HP: the White Devil of Slytherin

The writing is very good. I really like this setting. Gloria truly shows from all aspects that she is the heir of Slytherin who has received pure-blood education for more than ten years. It's super awesome👍🏻

It's very interesting. I like the plot of the little dragon being pampered. It's all about Draco. Why must he experience failure and darkness? Of course he has to support such a beautiful little prince.

This is my favorite HP fanfic so far First of all, the heroine is very strong. This is a novel written entirely around the heroine. Even though Draco is a popular character, Draco has not changed the protagonist's center. It can be seen that the heroine's fighting strength, family background, personality and behavior have been carefully designed. She is a Slytherin in the true sense, a complete, independent and charming character. Next is the world view. I originally thought that the surname Slytherin was just created for the sake of writing, but I didn't expect it to be expanded into a complete world view, and it is not obtrusive. It even optimized the contradictions such as "Wizards and Muggles" that are in the original work but many people have not paid attention to. It can be seen that the author has done in-depth research on the original work. Then there is the plot. Almost all the plot regrets of the original work have been perfectly made up for in this book, and they are not inconsistent. Even the butterfly effect caused by changing the original work is very natural, with almost no abruptness and will not make people feel weird. The author is definitely very familiar with the original work. I want to focus on the emotional line. This fanfic will not change Draco's character and behavior without authorization. It is not OOC at all. He has naturally changed due to the appearance of the heroine in the text, but his character background has not changed at all. It is very, very good. The lonely Xiaolong repairing the disappearing cabinet alone makes people hope that a heroine will really appear to love him. , The emotional line is also very interesting. God knows how much I like the setting of love at first sight. The arrogant Draco is always the favorite of the heroine. The ambiguous period in the early stage is simply invincible [Adoration]. In the later stage, because of the plot, the emotional drama is a bit less (this is my only dissatisfaction hhh). I really like it when Astronomy Tower expresses his sincerity and makes up after quarrels many times. Kech's emotional line is also very good. Hermione is good at everything but has a bad eye for men. The two men she likes are Lockhart and Ron. Needless to say, Lockhart is a liar professor. In domestic entertainment, he is an old man whose crazy character design is in ruins. Ron is very good but he is not suitable for Hermione. My understanding has always been Most of them are friends, and Krum is particularly good. Although he was born in pure blood and studied at Durmstrang, which only accepts pure blood, and is surrounded by the concept of pure blood supremacy, he did not discriminate against Hermione who was born as a Muggle. He could see Hermione's shining advantages and be attracted by them even after they had not known each other for a long time. Only such a man is worthy of Hermione. Finally, every character has no OOC, and many of the characterizations are deviated from the impression given to me by the movie (I watched the movie first when I was a child, so there are many impressions caused by the actors' interpretations, which are somewhat different from the original work). Apart from the heroine and Draco, my favorite is Harry. Many of his habits are very cute and very cute. It is in line with the characteristics of Gryffindor. What I remember most is that he loves to pull his hair. Hahaha, it directly broke my early impression of Harry in the movie. It can be seen that the author is very careful in writing this book. He has a deep research on the original work, and the writing is very smooth and will not make people look too dramatic. 🍅 There are not many authors who can do this.

This setting is very good. The heroine has her own ideas. She doesn't just agree with the savior or Malfoy. I like such an independent and sober heroine.

It's really beautifully written! There are no disadvantages except a little less!

This is the first time I've seen an amazing Mary Sue fanfic! The setting of the heroine is indeed very Mary Sue. The special identity of the descendant of Slytherin, the three snakes, the special space, multiple foreign languages, the powerful spell ability that can rival the teacher in the second grade, and the new world space belonging to wizards are all outrageous. However, the plot of the heroine and Draco is well integrated with the original text. It does not completely deviate from the original work, nor is it a 1:1 retelling of the original content that is too confusing to watch. Although the scene is inevitable, it still does not take too much of the adventure scenes that the trio, especially Harry, deserves, but opens up some new stories that run on the same track as the original work. It can be said that it is similar to increasing the height of vision and the amount of information provided to Harry (meaning very little, little Harry still likes to be kept in the dark) and directly supporting Dumbledore's strong backing. Slytherin's tough character and Mary Sue's magical ability have saved many of the regrets of the original work. It is equivalent to going through the original work again from the second grade. The heroine's character is neither too friendly nor too mean. The transformation of the Malfoy family finally matches the pursuit of glory and ambition of Slytherin House, a model of Slytherin.

