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Male Channel, Hogwarts Fan (Don't Ask Me Why It's Not Harry)
Put the fanfic in there for me. It enriches me directly. No, let everyone enrich me.
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Are There Any CP-Free Articles About HP? No CP! No CP! No CP!
I want to read a book like "Hogwarts: I've already graduated before the system came along". Thank you. I really don't recommend books with cp. It's so annoying. Every time I look for books without cp, there are a bunch of people recommending books with cp. They say they are good and sweet. MD, I just don't want to read cp.
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Let me ask you weakly, is it too much to give yourself a five-star rating? [Laugh]
I finished reading 54 chapters in one go. I don't have much to say. It's good to read. But there is only one thing. Does the male protagonist have any CP? Is it 1v1 or 1v more? I want to continue chasing, but I am afraid that there will be too many 1v, and I am in a dilemma...
All I can say is that this book is really great. I highly recommend it. It is logically consistent and rigorous. It treats us readers as human beings. First of all, the most attractive thing about it is that it has a complete magic system, which is different from the popular Eastern training system, such as Qi training, sword training, etc. I have read the first 40 chapters, and there are also the things I usually see, but the main training is not just Qi training to improve the realm, and one thing I personally like is that you can learn the language of the painted things through painting. I feel that this is a very good point Then let's talk about Goldfinger. The role of Goldfinger in this book will not be particularly obvious, but it will not be completely useless. It will not make the protagonist reach the sky in one step, nor will it be useless. It is written just right, and the control of the protagonist's strength is still very good. Many such fans want to write the protagonist to be more powerful than his peers but not invincible, but the result is very sad. Basically, he can compete with the top existences inexplicably. This book is right in the middle, and it no longer only focuses on skills. Magic, etc., And also often use things like talismans and magic potions. Next, let's talk about the rhythm of the plot. The story of this book is no longer just waiting for the owl to enter Diagon Alley. Enter Hogwarts, but there are nearly thirty or forty chapters of original content. The writing is particularly exciting, and there is also a knife, which can completely immerse people into it. It writes about the constant pressure and the completely helpless feeling, and it is not too superficial. As early as Chapter 8, there is a high-intensity battle. The sudden reversal may be slightly abrupt or even coincidental, but the problem is not big, because I personally feel that the author's explanation is very reasonable. Then let's talk about some other advantages. This author is really active. Maybe it's because of the book that attracts so many people, or maybe it's because of something else. Basically, he replies to every comment, and this author has a really great pattern. He will seriously reply to some questions raised by our readers, and he really corrects the problems if they arise! This author really likes to dig holes, and then read the comments to see if we have some interesting ideas or more reasonable explanations. If it is more reasonable than what he thinks, he will really change it! ! ! Finally, tell me about some settings of this book? First, there is the issue of the heroine. The author originally said that it is not in the outline, but because he prefers to change the plot, it may appear, but most likely it will not. Then after entering Hogwarts, I will establish a good relationship with some people in the original work. I will participate in some things of the original work, but I am not just idle, but I want to recruit people in it. After all, the original work has a plot, and most of them will be good in the later stage. There will be a bit of a knife in the early stage, but that's okay, but it makes people feel distressed when they think about waiting for others to know that the protagonist joined the organization at the age of six. The protagonist has a background, and it's quite big, but he can use it flexibly. It doesn't mean that he just acts as a background and doesn't use it. In this book, the protagonist still makes good use of this resource. Then there is the update frequency. After a quick look, it is about seven or eight o'clock every night, two chapters, each chapter has more than 2,000 words... (Whispering: I haven't seen such a high-quality article for a long time. It turns out that it was updated not long ago, and there are only more than 90 chapters in total. It is not enough to read [cry] [cry] [cry] That's probably all I can think of right now. After reading it, there are more than 1,000 words. Have I ever been so diligent when writing novels...
A very nice HP fanfic. 1. The plot is novel, a story about a mixed-race boy who is both good and evil and battles wits and courage with an evil organization under the Muggle government. It not only emphasizes personal growth, but also emphasizes teamwork, emphasizes background, and emphasizes utilizing everything. Pig's feet aren't perfect, but they're more authentic. 2. The plot is very detailed, and every step the pig takes seems to be calculated, but there is no lack of luck. When he is weak, he relies on strategy and family, and when he is strong, he can show his force. It dismembers the characters in the original work very reasonably and integrates them well into the new setting, which is great. 3. The upgrade line is novel. Integrate the Hogwarts magic system and the Yang family's cultivation system. Go out of your own way, and the settings of many upgrade lines are very attractive. The formula-deduced transformation technique, the special enhanced version of astronomy, the five-element exercises to treat squibs, etc. All in all, I am very satisfied with this book
I finished reading it in one sitting without realizing it, which also shows that this book is attractive enough and excellent enough. The interaction and personality between the characters are also handled well. There is nothing that makes me particularly annoying so far. Of course, there is nothing that is particularly outstanding. I can only say that I will keep writing at this level. I generally will not give up on books. I still hope that the author can continue to work hard and look forward to the follow-up.
