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It's best to have less sex, more adventure and excitement, and don't have a harem.

I just like this kind of sexy feeling

In the early stages of reading this book, it was really boring. I felt that there were a lot of poisonous points. The male and female protagonists always made mistakes at some junctures. I couldn't help but complain every time. But after the 60th chapter, it got much better. It finally looked like it was wise to protect itself in the apocalypse, and the growth of the characters was also written. Thanks to the author, he wrote a subject that I like to read. Otherwise, I really wouldn't be able to bear it now. Overall, I highly recommend it. The writing has its own set of logic. Come on, the author. I won't give you any suggestions. It only looks good if you write it according to your own ideas.

The protagonist grows up very quickly. He occasionally gets emotional but that's not a big problem. There are just too many fighting scenes. It feels like the protagonist is trying too hard. He is either fighting or on the way to fight. I hope the author can take a look at it. I also want to ask if it will be a single female lead and when will I find the monitor🥲.

I have read two hundred and twenty chapters so far. My feeling at this stage is that it advances too fast and there is not enough preparation. However, the advantage is that the previous writing is quite gripping, so I have read so many of them. I hope we can play more steadily in the future.

It was an unexpected surprise that I unexpectedly found something good in Tomato. Although the plot structure is still a bit immature, the character creation has begun to take shape. After reading dozens of chapters, the heroine's character description is better than many similar novels. But nowadays, novels with plots that have a lot of ups and downs, twists and turns, and a world view that gradually expands are still popular. In comparison, the traditional writing style seems to be less popular.

If you want to open a harem, engage in more sex, and add more funny plots to your daily routine.

The author can refer to Sui San Piaofeng's "Taking on the Star" to write. Secrets are compared with talents, spiritual skills are compared with exercises, spiritual energy is compared with star energy, spiritual objects and spiritual weapons are compared with strange treasures and turbid treasures, and all races in the universe are compared with all races in the world bridge. There is little writing about cultivation but not immortality. It took me seven years to write "Treading the Stars" and I became a great author in Zongheng and a member of the Writers Association. You can be the author too!

The writing is okay, but not many people read it and there are almost no comments. I read it too early. When I saw the update today, it was still three days ago. I originally wanted to relax and have fun while reading the novel, but the author kept handing me the knife, so I suggested writing something more enjoyable.

It looks good, but the score is indeed low. Good luck to the author. Come on, author, I'll send you a message for love when I have time.

I haven't seen a book like this for a long time. I feel good about it. Although I think there are some minor problems, it's nothing serious.

Pretty good, so are you still in the early stages?

I feel like the name drags down the author's book.

Found out too early, so little

So short, not bad

The author is not a eunuch

Won't let you down

Come on, the author is great

It's unexpectedly good-looking. If it's not good-looking, come and kill me.

Nice! How long will it take for Yao Wei?

The beginning is okay, but the protagonist's behavior is a bit off-putting at the beginning, and it is too stereotyped. It could be more cowardly, and the growth would be more attractive to readers.

It looks good, just make the protagonist more awesome. By the way, Luffy is so handsome [take a closer look]

It's very interesting and I highly recommend it, but there's a bit too much fighting and it feels like it never stops, but overall it's still very much to my taste, and I'm looking forward to the following chapters.

It's not a cool novel, and a lot of people know how to use it, but the plot is pretty good and worth watching.

It's beautiful. It feels like going back to the old days to watch fantasy.

It's so good that I finished reading it in one sitting. I couldn't get enough of it! ! !

It's pretty good, the plot direction is pretty good, and the characters are pretty good too. Just don't let the foreshadowing go bad. Come on.

Overall good

It's pretty good, but it's a pity it's not popular.