
The Life of a Villainous Nobleman That Backfires
事与愿违的恶役贵族人生
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- Eastern Fantasy
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- European Fantasy
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Explore more →Empire, Magic, Knight, Fighting Spirit, Holy See, Warcraft, Elf
Novels such as "Devil's Law" and "Rise of the Tree Shepherd"
Western Fantasy, Otherworld, Sword and Sorcery
Those who are more normal and have a grander world view are just like that.
I've Been Using It for 3 Years and Recently I Really Can't Read Anymore.
I want to read a book that is eye-catching! ! ! ! Let me get rid of the book shortage! Dear book friends
Recently, I have become obsessed with Western fantasy magic. Please get your books😁😁😁
Western Fantasy, with Empires, Elves, Dragons, Knights, and Magic
Sister, My Brother Owes You This Sword. in My Heart: (This Should Be...
A Novel About a Newborn Sister Who Grows up and Becomes Stronger Together
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Isn't Sword and Sorcery Every Man's Dream? Get All the Western Fantasy in the Press Box
#True Nobility, the Nobility Has a Clear Hierarchy
I want to read a book similar to "After Controlling My Players to Make Money, My Skill Points Are Full". It's not like an illegitimate child or illegitimate daughter can be on the stage. There must be a clear hierarchy.
Western Fantasy! Western Fantasy~western Fantasy! the Heroine Is Super Awesome!
I want to read a book like "After becoming a vampire cub, she was forced to carry a knife and go into battle". It doesn't matter if you have CP or not! Thank you everyone❤ (ɔˆз(ˆ⌣ˆc)
I Want to Read Western Fantasy. Can I Ask for Some High-Quality Books?
I'm a bit tired of watching the cult of immortality. I'm not saying it's bad. I want to try it for a change. I haven't seen anything about Western fantasy. Do you guys have any high-quality recommendations?
Lolita, Don't Let Men Wear Lolita! ! ! Preferably Fantasy, Thank You.
A Video with Multiple Female Protagonists but Not Too Many Male Protagonists
I would like to read a male comic with a better emotional line, or a fantasy urban fairy tale. I hope there won't be too many female protagonists, just two or three. In some harem stories, the purpose of the female protagonist's existence is to expand the male protagonist's harem, like a vase for a tool man.
A Novel About Magic, Another World, and a Bit of Western Style
I am in a book shortage, please recommend it!
Japanese Light Novels, Campus Romance Novels Are in Urgent Need
If you want to watch something like "My Youthful Campus Life, I Don't Want Shura Field!" Book. Nowadays, I love light novels. Is there anything about the beautiful campus life of high school students? ‧⁺◟( ᵒ̴̶̥́ ·̫ ᵒ̴̶̣̥̀ )
Western Medieval Slavery, Lordships,
Looking For: Good Books About Western Fantasy/sword and Magic/noblesse/adventurer/warrior/mage
I would like to read a book similar to "Another World: Capturing the Female Knight at the Beginning".
Japanese Light Novels Don't Want a Single Female Protagonist
Recently, I have been searching for books on Tomato for a long time. Most of them are very short in word count. I would like to recommend some longer ones, preferably over a million words. I will also share some. "I will add them to it from time to time."
Magic, Academy, Western Style, Preferably a Small Noble with or Without a Harem.
Looking for Super Good Japanese Light Novels
Are There Any Japanese Light Novels?
I want to read a book like "This light novel is so awesome". Japanese light novels are suitable for leisure, healing, and love, but don't use knives!
Magic, Church, Sword and Sorcery, Girls
The protagonist is a church saint, so it doesn't matter whether she has a transformation or not.
ACG Light Novel/two-Dimensional Fanaticism
I want to read a book similar to "Why the World Will End Again (Vol.01-Vol.02)". Brother's adorable original ACG light novel! Don't use hot second creations (such as Naruto Pirates flying all over the sky) and write more light novels, Kanniang, Bengsan, Shaoqian,
Please Read Some Japanese Light Novels
I want to read a book like "Transfer to Tokyo and Meet Her with a Single Wing". Something like this or a light novel will do. I've read too many other novels on Tomato and it seems boring.

























































































