What Criminal? Isn't That My Good Neighbor?

Hahaha, I really laughed to death. Wife Mochizuki, you really shouldn't use too much of a filter on Qin-chan! Now he has become the puppet and accomplice of Kudo Shinichi, the mastermind behind Conan; Qin Jiang·A diligent worker, a law-abiding and a good citizen, a rich and good person [Hold face] [Hold face] You really shouldn't be too funny. You'd make me laugh like a goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose goose... Speaking of which, Mochizuki and Gin-chan really don't have to fight each other too hard. Gin-chan will specifically ask Mochizuki to avoid bombs and will warn vodka to stay away from Mochizuki (although this is because the protagonist is too sharp and is afraid that his organization will be exposed, but that is Qin-chan, and the warning coming from Gin's mouth is really lustful) Anyway, I like the articles written by my wife. Come on and update. I will give you a small gift. I will try to update every two days [Hold][Hold] (Comparison of the current update speed?)

It's quite interesting. It's the first time I've seen something written from the red side's perspective, and it's actually quite smooth and logical. Many works with similar perspectives will soon turn into the red side and the black side blindly trusting the protagonist, and in the end the red side wins, and the protagonist takes the person he likes to escape from the black side. The red square ending written in the introduction feels like a very novel film! 🍉 The completion of each scene will be accompanied by a discussion in the forum, which is quite interesting, but viewers always question whether the protagonist is the red side or the black side. Maybe as the plot develops, you will start to wonder if the protagonist is not aware of any situation? I have seen other works with forum elements. Detailed analysis, CP party, stock buying (betting on which side will win), future plot speculation, quarrels, etc. Can enrich the plot and increase the level of comedy. But it's pretty good now, I hope it keeps going! [Laughing] Looking forward to the next updates!

The protagonist's image and personality are well developed, and it's the first time I've seen such a red and black protagonist. There is no brainless help for the red side, acting as a tool, and support! The plot is also broad, there are no flaws, it flows smoothly and there are no pitfalls, and it supports investment. That's right, it's too little. It will take some time to raise it.

It's so good to watch. It's the first time I've seen this type of protagonist (maybe it's because I haven't seen much of it). My inner thoughts are great. Updated. 👍👍👍

This novel is so interesting, it made me gnash my teeth with joy while reading it. Mochizuki Ryuu really has a good idea. It is completely contrary to the truth, but he can still be logically consistent. He really has no doubt at all about his taciturn, law-abiding and good neighbor, hahahahahaha, who inadvertently reveals the clues and information the other party needs every time. When I read the introduction, I thought it was Mochizuki Police Department who could log in to the forum and see the comments above, but it turned out to be like this. It's funny:-D Everyone misunderstood Although the second person pops up from time to time in the article, it is still pretty good to ignore it.

It's very interesting. I hope the author will update it more. I feel like it will be even better if I open a movie theater after finishing this book. I really want to see the expression on Conan's face when he thinks Mochizuki is actually helping them but he is actually helping Gin 🤭🤭🤭

Ryu Mochizuki is essentially a person who puts himself at the center and builds emotional connections outwards. However, due to his own experience, the only person who can let him pour his feelings into is Gin. Now the plot keeps moving forward, and Ryu Mochizuki has been standing in the position of the police and unconsciously helping Gin. The contrast between this unconsciousness similar to "disguise" and Ryu Mochizuki's beautification of Gin's character is one of the cool points of this article. But this also caused the intersection between the two to be limited to the development of the plot, rather than reaching deep emotional communication. Whether to keep the plot as it is, to let Mochizuki Ritsu discover the real Gin and make a choice, or to go in other directions, it is difficult to achieve the no cp expected by the author, and it is also difficult to maintain the excitement that supports the development of the plot. Moreover, writing the plot while maintaining the status quo can only lead to a fatal problem, that is, when and which point can be used as the basis for the conclusion, and how will the story develop? How to arrange the story of Red and Black, Mochizuki Ritsu, Gin and Conan? After all, "Ming Ke" is also in a sluggish period. As a fan, the author can only find another way to build a closed loop of the story. This makes every author seek a more perfect ending. This must start from the law of Mochizuki. As the protagonist, he is the center point of this article. His choices, his preferences, and his perspective are the top priority. His past is doomed and his character is complete, but he just can't find a good point to end the plot, because Mochizuki Ritsu has been rationalizing Gin's actions, but as a police department, he will act according to the police's rules. From God's perspective, he is like a person in a gray area. People around him surround him and trust him, but the positions of the people around him are firm, so Mochizuki Ritsu seems to be isolated in the gray area. Gin uses him to obtain intelligence and convenience, and Conan believes that he can protect himself. People around him have beautified Mochizuki Ritsu and think that he is the righteous Mochizuki Police Department, and he himself has been pursuing the "culprit behind the scenes" - Kudo Shinichi. But Mochizuki Ritsu was mixed in, beautifying Gin, and using Conan, which made it difficult for the story to develop. How should I write it down? Will Mochizuki Ryu remain in the gray status quo? The direction of Gin and Conan? And the so-called "Kudo Shinichi"? These pits need to be filled carefully by the author. In short, the article is still very readable, the writing style is good, and the plot unfolded from the perspective of Mochizuki Ryu is well organized. Looking forward to the ending of this article!

This book is quite interesting. The protagonist is a normal person with normal thinking, so he will doubt some of the weird behaviors in the world of Conan. Hahaha, the little policeman in it is also very cute, just like the horse. But if you like the members of the red team very much and are recommended by the red team, I still recommend you to read this book, because the protagonist is really not very friendly to the red team. But if you like gin and want to support the black team, you can read it and take a look at it as a funny article. The protagonist is a bit narcissistic and has a heavy filter for gin.

I feel that the subject matter of this book is relatively novel, because I have never read this type of Conan fanfic, and there seems to be no OOC in it so far. It is more in line with the original setting. The author's writing style is also very good, which makes it comfortable to read. There is nothing weird about it. Regarding the fact that the police department believes that Kudo Shinichi is the mastermind behind the scenes, I feel that this circuit is like the 18th bend in the mountain road, but it is still an eye-catching point. Also, I really like the interaction between Mochizuki Ritsu and Gin. I hope the author can update it more. It would be perfect to update 100 chapters a day 😳😳

It looks good. What the forum said is like what I said. Is this just taking the reader's path and leaving the reader with no way to go? ╭(°A°`)╮ Capitalized confusion