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Good-looking, without the classic betrayal and cheating

It's very interesting to watch, but the pace of the plot is a bit slow. It's a cool story and doesn't drag on.

Okay, okay, be sure to hold on tight, don't write too much. Shangguan Changyu is one of the few girls who can make readers shine. She has the potential to be a great heroine. You can write more emotional scenes to make her and the hero closer, but don't be too close and ruin the character. I'm optimistic about you, the author.

Very good apocalyptic writing It's not the traditional mindless white text. The author's writing skills are very good I hope the author will continue to work hard!

The new theme in apocalyptic novels is that the male protagonist is a rich man himself, and he is not the kind of brainless rich second generation, but a real aristocratic son with ability, strength and good character. Moreover, the author dug a lot of holes and filled them in. The narrative technique is also very good, but some of the plots are a bit brain-burning. I really can't react without reading the comments [face covering] The emotional lines are also very well written. There are many descriptions of Mu Qingzhi and Shangguan Changyu, and they have a strong sense of empathy, which is very touching. Lan Xi is also one of my favorite heroines. And the protagonist's woman doesn't have a knife [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

Quite remarkable, let me remind you first, it is not a cool novel, nor is it the brainless stallion that some people imagine. It has few emotional dramas, but is good at it. It has a very big world view, foreshadowing is interspersed throughout the text, and there are many female protagonists, but most of the female protagonists have little description. Just talking about the development of this world view, it is amazing, really amazing, and the interweaving of timelines becomes more and more outrageous as it progresses. It is too rare in Tomato, and there is no superficial sense of upgrading in strength. From beginning to end, the protagonist is absolutely the strongest in his environment. It focuses on the development of various world views in the later period. What is excellent is that the world view is well developed and not abrupt. The only problem is that the author chose the title in order to attract traffic, but his pace is obviously slow, and there is too much foreshadowing of the end of the world. Although I can read it, Tomato readers are used to reading cool articles, and this kind of rhythm that leaves foreshadowing and points to the world is really inappropriate. There are several very impressive points, and the mutual calculations between the snakes of fate. Starting from 2008 to 1999, the plot is completed in a literary and rational way. When it came to the Ice Age, the world view unfolded very calmly, and the anchor hairpin (the foreshadowing that had been buried for nearly a year). The supporting role of Shen Meng is also very admirable. That period of returning to the past is the turning point of the book. The world view begins to expand, the foreshadowing begins to be withdrawn, and the timeline begins to close. After returning, things have changed, but the absolute reputation of the protagonist prevents the protagonist's plot from focusing too much on fighting for power. After a quick explanation of the information, he enters the Tiandu dungeon, which is very clean and neat.

One sentence changed my view on the entire novel: "I hear the humiliation of others, as light as a feather, and observe the ethics of thousands of years, as light as floating clouds! However, everyone in the world is trapped by morality and human relations, just like a cocoon, unable to escape for life. Only I can break the seven emotions and six desires, eliminate greed, anger, stupidity, hate, love, and evil desires, and understand the original heart, so that I can seek immortality." A very charming harem novel.

One of the best apocalyptic novels I have ever read. It's just that the rating is too low. The only fly in the ointment is . 1. The functions of many people's powers are not written out. The protagonist's eternal power can be written in more detail, otherwise there will be no concept, and it is most difficult to predict the male protagonist's current stage of strength. [Angry] 2 You can also write a perspective for some heroines, even just a few words, otherwise some heroines will not be mentioned in more than 50 pictures. [Angry] 3. There are also some details, such as when the male protagonist returns. No one asked the hero where to go. 4. Deliberately create the image of the male protagonist through other characters. [Angry] Countless advantages 1. A lot of foreshadowing is written in the back. 2 There are no very old routines. 3. The content is very rich and well written, with almost no watermarks. 4. The ideas are very clear and the article is very fluent. 5. The character setting is very good, and many people have their own uniqueness. 6. The characters' emotions are very real. 7. Whether it is the main line or other lines, they are all well written. There is no deliberate expression of the main line at the expense of other content. 8...(Too many advantages, I can't finish them) [Adoration] In today's rapidly developing society. It's rare for someone to sit down and read a book, but this one is worth it. [Blowing kiss] Overall, this book is awesome. [Adoration] (Don't ask me why I didn't reward you, it's just because I didn't get ashore. When I get ashore, I will be in the S-level reward position) [Cool]

The subject matter is good, and the male protagonist's image is rare and novel, which is good. The connection between Su Qingying and Shen Chen's candy-making incident after the high-speed train derailed really stood out to me. This relationship is reasonable, natural and touching. But the plot digs a lot of holes. When I saw the hero's mother who was far away in Europe, I felt that his father Shen Fei had an inexplicable break with his mother and insisted on taking Shen Chen away. However, when he refused, he took his sister away. Then the sister disguised herself as a man and grew up in Europe. In the end, the relationship between the brother and sister was no longer what it used to be. Is it because the author wants to create an image of the male protagonist Shen Chen who values ​​family affection and loves his sister, but I think it's a little inconsistent. Generally speaking, the narrative of the article is natural and smooth, and the writing and language skills are good, but the meaning is slightly unclear. I want to see Shen Chen's S-level strength as the Eternal Divine Lord, and his superiority as the leader of the Free City. So it's not that great, but it's just a personal opinion.