This is a novel that insists on being updated for the sake of love. Even if you don't like it, please don't slander it, because it represents a sincere and pure persistence, which is something that most authors have lost under the influence of real interests.
It's very interesting to see the change in the male protagonist's mentality between the city in the past and the western fantasy now. The male protagonist does not have the golden finger of a supermodel, and the first-person perspective can be better brought into the plot, and the contradictions in the inner world of the male protagonist are exciting. I also like this novel very much. Now I am tired of reading stallion stories, heroine stories for free, invincible stories, routine stories, and mindless stories. This novel is obviously not one of them. There are many advantages. I write these to tell the author that there are really people who like to read the novels you write. Even if it is their own fantasy, please don't give up. This is also a loss for me. [Love]
It would be nice to update soon [face covering]. It's good to read, not the kind of mindless and enjoyable novel where you can't even remember a bit of the plot after reading Toilet Paper. The plot of the story is relatively well arranged, and the protagonist is the awkward character of the great teacher. When I read more than 4,000 pages, I suddenly got poisoned [face covering]. Let's not talk about the character's downfall. The protagonist keeps saying that he wants to stay away from the heroine of the original book, and he also wants to go up to it, and even kneels down to lick the rice plate in public. It's a completely meaningless plot. It was done just to satisfy the protagonist's lust for dog-licking and the princess's desire to be a knight. I hope you won't be fooled
Start low and go high, the more you look at the better, the beginning is as weak and fragile as the re0 hero, but there will be a change later [send heart] No, you can't watch it. The male protagonist is happy with being deflated, and he also likes the contrast. The worse the female protagonist treats him, the more he likes her. No, the princess acted in a drama and asked him to eat food from the ground, and he still enjoyed it [what] Whose galgame lies on the ground and eats food thrown by others, does he reply to the warlock? ? ? Tsundere? Contrast? There is no such thing, only personality humiliation
The hero's name is a win, at least it's a Western name, unlike other novels where the hero wears an Eastern name in a fantasy world like Journey to the West. The plot has a strong light novel flavor, so those who like light novels can enjoy it.
The writing style is very delicate, and the author's writing style can be called excellent. Whether it's the younger sister, the swordswoman, the princess, or the red-haired woman (she should be the heroine, definitely, that's what I guessed), all the characters are very vivid. Readers who like Japanese light novels will probably like this novel. But if you are not a fan of Japanese light novels, you may... The main character in particular still has the image and character of a classic Japanese male protagonist who is particularly Asashi. I can only say that the taste is authentic. This kind of mentality that I am shouldering everything is, how should I put it, not that it is bad. Mainly, if you read the whole story, the protagonist is always suffering, from the beginning to the end... From dating with close friends to dueling with Sword Princess, the protagonist has been causing trouble one after another, causing all kinds of pain to the people around him. Although he had good intentions, the Xueda teacher revealed that he ended up making things worse, and there was a sense of deja vu that the heroine of the female video was capable of causing trouble.
To be honest, the sense of immersion is really good. Is the setting a Western fantasy? First, a noble noble but with a bad reputation (his father wants to raise Gu is a typical example of centralization). He knows the malice from the family, and is not inherently like himself outside. Even though the malice is all over the body, it does not turn black. Instead, he longs for spiritual comfort and heart-to-heart communication. However, life is unreal, and sorrow and joy are intertwined. The loss or anger of one minute, and the calmness and tranquility of the next moment will all turn back into daily catharsis and fade into the flowing water. I don't want to do this, but I can only do this. I hope I can reach the right heart, save the right person, and save him when I am able. Make peace with yourself and want to say goodbye. To be realistic, no amount of mental description can be exaggerated.
Author, the book is really good! I originally just read it with the intention of giving it a try, but the more I read, the more I became fascinated. Really, the book is very good! Whatever you suggest to me, you can just write it according to your own plan. Also, I hope you can keep it updated! Thanks! It's been a long time since I've seen a book that appeals to my taste. There was one book that was discontinued, so I hope you can keep it updated. Of course, if you have your own business, forget it. Thank you!
