Apocalypse Tycoon: The Reborn Female Lead Starts by Showering Me with Gifts

Good-looking, without the classic betrayal and cheating

It's very interesting to watch, but the pace of the plot is a bit slow. It's a cool story and doesn't drag on.

Okay, okay, be sure to hold on tight, don't write too much. Shangguan Changyu is one of the few girls who can make readers shine. She has the potential to be a great heroine. You can write more emotional scenes to make her and the hero closer, but don't be too close and ruin the character. I'm optimistic about you, the author.

Very good apocalyptic writing It's not the traditional mindless white text. The author's writing skills are very good I hope the author will continue to work hard!

Quite remarkable, let me remind you first, it is not a cool novel, nor is it the brainless stallion that some people imagine. It has few emotional dramas, but is good at it. It has a very big world view, foreshadowing is interspersed throughout the text, and there are many female protagonists, but most of the female protagonists have little description. Just talking about the development of this world view, it is amazing, really amazing, and the interweaving of timelines becomes more and more outrageous as it progresses. It is too rare in Tomato, and there is no superficial sense of upgrading in strength. From beginning to end, the protagonist is absolutely the strongest in his environment. It focuses on the development of various world views in the later period. What is excellent is that the world view is well developed and not abrupt. The only problem is that the author chose the title in order to attract traffic, but his pace is obviously slow, and there is too much foreshadowing of the end of the world. Although I can read it, Tomato readers are used to reading cool articles, and this kind of rhythm that leaves foreshadowing and points to the world is really inappropriate. There are several very impressive points, and the mutual calculations between the snakes of fate. Starting from 2008 to 1999, the plot is completed in a literary and rational way. When it came to the Ice Age, the world view unfolded very calmly, and the anchor hairpin (the foreshadowing that had been buried for nearly a year). The supporting role of Shen Meng is also very admirable. That period of returning to the past is the turning point of the book. The world view begins to expand, the foreshadowing begins to be withdrawn, and the timeline begins to close. After returning, things have changed, but the absolute reputation of the protagonist prevents the protagonist's plot from focusing too much on fighting for power. After a quick explanation of the information, he enters the Tiandu dungeon, which is very clean and neat.

The new theme in apocalyptic novels is that the male protagonist is a rich man himself, and he is not the kind of brainless rich second generation, but a real aristocratic son with ability, strength and good character. Moreover, the author dug a lot of holes and filled them in. The narrative technique is also very good, but some of the plots are a bit brain-burning. I really can't react without reading the comments 🤦 The emotional lines are also very well written. There are many descriptions of Mu Qingzhi and Shangguan Changyu, and they have a strong sense of empathy, which is very touching. Lan Xi is also one of my favorite heroines. And the protagonist's woman doesn't have a knife 😘[Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

One sentence changed my view on the entire novel: "I hear the humiliation of others, as light as a feather, and observe the ethics of thousands of years, as light as floating clouds! However, everyone in the world is trapped by morality and human relations, just like a cocoon, unable to escape for life. Only I can break the seven emotions and six desires, eliminate greed, anger, stupidity, hate, love, and evil desires, and understand the original heart, so that I can seek immortality." A very charming harem novel.

One of the best apocalyptic novels I have ever read. It's just that the rating is too low. The only fly in the ointment is . 1. The functions of many people's powers are not written out. The protagonist's eternal power can be written in more detail, otherwise there will be no concept, and it is most difficult to predict the male protagonist's current stage of strength. 😠 2 You can also write a perspective for some heroines, even just a few words, otherwise some heroines will not be mentioned in more than 50 pictures. 😠 3. There are also some details, such as when the male protagonist returns. No one asked the hero where to go. 4. Deliberately create the image of the male protagonist through other characters. 😠 Countless advantages 1. A lot of foreshadowing is written in the back. 2 There are no very old routines. 3. The content is very rich and well written, with almost no watermarks. 4. The ideas are very clear and the article is very fluent. 5. The character setting is very good, and many people have their own uniqueness. 6. The characters' emotions are very real. 7. Whether it is the main line or other lines, they are all well written. There is no deliberate expression of the main line at the expense of other content. 8...(Too many advantages, I can't finish them) 🥰 In today's rapidly developing society. It's rare for someone to sit down and read a book, but this one is worth it. 😘 Overall, this book is awesome. 🥰 (Don't ask me why I didn't reward you, it's just because I didn't get ashore. When I get ashore, I will be in the S-level reward position) 😎

The subject matter is good, and the male protagonist's image is rare and novel, which is good. The connection between Su Qingying and Shen Chen's candy-making incident after the high-speed train derailed really stood out to me. This relationship is reasonable, natural and touching. But the plot digs a lot of holes. When I saw the hero's mother who was far away in Europe, I felt that his father Shen Fei had an inexplicable break with his mother and insisted on taking Shen Chen away. However, when he refused, he took his sister away. Then the sister disguised herself as a man and grew up in Europe. In the end, the relationship between the brother and sister was no longer what it used to be. Is it because the author wants to create an image of the male protagonist Shen Chen who values ​​family affection and loves his sister, but I think it's a little inconsistent. Generally speaking, the narrative of the article is natural and smooth, and the writing and language skills are good, but the meaning is slightly unclear. I want to see Shen Chen's S-level strength as the Eternal Divine Lord, and his superiority as the leader of the Free City. So it's not that great, but it's just a personal opinion.

The setting is relatively complete, but the foreshadowing before the end of the world is a bit too much in my opinion. The overall setting is relatively large and detailed, compared to other Tomato works of the same type. Five Stars fights for Shangguan Changyu. The description of the first heroine is very good. The sister of the Su family feels that the story line is better than expected. The sister of the Su family is just a gimmick. If you follow more stories, you may consider changing the title of the book.