Tomorrow************

The starting point of the story is very novel and not too abrupt from a story perspective. However, it is a bit general in places. Personally, the story develops a bit too fast, and the lack of side branches on the main trunk makes the story a bit thin. As for the characters, the protagonist's image is a bit flat, which is not very good in terms of look and feel. The sparse text about supporting characters always feels like a game NPC, lacking the flesh-and-blood emotions unique to real-life characters. I hope the author can improve it. Of course, Eagle Point also has a vague feeling about the story description of this period, and there is still a lot of room for manipulation, but if it is not grasped well, it is easy to write nondescript, so the author still needs to pay attention. Overall, this book has good potential, and I hope the author can continue writing it well. (The above opinions are purely personal, please do not escalate into group debates or personal attacks)

It's well written, but it needs to be improved upon.

The description of the characters alone is not particularly good, but the subject matter suits my liking and overall it's pretty good.

It looks great, but who is the heroine?