Analyzing the entire novel, there is a rare first person. To be honest, it is well written and makes people feel immersed. It does not cause person confusion, which shows that the author's writing style is still a little bit. In terms of characters alone, it is easy to be unpopular. The protagonist is a rare and good person. This reminds me of the time when I read Japanese comics. Well, I also feel a little nostalgic to insist on reading this novel. My evaluation is: four stars cannot be more because the plot is relatively old-fashioned, but since it is a new book, I will give it five stars. [Blowing kiss]
Damn, this frequent change of perspective seems really uncomfortable, and it also drags out the chapters. Jobless reincarnations are not that frequent. They come from different angles. However, the subject matter is still quite good. I have read enough Shuangwen, and it is still interesting and growth-oriented. The novel may not be a good one, but it must have some good points (knives are also good), and there are really few of them so far. There is also this Zui Dun. It is very tiring to read a lot of text. Breaking it into paragraphs will really make the viewing experience much better. It's hundreds of thousands of words long, and it's hard to revise the front part. I can only give it as a reminder to those who are just reading it. If you can accept the problems of frequent changes of perspective, slow narrative pace, and lack of obvious excitement, you can really read this book. Many similar books nowadays like to write the male protagonist to be particularly awesome and take all aspects into consideration. There are enough such books. I really want to see a character with growth. It is rare to read a book that can make the character flesh and blood. True initial surface b, growth attribute s. It gets more and more interesting the further you go, I can't stop.
As the author said, it is a controversial novel. Personally, it is a masterpiece. I really didn't expect to see it on Tomato. It is very good in terms of plot characterization and psychological description. At least it is very good among the brainless novels in Tomato (not that the author is a brainless novel). It has been a long time since I encountered a novel in Tomato that can touch my heart several times. The male protagonist is really a little aggrieved to be honest. This is his advantage and disadvantage. It depends on the author's meaning. I wanted to write a grown-up male protagonist, but I seemed to think that the author seemed to be limited to his public opinion, which made the plot very repetitive. It seemed that the repetition was caused by others using public opinion to disgust the male protagonist. For example, when the protagonist was defeated for the first time, I thought it was particularly well written. The male protagonist's trust was in vain, and the plot suddenly changed. When everyone thought that the most vulnerable person was his father, the servant who suddenly trusted him suddenly stabbed him in the back. Just like the kingly protagonist, most male protagonists in novels will not be betrayed. Teammates backstabbed, even if they were backstabbed, nothing would happen, or they had expected it in advance, but their reason for beating the male protagonist was a bit far-fetched. Later, public opinion led to the male protagonist cheating his friends when unexpected. It was not bad, but it seems that the author started to fall into this trap from then on. Entering a closed loop, the male protagonist repeatedly wanders between good and bad public opinion. This is also reflected in the battle. The standard battle fails (this battle failure refers to always being unable to win at the beginning and adding just enough to assist, but it may be inevitable, after all) There are not many actions left for humans) and there are no new ways of fighting. I really didn't expect that the moves of a sister from a swordsman family can appear in several episodes. A good story is inseparable from touching people. The later this plot goes, the more bland I feel. It may be the author's bottleneck period or it may be my own problem. I feel that apart from the aspect of strength, the psychological growth and determination of each character, including the protagonist (including the beliefs of some supporting characters and their own background stories), are the easiest to impress readers. Finally, I hope that the author will get better and better as he writes more, and become a master of high-quality products as soon as possible.
The characters are flesh-and-blood, and some plots have major twists. I have read hundreds of books. I thought I could guess some of the plots in them, but the fact is that I can barely guess a little. The plot still interests me very much. I look forward to the follow-up. However, after reading the book reviews, the polarization is very serious, not ordinary.
Very good, very good novel. Lots, lots, lots of poison spots. Let's talk about a real book! The author is trying his best to portray a poor person who has been teased by fate. Everyone is portrayed with flesh and blood. The author desperately stirs up troubles and conflicts. The protagonist does not have enough strength to stir up cause and effect without authorization, fate plays tricks on people, and harms others and himself. Our blood and soul advocate the self-reliance of living beings, but the character of the protagonist is too Asasi and lacks animality according to the Three-Body Problem. Note: 1. Readers of this book please automatically kick the protagonist out of his or her own country, which will at least reduce half of the poisonous points. 2 Please ignore the author's setting of the protagonist traveling through time at the age of 20, which will reduce half of the poisonous points. 3. After reading this book, I enjoyed watching the darkening of the protagonist, and also enjoyed having the protagonist be treated more miserably.