The setting is relatively complete, but the foreshadowing before the end of the world is a bit too much in my opinion. The overall setting is relatively large and detailed, compared to other Tomato works of the same type. Five Stars fights for Shangguan Changyu. The description of the first heroine is very good. The sister of the Su family feels that the story line is better than expected. The sister of the Su family is just a gimmick. If you follow more stories, you may consider changing the title of the book.

It feels very good to watch, and some of the plots are resonant. The most profound impact is that the protagonist is forced to go back to the ancient times, "I want to go home." I really feel that sense of helplessness and loneliness. Secondly, the protagonist's character is also very well written. It is not like the pretense and slap in the face in the Invincible novel, but the sense of oppression that has been solved by stepping forward. However, the update is too slow, and there will be a pause in the update for a while. There are also some problems with the outline and the plot. I forgot about the previous plot because I stopped updating for a while, but I vaguely remember that the plot was a bit slow. In the early stage, many readers were discouraged. Later, it was also because of the update problems. Recently, I saw that the author has opened a new book. I actually hope that the author will give an explanation for this book. However, because some issues are not popular, the work is not effective, which is understandable.

The new theme in apocalyptic novels is that the male protagonist is a rich man himself, and he is not the kind of brainless rich second generation, but a real aristocratic son with ability, strength and good character. Moreover, the author dug a lot of holes and filled them in. The narrative technique is also very good, but some of the plots are a bit brain-burning. I really can't react without reading the comments [face covering] The emotional lines are also very well written. There are many descriptions of Mu Qingzhi and Shangguan Changyu, and they have a strong sense of empathy, which is very touching. Lan Xi is also one of my favorite heroines. And the protagonist's woman doesn't have a knife [Blow a kiss][Flow a kiss][Flow a kiss]

My evaluation is that the title of the book is wrong, which lowers the upper limit of the number. It has been updated to about 150 chapters. I stayed up late to read 150 chapters in one night. I haven't had the urge to stay up late to read a novel for a long time. The plot has ups and downs, and the characters are vivid and cute... I won't comment on anything else. I can only say that the author should work harder! ! ! [Blowing kiss]

Such a beautiful book must be promoted more

It is quite different from the general apocalyptic invincible novels. This novel is not keen on forcibly creating conflicts to advance the plot and express the protagonist's awesomeness (if you read this too much, it will really feel boring). Instead, it uses side descriptions of some other characters. It does not need to conflict with others, but it can also portray the elegance, nobility, and invincibility of the protagonist, which makes people feel more comfortable. (Only personal opinion [Blowing Kiss] [Blowing Kiss])

To be honest, this book is one of the few that I like. The author's writing is very interesting and logical, and all the foreshadowing has been filled in. The causal relationship of the timeline was very novel to me after it was written. It is indeed very attractive. Come on, author! [Learned][Learned]

Let's take a look at the male protagonist's harem: ⒈Lan Xi (the maid who appears at the beginning) ⒉Su Mengning and Su Qingying (the two sisters of the Su family in Jiangcheng) ⒊Mu Qingzhi (the original container of the Snake of Destiny) ⒋Shangguan Changyu (the eldest wife of the male protagonist) ⒌Xia (the demon of the Yueshan clan) Things) ⒍Chen Qianyan (maybe he will accept it?) ⒎Xiao Luoke (the eldest daughter of the Xiao family, no formal income yet) ⒏Iluo (descendant of the Dream God, the male protagonist's first child should be hers) ⒐Mo Xuanyue (Tianxuan Saint, the relationship has not been officially confirmed yet)

This is my first time reading this kind of apocalyptic novel. So far, I think it's pretty good. However, some paragraphs have too many water characters, and one idea is emphasized more than once in one chapter. However, the writing method that makes me more novel is flashback, which is to recall things through the protagonist's previous life. It's very exciting.

It's not suitable for beginners. The early stage is really bad and full of nonsense, but the later stage is still okay and not bad. Don't read it if you like a fast-paced story (kill decisively). The emotional drama is mediocre, and the heroine is poorly portrayed. Later on, I hope that the second volume will be of a high standard. It must be high but not low. The portrayal of the protagonist is quite good, the invincible state is of a certain level, and the plot (imagination) (hole-filling) is well arranged. Keep up with each episode and watch them one by one. Daily reminders are not supported.

