Origin: Creation of the Mythical World

I feel like the writing is pretty good. I have read a book of the same type called "I Created a Monster Sequence", which is quite popular on Tomato. How did it end? Woo woo XX

Okay, don't mess up. The characterization of the protagonist after The Witch is so bad, two stars are too much. The protagonist is like a clown, being played with by manufactured things [awkward laughter]

It feels pretty good. The main character is not the Virgin, and unlike some behind-the-scenes stories where there are a lot of scenes, but after dozens of chapters, no one is fine. How could the appearance of the extraordinary be without bloodshed?

It accurately but cruelly depicts the despairing gap between extraordinary and ordinary people. The gods are aloof and indifferent to all living beings. The cute black cat Yuan Qiu Qiu and the mean raven Maxson lost their lives due to the medicine. Wang Shanren, who is rational but subconsciously protects his wife, Fu Longye, who has a rough life but is kind-hearted, and national hero Song Xiaoqing, who protects his family and country, strictly abides by the rules, has great merits but loses his loved ones, and only envy mandarin ducks but not immortals! The characters are well-drawn, the characters are described in detail, and the flaws are not hidden.

The subject matter written by the author is novel and the characters are depicted in detail very well [Like][Like][Like]

At the end of this book, if the world is destroyed by these messy things, it will have a sense of déjà vu like Hidetaka Miyazaki's game. If the author has played Miyazaki's game, he can write in the style of Bloodborne, Dark Souls, and Elden Hair Ring.

It's very good. It's the kind of novel I had in mind. Please follow it.

I always feel that Niutou is the male protagonist. He is the one who prepares and gives away girls. Two of them are given away, but the male protagonist still has nothing and is still running around.

Speaking from my own conscience, the subject matter of this novel is not better than those bad novels on the street?

It's pretty good, come on

Very beautiful. Come on!

Very good, foreshadowing, reappearance. That's what I like. Withdrew.

It's okay, but I feel like these people all have very bad character. I recommend the author to read "I am God!" ", Author: Blowing Wind in History (it seems to be this name)

Why is the score so low? It's well written.

Okay, for now, it's pretty ok, uh, it looks a bit like it borrowed the I Created the Monster sequence from Next Door, but it's not a bad book either.

It's good to watch, but there are too many characters that the author can't manage.

I like it so much. It perfectly matches my point of view as a long-time Tomato reader who has been reading it for more than 5 years. I just want it to be faster! 😁

Well written and to my liking

Not bad, not bad, okay I think it's okay

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Pretty good, just a bit short [smile]

It is unacceptable for children to be harmed, especially kind children

There are already 56 maps, why are you still hanging around in the same city? When will the map be expanded?

I don't know if you can give me the specific number and serial name.

I think it's okay, but after the first volume has been updated, where is he in the second volume?

Emmmmmmmmm, it was okay at first, but then I just let myself go, outrageous, they opened the door to outrageous [laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly][laughing evilly]

I think it's very good and to my liking.

It's okay, keep a wait-and-see attitude, and wait until there are more chapters to see if it's okay, then I'll give it a five-star rating. Well, as far as I can see, these are still okay. Although there are one or two small flaws, it does not affect

It looks good, I hope it doesn't end badly [eating melon]

It's okay, free ones can have this quality. Hope it doesn't collapse later.