I really like this setting. The descriptions of the female protagonist and the male protagonist are very full. The author's literary talent is very good. I hope you will continue to work hard [top post] It's so well written, why isn't it popular [punch out][punch out][punch out]

I have read many HP Draco fanfics, and this one is the most logical and well-written. It is the only one I have finished reading. The story has a beginning and an end, the relationship between the heroine and Draco is sweet and not boring, the main plot is logical and not too abrupt, and everyone who would have died in the original movie survived. Draco doesn't have OOC, but he's still the same noble and easy-going young man. This is really good. Many HP articles feel like they are trying to tame the young master, with a Mudblood getting angry at Draco and sulking into submission. In this article, the heroine will explain to Draco the origin of the mudblood. Draco is just a spoiled young master. He has a brain and can think. He is not a brainless person who just stops saying this word because the heroine in the book is angry. Isn't this really an obedience test? Where do you put the Malfoy noble bloodline? Draco and the heroine respect each other and understand each other, and they will express their emotional doubts clearly, which is really comfortable to watch. I really recommend it as a must-read. If you don't believe me, you can read the reviews of other fans on my homepage. They are all basically read until you can't stand it anymore, so you quit and comment.

Oh oh oh oh, I haven't seen such a good HP article for a long time. From my own review, the plot and characters are not broken. The heroine's character is the most satisfactory to me. She is the heir of Slytherin and her father is Regulus. Would the author please reveal a little bit about whether Nagini Credence, Ariana Aberforth, Grindelwald, Newt and other characters will appear? If I were to write about Credence and Ariana, I feel like it would be easy to collapse later on, so the one I'm looking forward to the most is Nagini. It feels like I haven't read it for a long time, and now that it's finished, I can only say that I read it in one go. Suddenly, I remembered my 1,500-word book introduction.

I highly recommend this episode. The heroine's surname is Slytherin. She is a great heroine. She is also very strong. She fell in love with Xiaolong. She really likes it. The writing is also very good. The heroine did not reveal her real name at first because of the protection magic. However, she was very strong and enrolled in the second grade. She let Harry and Ron be her carriages to school until she finally killed Fu. Old Demon is particularly exciting. I kept pushing for updates before it was finished. Now that it is suddenly finished, I feel a little uncomfortable. The sequels are also very interesting. The author has a great imagination, but I have never been able to clarify the idea of ​​the time turner (it has nothing to do with the author, but I feel that there is some logic that I can't understand)

I just love this book and love to read it. This is one of the first few books I read on Tomato, and it can be said to be one of my favorites. Later, I kept following the update and always wanted to give it a try before watching it, but I still couldn't help it [face covering] Some of the flaws in the original work were made up for in this book. The heroine finally established a world with only wizards. The love between the heroine and Xiaolong is very sweet, and they spent the darkest moments hand in hand. The heroine has an online IQ and is powerful. She cultivated her own power bit by bit, allowing people to watch her grow step by step. The writing is very good and the description is very detailed. I like it very much [Adoration] I like it so much that I started to play it four times [laughing]

I really like this book, it is very comfortable to read, the heroine is very smart, and the emotional line is light and smooth (but this book has just been released, so I will give the rating first, and look forward to it)

The plot is compact. The heroine has the arrogance of an heir to a reclusive family but also has a peaceful heart. She is arrogant but not rude, and maintains the elegance of an heir. Moreover, the interaction between the male and female protagonists is really awesome.

Fits all my fantasies about a strong Slytherin woman. In line with the original work, the details are exquisite, giving people a pure and beautiful feeling. The emotions are also very sincere, inherited and developed on the basis of the original work. Samsung's purpose is to control points with the big team and prevent them from being removed from the shelves.

This book is really great. It makes up for a lot of regrets. I really like it so much. I am a deep fan of Harry Potter. When I was reading books and movies, I felt that many places were so pitiful. Then this one was completely completed on the basis of that one. There are so many branches. It really satisfies all kinds of imagination. It feels like they can stay well in their own place, live well, and shine. [Crying] [Crying] To be honest, when I saw this, I was super moved, I wanted to cry, and I was super touched. Big, super great

[This review contains spoilers, please do not read if you mind] The writing is very, very good, and it completes and completes all the regrets in the original work! The heroine is strong and powerful + has brains, and there is no aggrieved plot. The general content is still similar to the original work. However, with the intervention of the heroine, many things have changed. In fact, I don't think there are many emotional lines, but I can accept it~ Spoilers: Dumbledore is not dead! Sri Lanka is not dead! The twins are both here! Lupine Tonks is not dead! Hermione and Krum are together! Ron and Lavender are together! Cedric is not dead, and he and Qiu are still together! (Actually, there are quite a few decent people who survived. In short, it's complete. The manor where the heroine's family lives does not belong to the world of wizards and Muggles. The heroine wants to build a new world, a world only for wizards and no longer restricted by Muggles. And it was indeed done. There is no knife in the whole text, just glass slag, really a little bit. I also like the extra, which makes up for the regret! Long live the author and thank you for your creation! ! !

