After Being Imprisoned by My Yandere Older Sister

In my previous life, I was betrayed by my insufficient literary skills and confusing plot arrangements. After resurrecting my life, I changed all the plots, improved my abilities, and moved towards the real story in my heart again. Thank you to all my friends who have clicked on my books. On days when I am on hiatus, I will occasionally open the Writer Backstage, and I feel particularly touched when I see a few people adding my books to their bookshelf. There are always people who are willing to wait for me, which is the motivation for me to change this book again, including everyone who leaves me comments, comments, ratings, and everyone who leaves messages on my news. I am reading your comments, and every word you say gives me a lot of strength. There were many comments before that I didn't understand, which made me realize that there are big problems with my plot arrangement and text expression. Thank you for your willingness to leave me comments. Now all the plots of this book have been greatly revised, and the characters will be more complete than before. If there is anything you don't understand or need me to improve, you can leave a message below my author's comments and this comment Thanks again everyone! ღ(✞╹◡╹✞)ற

It can be seen that the author paid great attention to the book and used the "reincarnation" method to write the text. There are many interludes and dreams in the middle, but it also makes the article look messy. In the beginning, the yandere is actually shown in captivity well, but later on it seems insufficient. More descriptions of the yandere's abnormal psychological activities can be made (for example, the female protagonist is cold on the surface, but in fact she is crazy and wants the male protagonist to fall in love with her forever. She seems to promise the male protagonist equality and love, but actually wants to completely possess him. She can compromise in action, but she is always paranoid in her heart.) When I saw the title, many people went for the theme of yandere, but the theme of yandere seems to be weakened a lot in the later part. I hope the author can work hard!

The writing is very good, especially this style of writing. When reading other novels like this Tomato, I can't tell you, it always feels awkward, but the language of this book is very comfortable to read. The author must have put a lot of thought into it. The writing is very good. Come on 👍👍

After watching a few episodes, I realized why no one watched it

The work is really good, very appetizing, I love reading it😁

It's so perverted, but it's very enjoyable, and the characters are crazy. It's worth watching.

It's so shameless. It's finally not the kind of mindless love that sucks.

Looks good but please don't give up

Is this the end? 12345

Maybe I'm a pervert, but it's nice to see so much