I'll give it four stars. This is the first novel I've come across that's so toxic but I can bear to continue reading it. It's also the first novel I can't help but want to review. How can I put it, maybe because this kind of subject matter and writing method are too rare, so I can bear the pain and continue watching hahh A reminder before watching, first of all, don't believe the author's initial setting of the male protagonist traveling through time when he was twenty years old. In fact, he is a coward who traveled through time and space. Don't expect him to meet traditional male protagonist standards. Secondly, be sure not to assume the perspective of the male protagonist. Under these two prerequisites, the novel style of this work is still very interesting. Come on, author, the book is still very good, the style is really attractive. I hope that the subsequent plot will make the male protagonist's growth more obvious. At least he will be upgraded from a loser to the level of an ordinary person. The plot must be more thoughtful. There is no need to wait until later for the male protagonist to get rid of the label of a loser. The growth must be reflected after each event. This kind of growth flow is a truly beautiful growth flow.
A very pure Western fantasy light novel, in my opinion, there is nothing wrong with it, and the character creation and inner monologue are very good, which is rare among foreign persimmons. Two stars retracted. That's not how Nikkei writes in the first person. Just write the main character for the sake of the consistency of the plot. Occasionally, there is nothing wrong with changing the angle of view once or twice. This change is too outrageous. I clearly grasped the previous ones well. These few pictures are like being high.
Needless to say, this is my favorite novel to read as a Tomato. The early part is not very interesting, but I can understand it. The later story is more interesting. Although the author's writing style may not be very good, because of the change of perspective, the image of each person is well portrayed.
I read Chapter 40 first, and the pros and cons are obvious. The pros are that the subject matter is very light and the taste is very heavy. The cons are that the male protagonist is a bit too contradictory. It's not that it's not good. I can tell that the author wants to be unemployed, but he can't control it a little. However, after a million words, it should have improved a lot. I'll wait and see. It's not why the portrayal of the male protagonist has become particularly contradictory. The key is that in order to improve the younger sister's talent, he forcibly stepped on her and added the requirements for her to enter the school. I don't have to think about it to know that the male protagonist and the younger sister lost in the finals and then used this to build up their relationship. [Cover face][cover face]
It's good to watch, and it feels very engaging. The main storyline of the plot is the beginning of the sister chapter, but it can also be understood that it is to pave the way to solve the problem with Zero. Later, I saw that he joined the knights and started training. My personal guess is that the subsequent plot is after dealing with Xinika's problem, and Zero becomes stronger. But the development of the plot is undoubtedly slow. The big turning point is that after the fighting competition, it will skip to 2 years later. After receiving the senior chapter and officially entering the main story line, Jero began to have an emotional line to face his relationship with the heroine. Just like his current development is directly related to his mediocrity and the responsibility of being an elder brother and the heir of the family. The following plot is undoubtedly easy for people to imagine. I originally planned to talk about the plot, but suddenly I got emotional. Good stories are slowly updated every day, but the plot progress is slow and I can only slowly tune in [crying]
It's so beautiful that I just can't stop. The protagonist has no growth and a frustrated life. As an adult in his twenties, he doesn't have the IQ of an adult. He wants to live a normal life as a child but doesn't dare to change. He thinks everything should be like this and gives up after trying once. It's really, really addictive. Come and watch it.
How can I put it this way? I originally wanted to give it four stars, but I felt that a rating of 8 or so was a bit low. Generally speaking, although the male protagonist has many shortcomings that are difficult not to complain about, his gentleness towards everything and people is very consistent with my impression of the male protagonist in the isekai light novel. I can truly feel that he is a gentle person who wants to care for the beautiful things in the world and hates the ugly things. The perseverance in his expression really appeals to me, just like when I first watched Re:0. I think he has a personality like 486, and I agree with it very much. After all, for a sensitive person like me, gentleness is really beautiful, and the same goes for people who can persevere in gentleness.