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking. Say important things three times! ! ! The first time I read a novel from beginning to end, I didn't want to complain, I just wanted to continue. The heroine's preference for Xiaolong is really not too good, and Xiaolong also responds well to the heroine. Some plot changes are also very reasonable, especially the section about the heroine's father, which shows that the heroine is just a child who grew up without a father, giving the heroine a more reasonable feeling. It was a good foreshadowing for the later part with Sirius. My favorite is the part where Draco reveals his identity. Draco's very formal confession and the heroine's formal response really complement each other. I can only say that I really like it. I really don't love it too much. Two people like each other and both have appropriate responses. It's really beautiful. You are so brave to write it, I will follow it and read it. I don't ask for more updates, I just ask for more updates every day.

This book is so to my liking. The heroine is strong and independent, and the interaction with Draco is also very sweet. What I like most is that their relationship was confirmed so quickly. They got together in the first year. Big support for the author! ! [Love]

Already brushed twice! Looks good! The author's writing style is really good. Although it is a Mary Sue novel, it is not conventional and does not just rely on the original plot and lines. It has its own plot perspective. It is a fanfic, but it is full of innovation. The new world and many settings it builds are also great. It is one of the few HP fanfics that I have read that is good-looking, and it is also one of the few HP fanfics that I have saved and want to read.

A great HP fanfic, with a sweet tone and no abuse throughout. The heroine is a Slytherin, and her character basically meets the characteristics of a Slytherin. Even if she befriends Harry's three-person team, interests come first. On the surface, they do not discriminate against Muggles, but actually exclude Muggles from the door of the new world. All wizards are supreme, and the pure blood, glory, interests, and rights of Slytherin are vividly expressed without being annoying! Of course, the interaction with Draco is also very sweet. It is recommended that those who love dragons can eat it with confidence. At the same time, many disagreements have been settled. The key point is that Hermione is not with Ron, but with Krum, which is great (๑•̀ㅂ•́)و✧. Personally, I feel that Ron is not worthy of Hermione!

As far as the storyline is concerned, the author's writing is very good, giving people an immersive reading experience. The fascinating plot makes me look forward to the update most every day. In terms of character setting, every character in the book has distinct characteristics. In the author's writing, I feel that every character is very real. As a digression, because this book is still being serialized, while waiting for the update, I have read the previous chapters for the third time. I really like this book and it deserves five stars!

As a fan of the original work for more than 20 years, and having read dozens of HP fanfics, I can responsibly say that this book makes up for all the confusion in the original work, such as Cedric, Sirius, Lupine and Tonks, as well as Moody and Dumbledore, and even Hedwig and Dobby have happy endings; at the same time, the author's logic and foreshadowing are also completely closed-loop; in the text, There are many small details in the original work, and only fans who read the original work carefully will find out, because some authors in other fan fiction mostly only follow the plot of the movie to describe the main plot, and some have never read the original work at all (the original work party is really devastated by such crude assumptions!). Only the author has followed the plot of the original work, which is considered a little easter egg for the original work party! I forgot to mention it just now. This book also makes up for the regrets of some minor supporting characters, such as Lavender Brown. In the original work, Lavender Brown not only suffered emotional betrayal from Ron. (Although I am a fan of the original work, I have to say that Ron was not emotionally clear and let down a girl's sincere feelings. Pretty scumbag), and was bitten by a werewolf during the final battle. Although Rowling did not explicitly write the ending of Lavender Brown in the original book, there is a high probability that she will die, and a small probability that she will survive and become a female werewolf. Referring to the discrimination and injustice suffered by Lupine in the original work, I think even if Lavender Brown De survived, but life will be very difficult in the future; so in this book, Ron finally failed to live up to Lavender Brown, and Hermione finally chose Viktor Krum. In fact, the emotional scene between Hermione and Viktor Krum in the original book was also a pity, and Hermione in the original book was not beautiful. , Even a little ordinary, not as beautiful as the actors in the movie. As a Quidditch world star at the time, Viktor Krum was a bit similar to the top class now. He fell in love with Hermione at first sight among millions of people, and bravely and firmly chose Hermione. In this aspect, he was much better than the confused Ron.

It's very good-looking. She belongs to the category of strong women who dominate the whole world. There are many emotional scenes with Draco in the early stage, but the writing is good. The plot is not delayed and has echoes. Especially the heroine's family background. I am very satisfied with it. And the heroine has many highlight moments. There are fewer emotional scenes with Draco in the later period. However, she has been serious about her career. This is the kind of drama I like to watch. The Queen's vassal. The happiest thing is that Hermione and Krum are together. This makes up for one of my regrets in the original work. Oh, by the way, speaking of regrets, there are no regrets left in the plot of this book. Everything is perfect.

