is the ex-girlfriend of the male Draco, and is pretending to be the best friend of the female Draco. After all, men and women have different thoughts and mentality, and the plot direction that affects the people around them is also different. The author really paid attention, but Harry and the female Draco are too sweet, they are going to die [licking screen]

It's very beautiful. The author's description of Draco is very consistent with my ideal eldest lady, and the interaction with Harry is also very enjoyable. The characters are basically not OOC, and Pansy and Daphne both have great personalities. My impression of them in the original novel was basically blank. It's just that it's too little. Apart from the fact that it's not finished yet and it's a bit unwatchable, there are absolutely no other shortcomings. I'm going to post what I saw and publish eleven chapters a day! Author, you are my god! [Shock]

In many fanfic book reviews on Tomato, you can see people saying that it is one of the best fanfics of a certain work, but many of them are actually not satisfactory. The reviews of this novel are not without exception, but seeing it now, I have to say that in my experience, this novel can be regarded as one of the best Harry Potter fan fictions. Before reading it, I read the reviews. It is said that the author wrote Ron very annoying, but I think the author constructed Ron's character very well. I think Ron should be like this. It's just that it may lack the protagonist group filter that is added to him in many other novels, which makes some people feel uncomfortable. The plot design of this novel is almost uninteresting to me, as it seems to rely too much on the original work. Of course, this is very reasonable, because in the background of this article, only Malfoy's sexual transformation has come and gone with the original work, and it is very reasonable for the story line to rely on the original work. But I feel that as far as the author's writing style is concerned, he should be able to design more interesting links without being obtrusive. Tomato's remuneration seems to be very low. I once doubted the author's ability. Writing a book here is more about sharing. As a man, appreciating a love relationship from Draco's (female) perspective is often a bit dramatic, but this novel's excellent writing style, excellent understanding of the original work, and thoughtful detail design made me choose to read proactively rather than being pushed by things like cool points, sugar, or knives. I have no interest in things like sugar or knives, but the author's writing style has a restrained, crisp, yet luminous beauty. During my free time during the exam month, it really made me feel relaxed. Finally, I would like to thank the author for allowing Draco to change his gender. In female videos, it seems that Draco can fall in love with Harry Potter without changing his gender, but in this case I will definitely miss this novel😭

This is the best book I have read in all genres on Tomato. The author is really talented, the writing is first-rate, the characters are lifelike, and the emotional development is delicate and vivid. Because it is a gender-changing fanfic, it may not be popular, but with the author's talent and strength, it is really invincible to switch to romance novels. I really hope the author can continue to work hard, more and more updates! If you are talented, you should be seen by more people!

It's the best HP fan I've ever read. The story is reasonable and logical. It doesn't have the kind of mindless coolness of being invincible and changing the plot a lot, trying to save regrets. It's very consistent with the original work and strives to make changes within the limits of one's abilities. It's very touching. The emotional description is extremely delicate, whether it is sweet or sad, it is very touching, especially Draco's grievance and pain (angry) in the dozens of chapters.

It seems that I am commenting now that I still have little reading time. That's because I couldn't find this book after reading it about a year ago. After logging in, I just found it now. I really like Harder CP. The sexual transformation of Miss Draco Malfoy is so beautiful! ! It seems that my reading time is still recorded

It has profound meaning. I hope those who are interested can put aside their arrogance and appreciate it carefully. The most accurate HP fanfic I have ever seen. Ps: Tsundere is so in love [blowing kiss] pps: Deha Saigao! ! I beat him too fast and I can't withdraw... It's Hader, not Deha [face covering]

High sugar without knife The description of the plot is detailed and appropriate, and the adaptation of the plot is reasonable and meets the needs of readers. There are some choices in character creation. Draco Malfoy, a character who has not been written much, has a full personality after his sexual transformation, and there is no obvious unreasonableness. As for Ron, he seems a little dull, but Hermione's character image is more three-dimensional. She no longer has the very mean academic image in the previous films. Hermione, who has higher emotional intelligence, is awesome. In any case, it has rekindled my passion for the Harry Potter series. I haven't read it since the first year of junior high school. At the same time, it also fixed some bugs for Rowling [laughter] All in all, it's worth seeing, highly recommended!

It's a HP novel that's very comfortable to read, and it's really sweet. However, the number of words is still a bit too short, and I'll have to read it for a while [laughing]

The writing style of this book is smooth, and every word seems to contain the author's deep emotions. Like a delicate painting, it brings readers into a world full of imagination and beauty. Your words are not only clear but also contagious, making people feel the power and charm of the words in the process of reading. Your writing style is really admirable and I look forward to more wonderful works from you in the future.

This is one of the most comfortable fanfics I have seen in a long time. It is rare. The character descriptions are very delicate. The writing style is much better than those mass-produced cool novels that use formulas and assembly lines. But this is also a shortcoming. That's why I can't stand reading other fanfics now [face covering] The author gives me a lot of cheers [sending heartfelt wishes] I didn't expect that the million-word chapter will be finished, even though I've only read more than 200 chapters now, it's sad that it's already finished early [smile] Why did I watch it for nine hours when I went [covering face]

The description is very delicate. Although the author said that he is a male, I doubt it. After all, his description of this kind of girl's mind is really good. But that's not necessarily the case, because it feels like the author's strokes are a bit too many. All in all, it seems to be a very good book and worth reading. I will try my best to see if there is an opportunity to send some money to the author. Of course, if the author replies to me, I will definitely call right away🤪

Like it, like it, I like this one better than other fanfics where I know the plot directly

The writing style is very good, it is at the top level in HP, but I feel that the author is a bit humble in order to seek a reading gift. I wish the author income and data can be better [please update]

It's pretty good. Malfoy's image is portrayed very well. Compared with the original work, the transformation is very natural.

A very good book. I think it is currently one of the most promising books among the Harry Potter books. It has reasonable logic and excellent writing. I highly recommend it to everyone. It will not be a loss if you do. It's a little sharp in the middle period🔪, but it soon becomes sweet. It's not like other books that are all 🔪. I couldn't ease my depressed heart and didn't want to read it. So I am very satisfied with this book and it is worth recommending. It may also be the first Harry Potter fan novel I have read. It is worth watching for Harry Potter fans. It doesn't matter if you haven't read it. The author of the book is very detailed. You can understand it even if you haven't read "Harry Potter", so I highly recommend it for newcomers.

There are some knives on the front, but most of them are just candy. I feel better than what Aunt Luo wrote.

The writing is really good and the characters are very delicately drawn. The interaction between the two people is also very interesting, it is a great fanfic [Adoration]

The characters are the most relatable among the HP fanfics I've read, keep it up [sending my heart]