I still have 48 chapters left to read, and I'm already planning to stop. I'll wait until the author has more time to read it in one go, and I'll share my thoughts. Let me talk about the conclusion first. If you like Japanese anime novels, that is, ACGN works, and like the campus genre, then I guarantee that you will like this book. I have been reading it for many days. At first, it was because I couldn't find any good Japanese light novels, so I came to Tomato to try my luck. It was the first time I read a novel on Tomato. I found the category First Person, and after searching for a while, I clicked on the author's novel. It's very good. I was completely attracted by the author's writing style. It's first person, Nikkei style, just right to complain, not brainless, the plot is reasonable, the male protagonist's thinking mode is a bit the same as mine (bushi) hahahahaha, if this novel is put on the Nikkei platform, I will definitely I think it was written by a Japanese writer. It's so comfortable to watch. Moreover, there are Chinese cultural elements and Internet slang running through it. Hahahaha, I have to say that it is very interesting and humorous, although it is also a bit dramatic. Hahaha, it's harmless. I have to look up information from time to time to understand the text when watching Riqing. Well, depending on what you say about this movie, there is quite a sense of familiarity in some parts, and there is no inexplicable awkwardness like other Chinese light novels... The plot is very good, beyond my expectation, and I can't accurately predict it. It is very interesting, the character design is reasonable, and the behavioral logic is impeccable. Maybe There are some flaws, but I didn't find much. The ability to complain is very broad. This kind of youthful love and campus joy harem tag can be said to be my favorite... It is really difficult to describe all aspects. In short, my appreciation for this book is beyond words. Let me reiterate, if you like this style, you can watch it well, but if you don't adapt to it, it really won't work... Everyone has their own preferences, don't force it, I saw a lot of dissatisfaction in the comment area, the above is just my personal opinion, everyone is welcome to exchange ٩(๑•̀ω•́๑)۶ Final PS: The author, please promise me that you will continue to update it. For my sake, please update it [Flame Fist Fujimoto Tree] (bushi)
A good novel about Xixuan, low-level martial arts, and romance, with a slow pace (I haven't gotten to the main theme so far, so I'll give it a try in my lifetime [face covering]) The author's narration method is unique. He likes to change the perspective of the characters, and the tone of the narration will also change according to the perspective. The advantage is that the characters are more three-dimensional, but the disadvantage is that it is too wordy. It would be okay if you can calm down, but in today's environment, few people can be so patient. It's not a harem story in the traditional sense. There's a blood-related sister, the swordsman's daughter of an enemy family, the justice princess of noble blood, the rich princess, and a free male and female maid (I don't know if it counts). So far, there has been no official announcement, but it is more or less interesting to the protagonist. If nothing else, he has not run away. The protagonist has a low self-esteem in his heart. He is estimated to be a 180-year-old otaku in his previous life (you can refer to Rudeus's previous life). He is not a genius, but he has a problem with posthumous judgment. He doesn't want to be related to the protagonist group, but he can't let go of the bond, so the protagonist has always been very conflicted. He wants to care for others, but also longs to be cared for by others, but is afraid of being cared for by others. He keeps saying no, but he will be soft-hearted when faced with it. He has been unwilling to face his own heart. Let's see if there is any progress in the future. The author is very serious about portraying each character. The protagonist, supporting characters, and villains all have their own characteristics. The child of destiny in this world has not yet come out. What will be the relationship with the protagonist after it comes out? What is the protagonist's attitude towards him? Now that most of the protagonists know the protagonist, what changes will happen to the protagonists after the Son of Luck appears? There is still a lot of suspense, and I am looking forward to it, but the update is too slow [smiles], keep up the good work! [Learned] The more I read, the more tired I become, there is too much nonsense [laughs awkwardly]
Summary: As someone who has also played many galgames. This book is very suitable to my taste, and it makes me want to write a novel from this perspective. I hope the author will keep up the good work! [Shy]
It was super, super good-looking. It was really different from other novels. I burst into tears three times in one hour, although it had something to do with my sensitivity. But what the author wrote is really good In the first episode, the male protagonist was captured. When she came back, her sister wanted to comfort her, but there was already a place in her arms. This made me cry. The second time the Tok family couldn't find any information, hey, the yandere sister [Petrochemical] The third time the male protagonist was confessed by a girl who really liked him, and finally couldn't bear it anymore, alas, yandere sister God, this is my review of this book. Generally speaking, book reviews should reflect the advantages and disadvantages of the book, but I see that many people say there are many shortcomings. Your original organizational skills are almost zero. I can only say that unless you don't like light novels, you must not miss this book. In my opinion, this book has many "poisonous points". For example, I actually don't like romances with harems, and the main character is not very strong. But he can. I know that those requests are for general novels, not for novels that I really like. This book leaves suspense in twists and chapters. It can be said that there are three chapters for you, one big one. It is really a joy to read.
