There is no heroine, the original power system is respected, the protagonist has a positive outlook on life and has no conspiracy theories. The protagonist is never weak. If we don't say invincibility at the beginning, we can only talk about the ceiling of combat power. Try to restore the original plot without breaking any CP!
Plot synopsis:
A time-traveler traveled through Hokage's Konoha Village. The good news was that he was transformed into Shisui's sister. The kaleidoscope was activated at the beginning. His brother's eyes were dug out and he jumped off a cliff. As long as he collects his eyes, he will become invincible. The bad news is: Huh? Younger sister?
Reader comments
Except for some narrations that are too detailed, this is really a Naruto book with a very upright outlook. It is really not good for conspiracy theories to spread. I think a passionate anime like this should promote positive energy instead of depressing people. Really good, supported
A very nice Naruto fanfic, not too different from the original but not boring. Worth giving five stars
As a Chinese, I am not very happy to see the popular Naruto conspiracy theory. As the system said, I really don't understand it. This fanfic satisfies my image of a normal time traveler very well. (The current time-travel literature is really sick. Why is good intention the Holy Mother? What do those people think) Just like: We don't cause trouble and are not afraid of trouble. We are very comfortable with Yun Ying.
Reading long paragraphs will make people lose their desire. The author has carefully revised the extremely long paragraphs. In the early stage, it was always a long series, one page at a time, but there was obvious improvement in the later stage. The article is logically clear (you can use your brain), and the author has a correct attitude (but not interactive). But if you can't play drama, you should just watch the daily life (after all, the ceiling of combat power is like this, it's seconds).
The detail of the content is a bit out of balance, with some places being overly emphasized and some places being glossed over. For example, the conversation with Jiraiya could be simplified completely, and the summary in the main chapter of Naruto in the Land of Snow seems deliberate.
There is also the issue of the title of the book, as it is a Naruto novel. Without a prefix, there will be no readers, and if you don't look carefully, you will think it is a superden fan, so I was deceived. (Glaucoma) So it would be better to add the prefix Naruto.
Also, as a frequent reader of transformation articles, if I hadn't read the introduction carefully, I might have missed it. Labeling the elements will make it easier to find the organization.
I hope to see a dozen seven sprinkles, and my Shisui died miserably.
Come on, author, write a very good work (/^-^(^ ^*)/
I like that feeling very much
Full marks just because the heroine is a gun sister. I hope the author will not castrate her.
Except for some narrations that are too detailed, this is really a Naruto book with a very upright outlook. It is really not good for conspiracy theories to spread. I think a passionate anime like this should promote positive energy instead of depressing people. Really good, supported
A very nice Naruto fanfic, not too different from the original but not boring. Worth giving five stars As a Chinese, I am not very happy to see the popular Naruto conspiracy theory. As the system said, I really don't understand it. This fanfic satisfies my image of a normal time traveler very well. (The current time-travel literature is really sick. Why is good intention the Holy Mother? What do those people think) Just like: We don't cause trouble and are not afraid of trouble. We are very comfortable with Yun Ying. Reading long paragraphs will make people lose their desire. The author has carefully revised the extremely long paragraphs. In the early stage, it was always a long series, one page at a time, but there was obvious improvement in the later stage. The article is logically clear (you can use your brain), and the author has a correct attitude (but not interactive). But if you can't play drama, you should just watch the daily life (after all, the ceiling of combat power is like this, it's seconds). The detail of the content is a bit out of balance, with some places being overly emphasized and some places being glossed over. For example, the conversation with Jiraiya could be simplified completely, and the summary in the main chapter of Naruto in the Land of Snow seems deliberate. There is also the issue of the title of the book, as it is a Naruto novel. Without a prefix, there will be no readers, and if you don't look carefully, you will think it is a superden fan, so I was deceived. (Glaucoma) So it would be better to add the prefix Naruto. Also, as a frequent reader of transformation articles, if I hadn't read the introduction carefully, I might have missed it. Labeling the elements will make it easier to find the organization. I hope to see a dozen seven sprinkles, and my Shisui died miserably. Come on, author, write a very good work (/^-^(^ ^*)/
I like that feeling very much
Full marks just because the heroine is a gun sister. I hope the author will not castrate her.