It's okay. I don't really like to read articles with multiple female protagonists, but the writing is okay, and it doesn't offend me. The plot is also pretty good. I just have to wait for the update, although I haven't seen the update yet. I'm a little anxious seeing less and less [face covering]. I hope the author sticks to himself and doesn't change his writing style because of external factors. I've read a lot of articles like this. The style changes as I write, and I have to abandon the article.

Really nice. There are not many books like Tomato that have self-consistent logic, reasonable plots, and can fill in the gaps on their own [Blowing Kiss]. When I first read it, I thought it was an old-fashioned novel with a female-video romance feel, but I thought I was short of books and continued reading. Generally, I don't read novels below 9 points, but I didn't expect that it was still a treasure novel, but it was too slow [smile], I will be rewarded if I read it faster [smile].

The twists and turns of the plot are wonderful. It is not just a simple read but also makes you use your brain. It is interesting to watch. The character descriptions are quite delicate. The characters have their own personalities. The key protagonist is not a turtle. Overall, it is very good! Come on, I hope it doesn't end badly, I highly recommend it!

In my mind, this theme type should be more exciting, and the family characters are also handled perfectly. It looks very exciting, and the pace is fast, but not chaotic. The big world behind is worth looking forward to, but it is too slow [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying] [almost crying]

It's very good. You must read the back part. Many people give up because the previous plot is boring. It becomes exciting after more than 100 pictures. The world view is also quite big. Personally, I feel that this book is like a combination of apocalypse and fantasy. The writing is also very strong. I have caught up with the latest chapter. The author should update it quickly. Don't abandon the old book when there is a new one.

Overall I can watch it, but the author always likes to leave some riddles in some content, and some of the previous plots are boring and can be skipped. It doesn't matter if the protagonist is a ruthless person and it's a bit to achieve his goals, but whether it's in the previous life or this life, it can be seen that the overall purpose is to sacrifice a small number of people to let the majority of people live. Overall, it's absolutely fine if I can get an 8 out of 10 Tomato rating

After reading some of the poisonous points just commented, one is that one of the heroines has a bad mother status, and the other is that she has a god-sister and a biological sister. The first one is to be honest, I still don't understand what it means. There seems to be no more than two sentences describing the second adoption. I feel that the dear one may be expanded into a volume later. I see that what I like and what I hate now are actually the same kind. There are quite a few female protagonists, and the two female protagonists created in two volumes are also very good. But there are basically no other emotional dramas about the heroine, and many of them are written in one volume. If I were to write about one heroine in one volume, I don't know how many years I would have to wait according to the author's current update frequency. Secondly, in the early stage of development, although the protagonist can handle it, I feel that his tricks are not big enough. However, as his power develops, it becomes more comfortable to watch. There are also various foreshadowings, plots, and emotional descriptions, which are all the reasons why I gave it five stars. Let me just talk about what I hate right now. Most of the female protagonists only have names in the page, and even the supporting characters are no match (the Su sisters in a certain corner). The author spent a lot of effort to write two great female protagonists, but there are too many foreshadowings, which also makes the emotional line very few, and the roles of other female protagonists are almost squeezed out by the supporting roles. Secondly, to develop my power, after completing the Northern dungeon, I thought I was going to play the European dungeon, but when I saw time travel (not that it was bad, foreshadowing, improving strength, etc. Are all very good), I had a shadow. After the end, I stayed somewhere else for a few years. In reality, it was a few years later. My own power, or some guardians I set up (I originally thought you, with the flaw that will die in 3 to 5 years, you will add settings and promote them back) were broken up, and the power was temporarily taken over by others. This is what I can't stand the most (later I thought it would be the cliched big story about regaining power. Who knew that the people named Shen were from the same family for the time being) I feel very aggrieved. I don't know what is the meaning of letting this Shen Meng take power? Also, I really can't keep up with the update speed. I read more than half of the books in almost half a day.

This is a book similar to a villain novel. The protagonist in it is not the kind of villain who does the right things in the name of a villain. The plot inside is fascinating. The protagonist does whatever it takes to make full use of the advantages of rebirth for his family so that the family can be stronger.

I quite like the setting, but it just rambles on and fails to grasp the key points. It feels pretentious and mysterious. Some parts are very watery. I think the insignificant parts can be omitted appropriately to prevent each word from being too painful to read.

It's a little bit toxic, but it's still a good book. The worldview is pretty good, and it has a bit of a girly flavor. The character of the protagonist is also quite good, but the foreshadowing is too long and the entry into the end of the world is a bit slow. . . .

The writing is very detailed, especially the gap between the rich and the poor, the privileges of the powerful, the struggles of the little people before the end of the world, and the despair of the end of the world. The protagonist is more like a thread, connecting all kinds of dark and humble ordinary people.