It took me three days to read this book, and the overall feeling was very good. The author obviously has a deep understanding of the "gay mother" type of narrative technique. The reading experience is indeed like playing a high-quality game, with a strong sense of substitution. There are some very interesting designs in the book, such as the IF line branch that appeared in the early stage. This interactive plot choice makes the story more attractive, but it is a pity that it was not continued in the later stage. On the whole, the plot logic of the novel is clear, the rhythm is well grasped, and the character creation is relatively three-dimensional. The reading process is very smooth, just like watching a well-made Japanese different world animation, with a strong visual sense. All in all, this is a highly recommended work, especially for readers who like this kind of subject matter.
The plot is not very good, but the relationship with the heroine is very delicate. If the plot can be improved, it will be a good work. Not recommended for consumption
I have some free time these days, so I came to read novels. I stayed up late and read them for several days. This novel seemed to be something I had put on my bookshelf before but hadn't read. Originally I was reading 🍍, but 🍍 I was short of books, so I suddenly thought of 🍅, so I downloaded 🍅 and read it again. I may have a bad impression of this novel, so let's just say it bluntly, yes It was a bit painful, but I still persisted in reading it. Don't tell me that since you feel pain, why do you continue to read it? This also shows that this novel has something that attracts me, otherwise I would definitely not be able to persist. The first point is the first-person perspective. This book adopts this form which is quite new to me. Many people may even read novels from the third-person perspective like me. The first-person perspective has an obvious advantage, that is, the delicate description of the characters. This method makes the characters in the novel more three-dimensional and vivid, which will greatly improve the quality of the novel. For example, I like the heroine (currently released). Yumina actually has some problems, but many people are not like that. I care, because the problem I mentioned is a problem with the text. To be honest, if you want me to go back and read it, it is really a bit difficult. Sorry, maybe I pay too much attention to details and have too high language requirements. I understand the general meaning. Maybe the author did not pay attention when coding. The author also has his own life and may not have the energy to pay attention to it when he is tired. This affects my perception of her to a certain extent. Generally speaking, it is okay, so don't worry about it. The main point here is to talk about the perspective of the novel and the characters. Another advantage is the extremely high sense of immersion. This novel constantly switches perspectives, and you will inadvertently assume the role of the main perspective of the character. You will unconsciously enter the point of view of the novel, which plays a guiding role. Many people are not very good at empathizing when reading novels. The first person solves this problem very well. Then there are the shortcomings. The first-person shortcoming is also very obvious (this shortcoming has a premise). If there is a key character in your novel that is not well portrayed, then it will be very uncomfortable to read the novel. The point that makes me uncomfortable can be seen from what I said earlier that I like the heroine. It is not that the heroine has a problem, so I won't go into details here. Let's talk about the perspective. This shortcoming (poor description of a key character) will make people feel uncomfortable to watch, which will lead to controversy, or to put it in a more understandable way, it is a poisonous point. Now that the poisonous point has occurred, it goes without saying that there is a problem. The problem is that the character has a sense of separation. You will feel that he/she is a bit schizophrenic, as if he/she suddenly changed and behaved in a way that the original character should not have done. Chapter 1 One-person perspective magnifies this problem infinitely, because the first-person perspective gives more verbal descriptions, which makes it easier for the character to have explosive points (poisonous points). Everyone knows that talking more is not a good thing. Every word and action will affect others' judgment of ourselves. Many people will be attracted by third-person narration. After all, third-person narration has the most words and is used in various parts of the novel, such as character actions, expressions, and narration. It will even help you analyze the plot. Combined with the narration, you can also deduce the subsequent plot. The narration is more like the author. Specifically, it can be understood as the character who injects the author's emotional tendencies. Therefore, we will naturally be attracted by the narration that takes up a lot of space. The first-person reader does not have the help of the narration. At this time, the reader's focus will be on the