A very nice HP fanfic, simply awesome! The plot is novel and the magic system is perfect. What makes me even more delighted is that this novel is written very calmly and has a sense of narration. Layers of foreshadowing and foreshadowing are all plots interspersed in the original work. When the foreshadowing was revealed one by one, it was not surprising at all. And I have a hunch that the previous ones should be foreshadowing, right? Expect bigger storms to come! Hohoho[laugh][laugh][laugh]
It's quite interesting, but I personally think it would be better if it was a growth stream. I'm afraid that it will suddenly become powerful inexplicably and it will be out of touch with the background of the novel. Of course I don't see it now. Secondly, I have read nearly 20 Harry fan novels in Tomato novels. Personally, I think that while respecting Harry's original work, there is no need to always write a lot of the original work in the fan novels. This is a bit annoying and uninteresting. However, this novel is well written and does not have any intellectual retardation.
This book is one of the more outstanding among the many HP fanfics I have read. Some of the settings in it can be said to be particularly novel, and the original plot is also refreshing. It does not simply use the original work as the main line. There are many various settings but they are reasonable. Many things are based on imagination and reality. It can be seen that the author has consulted a lot of information and spent a lot of thought. There are many advantages, so I will not list them one by one. It can be said that it is indeed a good book.
I have read Chapter 212 so far, and there is no cp. The protagonist is very powerful, and the process is also exciting. The friends I made in school are also improving step by step. Everyone is himself, he is not strong alone, he leads everyone to become strong together. It is a wonderful story. It's better to fatten it up before looking at it, otherwise it will break, which will be very uncomfortable.
It feels good, but the plug-in is not obvious. The abuse is obvious, I hope it won't happen ~ all sentient beings are sinful and all living beings suffer.
The writing is super good, especially the perfect magic system. Nothing is out of the ordinary.
I really like it, so stylish Love it, love it
I wonder if Voldemort succeeds, can he implement such a policy: to ensure the special status of wizards, every wizard is a privileged class, and wizards also have their own class within them, both by blood and strength. But be sure to ensure that every wizard has privileges so that no wizard will defect to the Muggle side, because the Muggle side has no help for wizards. There is no need to worry about Muggle resistance, because Muggles can also produce wizards, and they can also achieve class promotion through this. And there is no need to worry about Muggles uniting to resist. There is nothing that magic cannot solve. Nuclear bombs and the like are just weapons, not Muggle abilities. Weapons are unconscious and can be seized.
It's really worth watching if you're a nurturing person. It's a step-by-step guide, but it's a bit short. The author needs to update soon.
There are no shortcomings at the moment, come on
It's wonderful, it's beautiful, it's amazing
Come on, it's really beautiful
The first forty chapters can be read quickly and belong to the background.
The subject matter is very novel, and it's very novel even if you don't follow Harry, but the painting style is a bit dark.
I want to follow it, but I want to ask is this a harem story? If it were, I wouldn't want to watch it. But so far, it seems acceptable. This book combines the "magic" of the West and the East very cleverly. There are even talismans. But it can be said to be something from the East. So I think this book is still acceptable. The premise is that it is not a harem story. Thank you. You can have a heroine, but you must not have a harem. Thank you. Thank you, boss. I really don't want a harem. I really want to pursue it.
Not bad, just a little missing
Beautiful, highly recommended!
I just feel so insecure, anyone could be a spy
What a great book! Why is the rating so low?
It's very interesting to watch. It doesn't follow the original plot. Everything is innovative. The combination of Eastern and Western magic is very good.
It's very good. The original author strongly recommends not to read it. If you come to see Harry Potter, please leave. This is just a fanfic. The fanfic is originally written by a writer who likes the work. For derivative works made from this work, please remember that it is a derivative work. Do not bring the content and settings of the original work into the fanfic. Thank you.
Beautiful and super exciting
It took me a long time to catch up on the latest chapter, and now I'm just waiting for the author to finish filling in the holes on the moon [laughing]
I read it in one night. It was the first HP novel that made me stay up all night to read it.
It's so cool, I'm so excited I like it so much, it's really, really beautiful, super beautiful. It makes me happy