Original Journey

It's okay, but the language and descriptions are still not good enough. There is a book called "Primitive War Chronicles" which is the originator of this type of writing. Why is it that the more you look at it, the more childish it becomes?

It's good that there's no plot of rubbing a mecha by hand in the primitive era. It's slow-paced, in line with the characters, self-justifying, and not too blunt. It's just that fetching water is not in line with the setting of primitive people in this book. Because this primitive society can cultivate, the brain must be fully developed, and it is impossible to really not be able to get water. Although you may not be able to dig a well, you can definitely get some water with a bucket tied with a rope. Also, why are ferocious beasts so much weaker than savage beasts? Overall, it's very good. I watched it all from the afternoon to the evening. It attracts me even more than the game.

The writing is very good, one of the few excellent works, not much different from the original war record. I give it five stars. I hope the author can keep writing and give me great encouragement.

It is a novel idea, but when I express it, it seems a bit unfamiliar, and I feel like I have just passed it by. I don't know if it is the first time for the author to write a book. I hope the author will continue to work hard. This book is good. Please improve your writing skills as soon as possible! Come on✊[Like][Like]

This is a fantasy novel with an original title. The narrative is straightforward, with almost no plots and plots, just various adventures, experiences and promotions. But it still seemed relatively happy, because the pig's feet had not been targeted by any plot, so the spectators were not in a low mood. It's just a little bland.

The plot is very attractive, I watched it all in one sitting

It's very good and worth reading, but the author is great. There are more than 100 chapters. The protagonist is still level one. The pace is slow. The plot is pushed forward a little. The description of the outside world is very exciting. I'm a bit looking forward to it. For someone like me who likes to give up quickly but can't bear to leave, [laughs and cries]

The early progress is a bit slow. In addition to totems and fox tribes, the general background vaguely reveals a mythical and fantasy world. I hope to stick to it and build the development of Pig's Foot and the macro world line in the book step by step. Come on, it is a good book!

The story is quite novel, and I really like it except that it has a female protagonist who talks about love. I don't like to see this kind of romance.

This book is really good, with delicate writing style, skillful writing skills, and ingenious conception. There is no clumsiness like a second-rate writer. It is so smooth. It is rare to see a good book after reading for more than ten years. I look forward to the update!

I blame myself for being deceived by the title of the book. I thought it was a historical primitive society, but I didn't expect it to be fantasy. The overall story structure of this book is still very good, and the writing style is also very good. The plot arrangement does not have any useless branches or empty holes. The feeling of reading the book is relaxed and relaxed, without watery plot. It's a very good book, I personally think it would be a 9.

Full marks, but the updates are too slow. There are only three chapters and more than 8,000 words in one day, which is enough for anyone to read. Come on, why should we have 15,000 words in one day? Five and ten chapters will be updated in one day [laughter]

It's so beautiful. I haven't seen enough of it. Why don't you have it?

Full of details and fascinating to look at

The content is lively and interesting. Luo Ji was very rigorous in his thinking.

Yes, the previous part draws on the original Rise, but with some changes. The later story is good and the connection is average! The writing is okay and the storyline is great! Come on

I have always liked tribal-themed articles, they are very interesting and I look forward to more exciting ones in the future.

The contrast between the growth of the little characters and the times coupled with the fantasy color makes it refreshing to read.

So detailed! Highly recommended! Remember to leave a message after reading this! [Smile]

The introduction of the time-travel method and the early background description are a bit bad, but the subsequent growth links are progressing steadily, and technological progress is reasonable in this context. Not too abrupt. The story is pretty good. The rhythm is great.

It's very beautiful. The rating is much better than the average 9.0. The subject matter is still relatively new.

It is one of the best books about witches and totem warriors.

True world view, true humanity, not invincible, not arrogant

Personally, I think it suits my taste, and I like this type of novel.

It looks good, but it's hard to chase.

A very good book. Ancient science fiction

It looks great. I like it very much. This book is also quite good with this theme.

This book is good and worth reading. The plot is exciting

A very good book with exciting content!

Five stars, five stars, please update! ! ! I really can't get enough of this old bookworm. It's a rare encounter.