Nice! Although sometimes it feels like the heroine's behavior is constrained by the original plot and is a bit unsatisfactory? But, overall, it looks good! Regarding the process and ending, basically all the parts of the original work that had regrets or thorns were rewritten, although it is inevitable. For example, I think Sirius is more charming after he is dead, but he is somewhat annoying when he is alive. [Smile] He really deserves to be a Gryffindor. The interaction between the heroine and the young master is very sweet! As a result, I couldn't bear to watch the young master in another world line being abused [I almost cried] even though I knew that was his real story line (it was even more uncomfortable [crying]) How bad can a person who uses unicorn hair as the core of his staff be! ! ! The proud little peacock really should be pampered and pampered! ! ! !

It's a great fanfic, there are some minor flaws, but they can be ignored because of the strong logic. Password, this is a gb-oriented HP fanfic, and the heroine CP is still Draco. You guys are a little corrupt. In the comments, ky said Deha's meaning is really unclear. Can you distinguish the occasion and speak [face covering] [like]

Super pretty! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Real! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! To be honest, this is the second HP fanfic I have read on Tomato (the first one was "I Became the Gang Darling at Hogwarts", I only read HP). I consider myself a very slow and serious reader. This book is really meaningful and there are basically no jokes. The author is trying his best to tell us a story about Gloria in his writing style. Reading reminder: ①The heroine is not a virgin, she is noble, elegant and good-tempered, but she is not too tolerant to those who make mistakes. She is super strong and does not need to rely on anyone. She is very sweet with Draco. ②The first part of the article mainly talks about the heroine getting to know Draco and then revealing her identity, which is very interesting; the middle part will not be that exciting (this is my personal feeling, after all, the middle part is mainly for the plot, the heroine is still so strong, and the various difficulties Harry encounters in the original book are trivial to her), but it is still very interesting, I recommend not to jump; the latter part is very exciting. Extras are also treasure short stories My full name is "Christine of Kedelha" (tomato nicknames are subject to restrictions). The reviews I post are all good books that I have read carefully. I have nothing to do with each author. I just express my true feelings after reading them. I hope you can trust me when you see my comments in other HP fanfics. Tips: Video number, Old Ford, Little Sweet Potato, Hurry up and read the same name I forgot a very important point, that is, the author has rewritten all the conjectures in the original work in this book, including Sirius, Lupin and Tonks, Fred, Sijiao, School Deng... Including various CPs or others (including Sethi, Kech, Sirius and his brother, Neville's parents, and even GGAD!) I don't know if this is considered a spoiler.

Ahhhh, it's so well written! ! ! Except that the names of the children in the extra episode are too hard to remember, so I chose not to watch it. The heroine is really too powerful but all her actions make people feel like they should be like that! The writing of this book is super logical and in line with the original work. All the changed plots make people feel that the changes are very good. It can even be said to be a cool book, but it is very logical and not as cool as Invincible without brains. The heroine is really a Slytherin through and through. At first, I thought it was a bit inappropriate to have a good relationship with Gryffindor Potter and Hermione Ron. But when the heroine explained it to Draco later, the thought that came to my mind was that she really deserves to be a Slytherin [face covering] [face covering] [face covering] All in all, it's super well written!

A very nice book! To be honest, after reading so many HP books, I think this one is the best! The heroine is the only direct descendant of the Slytherin family. She went to Hogwarts and was successfully sorted into Slytherin House in the second grade. At the end of the semester, she helped Harry defeat Tom Riddle and revealed her Slytherin identity. Later, the romance with Xiaolong was so sweet! ! ! The heroine's family has a rich heritage and is a major shareholder in many famous places. There have been many powerful wizards in the family, and one person even invented things like soul monsters, which are pretty cool!

I have watched part of it so far, and I feel that the author is more based on the movie version, which is okay. Although I am a fan of the original work and don't like the movie version to blindly change the plot, but I still want to see the follow-up development. The heroine is quite charming. Uh-huh, looking at it so far, I don't see why the two of them started to get clingy. It feels like they fell in love for the sake of the romantic atmosphere. It feels like they were forced to do something by the hand of God.

I have read nearly two hundred chapters, and the writing is not childish. The plot so far is very interesting, and I don't feel depressed. It is very comfortable to watch. Even the heroine's parents, who I felt sorry for at the beginning, are now together like people in the painting. I have no regrets at all, and I don't feel sad. Also, the author is very obedient. Readers beg the author to let Hermione and Krum be together, and the author is satisfied. I really love this [laughs]