verbal description that replaces the narration. The character's psychology is expressed through language. If you use language Some problems will be very uncomfortable for readers. After all, the space occupied is large, and there will naturally be more focus. If there is a problem with the character, the reader will not understand the narration, but will think that there is a problem with the character creation. After all, the evaluation of the other person when you talk about something with a person is different from the degree of influence he has on something when you understand it through a third person. To put it simply, it is a direct and indirect problem. Another shortcoming is that the first person (of this novel) makes you feel that something happened. Switching between different perspectives to understand and evaluate the event makes people sigh and read another chapter (and it seems that they have not read it). This makes the progress of the novel particularly slow. Readers may easily become tired from reading, and there is nothing that can be done about it. The second point is about the characters. I think the description of the heroine is very exciting. I have a very good impression of the four heroines that have appeared. Many people may not like the protagonist sister Leah, but I don't. Many people continue to take on the role and more or less resonate with the character. But which character do you prefer? Needless to say, it is the male protagonist. This makes readers judge other characters more based on the protagonist. Leah's behavioral logic is very simple. The protagonist is the main character, herself is the supplement, and the others are not counted. It is not as important as the first two. Leah knows the protagonist's father. (I typed so many words, but I can't remember his father's name. I have already retyped part of it because I went to return Happy New Year in the middle of the way, but when I came back, it was gone! It was so hard to type! Fortunately, I didn't type too much at that time😭, so I didn't want to quit and read it again. This name is really difficult to remember, and my memory is too bad) In order to protect the protagonist from being regarded as a victim by his father, he chooses to be the heir and follow his father. The other heroines acting as protagonists are just teasing the protagonist (I don't know how to describe it, you know). Leah is different. It is easy to feel that she is the kind of person who will do whatever it takes to get the protagonist (forget it, I give up, my brain capacity is not enough, I can't describe it, it's not the usual unscrupulous method, I have been fighting for two hours, I am too tired), and you can figure it out based on her personality and the understanding mentioned above. It's important to talk about the male protagonist. The male protagonist is the reason why I suffered from reading this novel. I read the comments and all said that the male protagonist has problems. It is indeed a big problem. I feel that the protagonist's previous life was really in vain. I don't care how fvv you have been in the past, but you give me the feeling that you only inherited the values formed in the previous life and nothing else. I am very curious, did he really go to school? Although there is a lot of knowledge taught in school that you generally don't need, but it's not completely unusable, right? You can say that the male protagonist is psychologically immature and can't stand oysters. I can understand your feeling of powerlessness when you are desperate. After all, big problems will occur if you are not careful. I can also understand that even if you learn knowledge, you may not be able to apply it (although it is unlikely, the way of thinking of modern people tells you how to identify things, etc.).
The writing is pretty good, but the plot is a bit draggy. With 1.7 Million words, you are still just 13 years old, and to be honest, this age is not reflected very much. In fact, it doesn't feel inconsistent to say that you are 17 or 18 years old. But overall quite satisfied.
This kind of shrimp-headed protagonist is really suitable for Niqing, but I still can't stand it personally. I would give it a five-star rating and recommend it to others [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]
The author's writing style is really delicate, and the character creation is also outstanding (mainly because it appeals to me). It is better than 99% of Western fantasy novels written by Tomato. Especially the growth process of the male protagonist is really natural (it is still acceptable to be a little flat in the early stage). The plot has been a bit dull recently, that is, my sister has appeared. The scene is interesting, and I hope that the appearance of the original male protagonist will be more exciting in the future. As for the update speed, up to now, I can understand that the author strives for excellence to ensure the quality of the novel, and I also support the writing to maintain its own rhythm. As long as the plot is exciting and the characters are vivid, there is no harm in it. Finally, I still want to say something sincerely: author nb! Please stick to it.