Daming Jinyi: Guarding the Goal for the White-Haired Girl at the Beginning

It's a good book with good writing. The plot at the beginning is very exciting, with quick upgrades and decisive killings. However, it becomes dull later on. For example, when the demon cult attacks the imperial city and the protagonist kills the Mongolian prince, the section is too long. This should be the climax. It is not recommended to intersperse other plots in the middle. This will make it too busy. It is more enjoyable to read it in one sitting. And Nangong Chan, either the woman was written to death directly, or the woman had no murderous intentions towards the protagonist when she was admitted to the harem. Otherwise, she wanted to be admitted into the harem, but she also wanted to kill the protagonist, and she was rescued when the protagonist wanted to kill her. It was a bit unpleasant. I personally didn't like this plot. The latter part was a bit overwhelming. I think at least the thirty-five chapters will elevate it to a higher level. After all, this book is not a mortal style, but a genius and invincible style. In the end, the author had a hard time coding. I hope the protagonist can have more harems. It's still very interesting. Come on💪

Why do you feel that there is a bit of the feeling of the game Yanyujianghu in it? [Exploration]

Not bad, come on, author! Even if dark clouds can cover the sun, the haze is only for a moment

The names of the protagonist and supporting characters should be based on the protagonist from Where the Monster Goes?

The smell of misty rivers and lakes, old man

Good-looking, good-looking, good-looking

Can you do 10 chapters a day? Please.

This book is quite good. I have read a novel before, and the protagonist is also named Wang Jiulin. That book is too old, many years ago, and I have forgotten the general content of it, but I vaguely remember that the background seems to be the Republic of China period. There are monsters and ghosts in the Republic of China fiction. I don't know if it is the same author.

Very well written, very interesting Come on, author, don't care what others say, I think your writing is very good.

My grass is actually very good-looking, but I haven't watched it for a month and stopped updating it [face covering]

The book is very good, but it's a pity that I couldn't read the complete ending. But I also thank the author for reading this good book when there are not many books to read now.

Good-looking is good-looking

I think it's pretty good, but it's a pity that it's unfinished because some people's comments made the author ineffective.

The plot is smooth, the fighting is exciting, and the characters are delicate. I think it is a masterpiece.

The killing is decisive and the characters have distinct personalities. It is worth recommending...

I think the writing is good. If you read it as a cool novel, it's still good. The protagonist is basically invincible all the way, and the plot is quite colorful.

Good looking, It's really pretty. Update soon [cry][cry]

Good-looking, really good-looking

Found another good book

Good looking love to watch More

Books worth reading

Come on, come on, come on

It's beautiful, but the author shouldn't go into the palace.

Good, but the rating is a bit low

Very nice, recommended

Very exciting and beautiful

Come on, author. Not enough!

Not bad, a piece of food and grass that you can watch

I didn't want to read the book when I saw the title, but I took a look at it because of the book shortage today. I didn't expect it to be good, but I have to say that the author is a bad namer. This article has little to do with the title of the book. It's too improvised! !

A very nice book